IS IT Hate Or Love CHAPTER 21 Page 144 ~ THREAD 1 CLOSE - Page 93

this part is awesome as always you wrote you write everything so beautifully i have no words to praise you i am speechless and hotness is hard to handle

Every word was beautifully written . Loved reading it. Really hot .please PM me the while update .
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Omg ! This chapter was so awesome ! 👏
I'm speechless 😳 !!
U write so brilliantly 🤗
Though I'm only 13 ,but I read it 😛
Kya karu your updates are so fantastic that I can't stop myself from reading it ! 👍🏼
Really it is a so brilliant that I can't express it in words...⭐️

awaum written i just love it to d core its damn passionate hot kudoss to u
plz pm me the older version i want dat passionate SR. plzzz

Originally posted by: ramyadwarampudi

u don't believe it...but I tell u. I had read all chapters at one go...kal puri raat nightout kiya...it was fantatic...plz write more and more...by the way I am 20+😉...pm me the original verion yaar...

OMG😲😲😲 SHOCKED !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ENTIRE STORY 20 LONG CHAPTER IN ONE NIGHT😊😊😊 PURI RAAT NIGHTOUT... I AM SO HAPPY WHEN SOME ONE SAYS THEY HAVE ENTIRE STORY TOGETHER...MUST BE FUN...I ENVY YOU...U READ ENTIRE STORY 20 CHAPTERS...IT'S HARD TO DIGETST... MY CHAPTERS ARE PRETTY LONG...👏👏👏 THANK U FOR READING ENTIRE STORY😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

updated review !!! The chap was 😳 😳😳😳😳😳😳☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

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Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Yaar Bhavini you changed to a lighter version already ??? 😲

Damn I've missed it ... And I thought you said you'll change it after 3 days ... 😭😭😭

Anyways still gonna review it for you .. I mean how can I miss reviewing this for one of my fav writer huh ...😛😆

omg !!!!!!! fav writer That's too much...😳so sweet😳...

Firstly as usual I'm gonna say that you're such a brilliant , awesome , fantastic writer !!!!

thank u so much😳

Secondly as always juz gotta say that I love the way you describe the nature and Akdha's surroundings ...

Romance beautiful surrounding is necessary...I am glad u enjoy it while reading..

Third yeah the cute , sweet , flirty Akdha is back !!!! 😆

😆my naughty jallu

The part where Akdha were pouring out their feelings and clearing their MU was really briliantly written ... 👏👏👏

It brought tears to my eyes ... You always make me cry while reading you story ... In a good way of course ...

OMG...THIS IS REALLLY BIG COMMENTS...WHEN U SAY I AM ABLE TO BRING TEARS IN MY READERS EYES...OMG...FEEL GOOD😆

And wow the SR was HOT that it made me go that I had to calm myself

I really loved how you described Jodha's fears ... And the way Jalal assured her that he loves her and he'll never hurt was juz a 'wow' moment for me ...

And gotta say the way he took off her jewelleries were making me go

After coming to the end of this chapter I was like 'What it's over ???!!! No I want more !!! I don't want it to end here ... '

I AM BLUSHING SO MUCH...READING MY OWN CHAPTER...OOPS SORRY YOU HAVE NOT READ ORIGINAL VERSION...THIS VERSION IS NOTHING COMPARE TO ORIGINAL...I HAVE NO IDEA HOW I WROTE IT...I AM STILL SHOCKED AT MYSELF...I COULD WRITE THIS MUCH😳😳😳😳

Anyways I'm really excited for the next chapter can't wait to read it ...

Keep up the good work dear !!! 👍🏼

Oh btw plz pm me the uhm hotter version plz ...

I HAVE PM...YOU HOTTER VERSION😆 PM ME OR COMMENT WHAT DO YOU THING

Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vow what a superb awesome creative comment...Rula diya muje

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

this part is awesome as always you wrote you write everything so beautifully i have no words to praise you i am speechless and hotness is hard to handle

OMG !!!! THANK GOD YOU NOT READ THE ORIGINAL VERSION...THANK U SO MUCH !!!!! I AM GLAD U LIKE CHAPTER

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

SANYA.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!VOW SUPER HOT COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE IT... THANKS FOR THIS SUPER DUPER HOT AWESOME COMMENT

Great one...