Originally posted by: Az3003
Hey Bhavini Di!! I missed you and this FF so0o0o0o much!! Thank you so much for sending me the links to chapters I haven't read. I can't read all of them at once because I have a lot of FFs to catch up on. I also feel that your story is so mind-blowingly amazing that it doesn't deserve one overall review from me for all the chapters I have missed so I will review each chapter as I read it because every chapter is so AWESOME that it deserves its own review!! This review is for Chapter 11. (Ya I know I'm very behind😆) This chapter was charging with sexual and romantic tension between Jalal and Jodha and you have captured their emotions and their desires to perfection Di!! ⭐️ I was riveted the whole time I read and could not take my eyes off from the beautiful words of this post.😛You nailed it Di. Whenever Jalal flirted with Jodha and Jodha gave him a witty response, their chemistry just bubbled over and I wanted to yell at Jalal "h just kiss her already! You know you want to! We all want you to!!'That's the sign of an amazing author Di... and you are truly one in a million. I felt Jodha's pain when she cried about Jalal's words. My heart went out to her at that point and you wrote it and captured her broken heart with magnificence👏 Kudos Di👏 I loved this line...there was storm inside of her and outside in the sky. She suddenly felt like nothing left in her life, she was all alone again.
It was poetic genius Di!! It really spoke to me... Overall... You deserve and applause👏👏👏👏👏👏
And a huge salute from me with a heartfelt thank you hug for giving us this amazing story!!!🤗
I'll read more and review soon Di!! I'm loving this story to bits!!❤️
Lotsa Love
Azra👏
FINALLY MOST AWAITED ... COMMENTS... I WAS WAITING FOR THIS REVIEW FOR TWO MONTHS😃😃😃
GURU JI THANK U VERY MUCH FOR AWSOME SUBPERB COMMENT...AAPKI SHISYA KO RULA DIYA😭😭
AFTER READING YOUR UPDATE SAR STORM HAWA HO GAYE...LOL😆
SERIOUSLY!!! I AM SO BLESSED U AND NANU BOTH MY FAVOURITE WRITER READ MY TUFU TI ENGLISH WALI STORY... AND APPRECIATE IT...ACTUALLY ENJOY IT...
I DON'T MIND TAKING A PRAISE FORM AN AMAZING WRITER... AZ AFTER READING YOUR REVIEW I HAVE READ THAT CHAPTER AGAIN... AND I ALSO ENJOYED IT...ATLEAST MERI TUTI FUTI ENGLISH THODI IMPROVE HUI HAI LOL😆
NEXT TWO CHAPTERS ARE MY MOST FAVOURITE IN ENTIRE STORY...
AKDHA IS ALL ABOUT ROMANCE... I AM GLAD U LIKE THEIR NOK JOK AND CHEMISTRY...😳
JALAL DIDN'T WANTED TO BE PASSIONATE.. IN KISSING... JODHA IS CHATAK ... NEVER KNOW... EK UTHAKE CHATA LAGA DIYA TO... VESE MY JALLU IS SMART TOO... ISS LIYE SIMPLE KISS ME MAN GAYA😆
THANK U SO MUCH ... HOOREY AZ (GURUJI) IS BACK😆
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