Originally posted by: ashpat
OH MY GOSH!!!! this was sooo hot, sexy, sensuous and worth the wait!!!!
first ofall, i liked how jodha shared that she trusts him and loves him a lot and accepted the fact that he has other wives etc. It was nice to cwhen jalal said that there is nothing in life without u and then fianlly their love making.
it was so touching to c how jalal was sensitive and caring about his approach and said he will stop if it hurts her and loved it when jodha went wild on him. u should not be scared about this sensual chapter. U had done a marvellous job describing in details andi could totally imagine it.
don't change it to lighter version, plzzz. thx for hot, sensual update. thx for pm.
MY DEAR AYAESHA... I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER...I DO AGREE...IT WAS SO HOTTT...I EVEN DIDN'T REALIZE WHILE WRITING ...I WENT TOOO FAR...
FINALLY...JODHA SHOWED HER TRUST...YES JUST TO SHOW THAT I DRAGGED TWO MORE CHAPTER😆 BUT NOW I EVEN FEEL...SHE REALLY TRUST HIM... AND LOVE HIM... AND JALAL...IS COMPLELTLY GONE CASE...HE TRUALLY AMAZING ...
I GLAD YOU LIKE CARING JALAL...THANKS U!!!!!!
I AM SORRY BUT I HAVE CHANGE THIS VERSION...JUST BECAUSE WE HAVE SOMANY READERS WHO ARE UNDER AGE...AND THEY READ THIS FF REGULAR... I WILL PM IF YOU WANT TO READ IT AGAIN...JUST PM😃
I AM REALLY TOUCHED WITH YOUR SUPER COMMENT!!!!! YOU ARE ALWAYS HONEST WITH YOUR OPINION...THAT IS THE REASON I ALWAYS LIKE TO SEE YOUR COMMENT😃😃😃
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
Fan Fictions
676