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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: Sanya..25

SANYA.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!VOW SUPER HOT COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE IT... THANKS FOR THIS SUPER DUPER HOT AWESOME COMMENT

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: AkDha_Fanatic
MashaAllah ... Perfect Extreme Sensual Update with immense romance 😳
Loved it 😊 Well done 😳

I'm 18 😳 and I read it (NO RULE BREAKING HONEY😆)

I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE UR COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE WORD PERFECT... EXTREME... AND SENSUAL WITH THAT IMMENSE ROMANCE ...SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS FOR THIS AWESOME COMMENT! LOL ...18+ BIRTH CERTIFICATE PLEASE😆

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: daisydee425
amazing😳

THANKS!!!!! I AM GLAD U LIKE IT😊

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: 11110
gr8
no doubt in saying that it was the best SR i have read
nd i will appreciate it 👏
in my opinion forget about its lighter version and update
ch21 😉 👍🏼

OMG!!!!!! VOW...THIS IS A REALLY AWESOME COMPLIMENT!!!! BEST SR SORRY I HAVE CHANGE IT TO LIGHTER VERSION!!!! BUT IF YOU WANT PREVIOUS VERSION JUST PM ME...😃

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crazy4pari

@crazy4pari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#915

u don't believe it...but I tell u. I had read all chapters at one go...kal puri raat nightout kiya...it was fantatic...plz write more and more...by the way I am 20+😉...pm me the original verion yaar...

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#916

Originally posted by: shreya931
haiii raam!!!!!!!!!!
i m dead...😉😆😆
yar itna hottt update jhil hi ni rha mjhse to...😲😲maar daalaaa...😉😆😆seriously..but what an super dooper hit chappy...👏👏nd in addition when i was reading it there was lightning outside nd i could feel it from my window...mtlb i have no words to describe ur writing...u r just a fabulous,fantastic.. writer. nd literally...i loved it...😳😳
a bucket of thanks to u for it nd don't change it..well if u then it vl create probs to others..i have saved it so when i vl b in mood again..i vl read it😉😉
thanx again bhavu darling..❤️nd u have done a marvellous job..👏👏👏

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CREATIVE SHREYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THODI TRAINING MUJE BHI DE!!!😆 I AM SO IMPRESS WITH YOU COMMENT AND ART...DIL KO KHUSH KAR DIYA...VOW...LIGHTING😉 YAAR THIS IS THE BEST COMMENT!!!! YOU HAVE SAVED IT... AND YOU WILL READ IT OVER AND OVER😆

SHRYA ...I REALLY LOVE YOU FOR THIS COMMNET!!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW NERVOUS I WAS POSTING THIS CHAPTER... I NEVER EVER WROTE ANY SENSUAL CHAPTER... I WANTED PASSIONATE AND ROMANTIC...I AM GLAD U FELT IT THAT WAY,...

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#917

updated review !!! The chap was 😳 😳😳😳😳😳😳☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CREATIVE SHREYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THODI TRAINING MUJE BHI DE!!!😆 I AM SO IMPRESS WITH YOU COMMENT AND ART...DIL KO KHUSH KAR DIYA...VOW...LIGHTING😉 YAAR THIS IS THE BEST COMMENT!!!! YOU HAVE SAVED IT... AND YOU WILL READ IT OVER AND OVER😆

SHRYA ...I REALLY LOVE YOU FOR THIS COMMNET!!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW NERVOUS I WAS POSTING THIS CHAPTER... I NEVER EVER WROTE ANY SENSUAL CHAPTER... I WANTED PASSIONATE AND ROMANTIC...I AM GLAD U FELT IT THAT WAY,...

Shreya Superb Review !! 😆

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#919

Yaar Bhavini you changed to a lighter version already ??? 😲

Damn I've missed it ... And I thought you said you'll change it after 3 days ... 😭😭😭

Anyways still gonna review it for you .. I mean how can I miss reviewing this for one of my fav writer huh ...😛😆

Firstly as usual I'm gonna say that you're such a brilliant , awesome , fantastic writer !!!!

Secondly as always juz gotta say that I love the way you describe the nature and Akdha's surroundings ...

Third yeah the cute , sweet , flirty Akdha is back !!!! 😆

The part where Akdha were pouring out their feelings and clearing their MU was really briliantly written ... 👏👏👏

It brought tears to my eyes ... You always make me cry while reading you story ... In a good way of course ...

And wow the SR was HOT that it made me go that I had to calm myself

I really loved how you described Jodha's fears ... And the way Jalal assured her that he loves her and he'll never hurt was juz a 'wow' moment for me ...

And gotta say the way he took off her jewelleries were making me go

After coming to the end of this chapter I was like 'What it's over ???!!! No I want more !!! I don't want it to end here ... '

Anyways I'm really excited for the next chapter can't wait to read it ...

Keep up the good work dear !!! 👍🏼

Oh btw plz pm me the uhm hotter version plz ... 😳

Edited by VincyAnne - 11 years ago

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#920

😃QUOTE=PrincessNancy]

Oh MY GoD !!😲 ☺️ 😲 oh My Godd !!😲 ☺️ 😲 * Fainted *☺️ *Dead*☺️ *Blushing *☺️ ❤️

I am SPEECHLESS❤️ !!!👏⭐️👏⭐️ Master Stroke !!👏👏👏 Bhavs di.. Take a Bow !❤️! You have done it with immense excellence !!☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️
Loved it to CORE !! I dont have words,. I am speechless.. Oh God ! I am blushing so hard !☺️😳☺️😳☺️❤️
What Passion!😳 ❤️ 😳WHat sensation!😳 ❤️ 😳What Love !😳❤️ 😳 What Romance !😳 ❤️ What Feelings.. WOW !!!😳 ⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️
How did you do this? Gawdd!!☺️☺️ ❤️I am lost in AkDhaland.. By far, one of the bestest chaps ever..☺️☺️❤️
You have got the mastery of writing pain.😭. emotions.😃 .feelings❤️ ..love❤️ and romance! ☺️❤️
I am just so overwhelmed❤️ and touched with each and every chapter of this master story..But this chap blew me away!☺️ ❤️ ☺️
I am just not able to come out from this lovely master piece.. ☺️☺️😳 ❤️
You have Nailed it Di 👏👏 .. It was written with absolute brilliance and sheer excellence...☺️❤️☺️
You know,.This is just a perfect story to show their journey from hardships..hatred..to love n romance n trust!😳❤️
The way you portrayed Jo's fear n ja asking hert to trust him was Awww moment!❤️ Such a lovely master piece this is!😳👏⭐️
This chap has left me into a wonderland of AkDha..n I am unable to come out of it..
Bhavs di I love you so much for this beautiful storyline ❤️ ..Seriously..Your writing leaves me in a romantic land..where everything is
full of genuine love and feelings..❤️🤗❤️ You are a brilliant fantastic writer di.. I bow down to you for this lovely long romantic marvellous
sensous sexy chap!😳 👏 ☺️ 🤗
DOnt you dare change it to lighter version!😡 😛 We are more than delighted and happy to read this! And its totally suitable !😳 😃 🤗
Please do not change it! I edited my OS coz it was me..but I wont tolerate anyone reporting this Marvelllous and beyond the words chap!😡 😳 😃 🤗
Ok my love sweetheart di..Everyone love you ! DOnt give a damn to harsh criticisers! 😳 😳 😳 🤗
It was all too dreamy and romantic chap..finally Jo Ja are one!☺️☺️ Loved it to CORE !! Update plzz!!!☺️☺️ 🤗

I'll have to read this again and again till I go insane in love of AkDha! 😛😆🤗

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 KHUSHI KE AASO...😭😭😭😭

TUNE TO MUJE SACHHI ME SENTI KAR DIYA... WOWWW WHAT COMMENTS!!!!!!! TUNE SACHHI ME MUJE SPEECHLESS... KAR DIYA...

LOVE U ...NANCY ROCK STAR⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

WHEN I SEE YOUR COMMENT!!!! I FEEL SO PROUD OF MYSELF😳😳😳... I AM SO LUCKY ... U LOVE ME AND MY STORY... U ARE LIKE MY LITTLE SIS...BEST FRIEND😃😃😃

YAAR TELL U THE TRUTH... THIS CHAPTER IS MY MOST FAVOURITE CHAPTER...I LOVED IT...I READ ENTRIE CHAPTER AGAIN... BLUSHED...SO MUCH... I HAVE NO IDEA HOW I WROTE IT BUT I KNOW IT'S TOO SEXY AND...I LOVE IT...I ALSO FEEL LIKE READING IT AGAIN...WHEN I WAS WRITING THIS CHAPTER... I WROTE IN ONE STROK AND I THINK THIS IS ALLL AKDHA... AKDHA HAS CAPTURE MY MIND😆 ACTUALLY JALAL😉...

I KNOW YOU LOVE MY STORY BUT STILL AGAIN AND AGAIN I WANT TO SAY THANK U SO MUCH...U ARE MY BEST SUPPORT... YOU HAVE ENCOURAGE ME EVERY CHAPTER FROM BEGINNING...YOU HAVE READ MY STORY FROM BEGINING AND DIDN'T MISS ANY CHAPTER... IT IS A BIG COMPLIMENT ITSELF... YOU ARE SUCH A SWEET HEART...AND GREAT AMAZING ROCKSTAR WRITER😃