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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
oh my God di! My oh my!! Okay I firstly need time to take relax... To breathe.. My cheeks are all warm now... Okay let me start... So... Here it goes... I Love You Bhavi di You fulfilled your promise.. You pleased me with this hot and sensual update.. 👏 I'm short of words.. But I must not stop... You deserve all the appreciation in the world for writing this amazing update.. The sensual update... I must say that this is the most hot and sensual update I have ever read on Indian Forum. I am do much happy with this update... I am in love with this FF ❤️ even before I was in love but right after this update my love for this update had tripled and I am proud to be ur friend di... Ur Jodha.. This sharriffuddin here is a very good writer.. 😆Thid is the best update u have given to us and I now that you would give more twists and turns in this FFs of urs. You got me hanging to this FF. Everyday I come here to see how many likes you have gotten ❤️ 🤗 Now let's come to the main part.. The story part. Jodha had explained her heart out to Jalal and I'm glad to see that Jalal understood her.. Isn't this called true love?? To trust and listen out to your loved ones. Jodha and Jalal are officially in love and now after facing alot of hardships they have finally reached the ultimate peak of their relationship. This step would make their love strengthen. I am surprised to see this desire filled Jodha. Even in the previous updates I had stated that I was shocked but this time u left me even more surprised. Oh! How much I wish that The serial Jodha is also like this. She is inexperienced but still she seemed like an expert. She drove Jalal mad.. Made for her.. Crazy in desire..The kisses, the hugs, the love,the care,the sensuality, everything here was brilliantly written... How much I wish to run to you this very moment and hug you tightly.. I'm wondering what would Mahamanga and Ruqqaiya do after getting to know about the hot steamy moments Ja-Jo shared.. Ruqqaiya must be burning in jealousy and Mahamanga.. No words for her... So my Favourite part in this update was when Jalal carried Jodha to the cottage.. Hayye I can't say anything about that anymore.. I'm blushing heavily..
"Her tears came out with his gentle approach towards her... He wipes her tears with care and love...
Then he again cupped her face with care and get close to her soft lips..."
This part was so beautiful.. I feel like reading this update on and on.. Di you have changed it to a lighter version?? Not to worry I saved it up in the notes and if ever you need the part u can always pm me 😉 😉 😆 believe me! I have saved it up in my notes.. So whenever I miss Akdha I can read this part of urs.. I officially declare that this is in my top 3 Favourite FFs on Akdha ❤️
The precap ❤️ really excited to know what will happen after the SR.. More SR?? Hahahahhahahahha... ❤️
Now coming to the deal we had.. I will certainly update a SR update but I don't think it would be up to the mark. It can't match ur one.. Your one is the best.. Get ready for the faltu SR update of mine... I will update it on 28th January.. The SR update...
Continue ASAP! Love you di 🤗
MY LOVELY SWEETY TANI!!!!! LOVE U SWEETY FOR THIS HEART WARMING...AMAZING...SUPERB COMMENT!!!!!!!
CHIPPUDIN KHSH HUA...JODHA BEGUM...EK CHUMMA TO BANTA HAI...😆😆😆
YAAR I HAVE NO WORDS LEFT OF APPRECIATION...When I started this story...I was so scared... Nanzy AZ supported me amazing along with pallavi, you, sofia, shreshtha...many more...
Seriously I always like numbers... that's why I am an accountant...language was always weakest... I never thought in my dream I could write... I know I am not an amazing writer but I know for sure that I really enjoy writing...I just love it... I use to wrote poems... and never showed it to anyone... I thought people will laugh at me... but I am glad you all enjoy this story... and appreciated it...
Tani when I read comment from You...Nanu...Pallu...Az...all proficient writer.. I feel so proud...I am glad I am part of IF and JJ forum... I have received so much love here... Thank u
Your comment really touch...specially u said...u visit every day just to see howmany likes...sacchi me tune muje rula diay😭😭😭...Yaar itna pyar ...sacchi me...U all are amazing...I am blessed to know you all...SO SWEET!!!!!!!😃😃😃
I AM SO GLAD U LIKE THIS SENSUAL CHAPTER... THIS IS MY FAVOURITE CHAPTER OUT OF ENTIRE FF... FINALLY THEY GONE THROUGH ALL THE FACE OF THEIR REALATIONSHIP... HATE...TRUST...LOVE...ROMMANCE...FINALLY THEY BECAME ONE...
I AM GLAD YOU HAVE READ OLDER VERSION... THAT IS MY FAVOURITE... CURRENT VERSION IS NOT THAT INTENSE😉
CAN'T WAIT TO WRITE NEXT CHAPTER SWEETY... I AM REALLY STUCK UP WITH LOT OF WORK TILL 22ND... SOON MANY TWIST AND TURNS WILL SEE... MAHAM...RUKU KO RULANA BAKI HAI ABHI... AFTER THIS SR...ANOTHER SR...IF I DO THAT GUTTER MIND KA AWARD MERA PAKKA😆
THANK U SO SO SO MUCH FOR LOTS OF ENCOURAGEMENT THROUGH OUT ALL THE CHPATERS😃😃😃
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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