IS IT Hate Or Love CHAPTER 21 Page 144 ~ THREAD 1 CLOSE - Page 90

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

nice chap😊

heheeheh...surprise...😃😉😆

abe super fantastic, mindblowing, mindblasting, sensual, seductive, passionate...👏

breathtaking chapter tha...👏⭐️

arz kiya hai...😳

"tu chiz badi hai mast mast...tu chiz badi hai mast..."😃😉

literally bhavu...i can't tell u what it was...👏👏

chal...shuru se shuru karti hu...😊

first worried jodha reached to jallu...who was completly devastated...😭

dunno but somewhere i felt that abdul is going to give her a clue like that ...😛

as i remembered the previous scene...where he told her that whenever he is upset or happy...😳

he love to go to that place...😃

ok...then the manaofying part...😳

i loved the way jodha said that she dint want to know any reason...yet he told her everything...😳⭐️

oh gosh,,,,they trust each other so much...😳😳

then the cute little nok jhok...we have got a new name for jodha eventually...👏👏😳

"junglee billi..."...hehe...super cute scene...when she bite on his hand...😆😉

finally...coming to the SR now...😳

plz its a request ...take a bow from my side bhavu dear...👏

u were saying that i should help u...😕

but let me tell u...i can't write even a bit of what u wrote...

seriously...i felt like i m reading an SR tutorial...👏👏👏

that is written brilliantly and so swiftly...without looking vulgar...😳

the way u described jodha's first love making experience...👏👏👏

it was just phenomenal and beyond words...👏👏👏

loved it to the core...😳😳😳

the gesture talk...when jalal asked her ...do u love me...trust me...😃😉😳

and the way she answered in yes and no...😳

believe me ...i imagined everything in front of my eyes...😳😃

and when she said that she is afraid...heheh...😆😆

the same question arouse in my mind that jalal asked...😆😆

and guess...where i read it...😉

inside the blanket...heheh...😆😆

it was around 12 o clock...when i saw ur pm...😉😆

and i was like yipeee...⭐️😛

thanku for this fantastic piece of writing...👏👏

hats off...my romance ki amma...u simply rock... 😳😳🤗

and if u want to delete it...u can...😆

as i have saved it in my phone...😆

so i can read it whenever i want...😆

OMG !!!! SUCH A SWEET COMMENT I REALLY MEAN THIS... I AM GLAD YOU THOUGHT IT WAS WORTH TO READ 😃...THANK YOU FOR ENCOURAGING ME WITH THIS AMAZING COMMENT!!!😊😊😊

Originally posted by: ANNU30

😊😊😊😊😊😳Awesome update 😊no words 2 say anything only 👏

THANKS !!!! I AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS CHPATER😊

Originally posted by: Karkit

Beautiful n lovely update
so romantic dear

THANKS!!!! I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER!!!😊😊😊

Originally posted by: rima4ever

bhavini

it was so passionate sensual and scorching

but i loved it as it was written so beautifully

u r a genius yaar

OMG THANKS RIMA...!!!! SUCH A SWEET COMMENT!!!! I AM GLAD YOU THOUGHT IT WAS WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY...I WAS SO SCARD TO WRITE SR...THIS IS MY FIRST TRY SO WAS NOT SURE... I JUST READ IT AGAIN ENTIRE CHAPTER AND FELT IT WAS REALLY TOO MUCH...SO FINALLY CHANGED IT...ALSO I WANTED EVERYONE TO READ THIS CHAPTER...BUT I AM SO GLAD WITH YOUR ENCOURAGEMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE U SWEETY😊😊😊

Originally posted by: baubles

That was SENSUOUS to say the least..amazing Bhav di!! ☺️

Right from the beginning to the end...lovely chapter...it was treat reading it! So glad their differences got sorted and she trusted him!😳

Update soon di..!!! Love you🤗

MY SWEET SOMU!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS CHPATER!!!!! YAP SHE REALLY LOVES HIM ... SHE REALLY TRUST HIM... IT'S PROVEN...THANK U SO MUCH FOR LIKING THIS CHAPTER AND YOUR COMMENT😊🤗🤗🤗 LOVE U TOO🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: indudolai

it was awesome...wowieee really so sensual ☺️

update soon😃

INDU MY DEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK A LOT... I AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER😊😊 SO SWEET OF YOU😃

Originally posted by: latanzia

have to read it again, please let jodha get pregnant Shocking everyone except Jalal, Jodha and Abdul.

OOPS!!!! IF YOU WANT TO READ PREVIOUS CHAPTER PLEASE PM ME I WILL SEND IT YOU...SINCE LOTS OF READERS ARE UNDER 18...FOR THEM I HAVE MADE IT TO LIGHTER VERSION... SO THEY CAN ALSO ENJOY THE STORY...😊

Originally posted by: ...Arshaya...

Dids its fab!
Plz dont change it.
I dont have words to appreciate ur work.
Its amazingly superb.

SO SWEET !!! I AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER... I FELT IT WAS TOO SENSUAL SO I HAVE CHANGED IT TO LIGHTER VERSION..😆 I AM GLAD YOU READ PREVIOUSE HOT VERSION😉😆

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

this was really hot..but wow.

U ALWAYS HAVE ONE LINE COMMENT...BUT IT'S SAYS A LOT...I LOVE WOW...THANKS AANCHAL... I LOVE IT WHEN WOW COMES FROM AMAZING WRITER😃

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

Aah I loved it was so sexy

too bad u r gonna remove it soon but I loved it ⭐️

I AM SORRY I HAVE CHANGED IT TO LIGHTER VERSION... I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT...THANKS FOR THE YOUR COMMENT