AkhDa FF- Pyaar Kiya Toh Nibhana *NEW Author's Note* Page 65 - Page 31

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

Read the whole Chappy azz ...

Everything was written and described beautifully !

Too much pain for Jodha and Jalal !

Hope they'll get together soon ..

Originally posted by: Az3003

Wow thank you so much🤗

Azzz love u sweety...👏 U probably don't remember but in beginning you put out poll which story is your fav... and I voted for this one and at that time you wrote only 1 chapter was done... I still remember I was so confuse which one to pick... I loved your both story but I PICKED this one... Her pain gave me so much pain and her emotion brought tears in my eyes... I don't know how and why I but in one chapter I fall in love with this story...When I saw pm for this one ... I was like OMG😲!!! Hooray👏👏👏👏😃😃😃😃😃😃😃... Any way whenever I see pm from my awesome super duper excellent Azzz I always get excited... Anything you write is a treat for readers... doesn't matter it is romance, anger, sorrow, or any emotion... U AND NANU inspire me to write... U both always surprise me with amazing imagination with beautiful creative excellent writing with intense emotions...

Of course I hate the part Jodha died but seeing Jalal's condition I felt like dying myself... OMG! I really want to know what happened between them... why so Jodha felt that he just want Varis... She was remembering their beautiful loving memories... U R so good I have no words... U R writing is way beyond ... I read entire 1^st part again and I am in pain with my heart is filled with tear😭😭😭 Can't see Jodha die and Jalal's condition vulnerable... When Jalal said... save Jodha ... don't worry about child... that time I felt .. Whatever he is guilty for it... but he is in immense pain... last line... SUSPENSE... JODHA CAN'T DIE... It was during this bleak time, in a dark secret room in the hidden passageways of the Agra palace that Jodha's eyes fluttered open...

i will read 2 nd part update comment soon⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

He saw treachery in her beauty and he feared of losing himself to her... this line touched my heart... in one line U have said so much...

I have read entire chapter in one breath... I am speechless... this is way beyond any words... I don't think I am capable of review this chapter. We all are so blessed that you write in Jodha Akbar forum... I have cried for Jalal and Jodha both... This Jalal is very cruel... and Jodha did right thing to leave him he deserves to weep for long... but I can't bear Jodha's pain... it's not her fault... To leave your only new born child it is the most difficult thing in world... No mother would have heart to do that... I can imagine what Jodha has gone through but I will not be able to see her crying for her child... but what she is looking is the best for her child not for her... she knows that if she stay in place with him... she is going to be humiliated everyday by him in front of his kid and if she takes her kid with him, her child will also suffer so... she took very hard decision... I hate this Jalal but I can't see him in this much pain for Jodha... He has done really crime... I want to know more why she allowed him come closer to him... he played game with him... pretend loving her... while delivery she was seeing beautiful moment spend with him... I can't wait for more... UR AMAZING WRITER.. SUPERB.. UNBELIVIVABLE TALENTENED... I AM NOT QUALIFIED ENOUGH TO EVEN APPRECIATE WORK... U R WAY BEYOND ... UR NUMBER 1 WRITER & ALL TIME BEST... I AM SO LUCKY TO KNOW YOU... ONE WORD SUPERB!!!!⭐️