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My my my Azi you remembered this one??đ˛.
I'm so so so so very happy you finally gave us an update on this one coz this concept, the prologue, the first chapter itself was so intriguing I could'nt contain myself from stopping myself from re-reading the chapter and prologue you had already posted just beautiful.. How can you write so good Azu what's the secret of your flawless writing tell me please so that I could implement it on my writing and atleast try to improve it you write beautiful girl just lovely...
This chapter had so much of tears,pain,sadness and an aura of sadness to it that I could'nt stop myself from crying everytime I read Jodha's heart being broken to shards by Jalal's harsh words.. He only cared for his son and not for Jodha, he did'nt want his child to be raised by her a Rajput wretch ouch that hurt so much in the heart and not paying heed to the little thing that beat in his chest that continuously claimed to love Jodha..đ.
Jodha's selfless nature blew me some different level altogether she remembered everything her shehenshah said inspite of being hurt so very badly by him.. Him wanting to name the baby Salim and giving away her flesh and blood which she gave birth after it flourished in her womb for 9 months how can someone just be so selfless even after being hurt so brutally.. It only in your stories.. Take a bow for writing the Hamida and Jodha sequence so so so flawlessly Azi..â¤ď¸.
I like the Ruqaaiya in your story by far she is not the Jalal crazy lady but she truly cares for Jodha too no wonders she told Jalal to pay some attention to Jodha when she was carrying his baby in her womb.. She has care and compassion in her and I like that pretty much Azi..đ.
And Jalal's Pov my god it got tears to my eyes it had so much of pain in it.. I dunno how to express to you how I felt when I was reading his portions.. Imagining Jodha everywhere and ripping his wrists and letting his blood flow down in reminiscence of the bruises he had given to her on her wrists by harshly holding her.. The repentance and pain he feels is extreme and I hav'nt seen such display of emotions anywhere.. It was written beautifully.. Him not facing his son because his son has Jodha's eyes and that makes him feel guilty for his harsh actions and behaviour towards her.. Ohhh Azi what do I say.. I'm speechless and completely toungue tied here..đ.
I liked how Hamida tried to stop Jodha and patch up Jalal and Jodha because she had seen her son repent and crave for Jodha.. She is the same caring and compassionate mother in your story like she is in the show..
All I'd say is beautiful update Azi just lovely keep writing never stop..đ.
Love,
Kashmi..đ¤.
I'm so so so so very happy you finally gave us an update on this one coz this concept, the prologue, the first chapter itself was so intriguing I could'nt contain myself from stopping myself from re-reading the chapter and prologue you had already posted just beautiful.. How can you write so good Azu what's the secret of your flawless writing tell me please so that I could implement it on my writing and atleast try to improve it you write beautiful girl just lovely...
This chapter had so much of tears,pain,sadness and an aura of sadness to it that I could'nt stop myself from crying everytime I read Jodha's heart being broken to shards by Jalal's harsh words.. He only cared for his son and not for Jodha, he did'nt want his child to be raised by her a Rajput wretch ouch that hurt so much in the heart and not paying heed to the little thing that beat in his chest that continuously claimed to love Jodha..đ.
Jodha's selfless nature blew me some different level altogether she remembered everything her shehenshah said inspite of being hurt so very badly by him.. Him wanting to name the baby Salim and giving away her flesh and blood which she gave birth after it flourished in her womb for 9 months how can someone just be so selfless even after being hurt so brutally.. It only in your stories.. Take a bow for writing the Hamida and Jodha sequence so so so flawlessly Azi..â¤ď¸.
I like the Ruqaaiya in your story by far she is not the Jalal crazy lady but she truly cares for Jodha too no wonders she told Jalal to pay some attention to Jodha when she was carrying his baby in her womb.. She has care and compassion in her and I like that pretty much Azi..đ.
And Jalal's Pov my god it got tears to my eyes it had so much of pain in it.. I dunno how to express to you how I felt when I was reading his portions.. Imagining Jodha everywhere and ripping his wrists and letting his blood flow down in reminiscence of the bruises he had given to her on her wrists by harshly holding her.. The repentance and pain he feels is extreme and I hav'nt seen such display of emotions anywhere.. It was written beautifully.. Him not facing his son because his son has Jodha's eyes and that makes him feel guilty for his harsh actions and behaviour towards her.. Ohhh Azi what do I say.. I'm speechless and completely toungue tied here..đ.
I liked how Hamida tried to stop Jodha and patch up Jalal and Jodha because she had seen her son repent and crave for Jodha.. She is the same caring and compassionate mother in your story like she is in the show..
All I'd say is beautiful update Azi just lovely keep writing never stop..đ.
Love,
Kashmi..đ¤.
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