AkhDa FF- Pyaar Kiya Toh Nibhana *NEW Author's Note* Page 65 - Page 30

Finally!!!!!!!!! You updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE ch. 2... Please do continue this story... and also Tu jahan...

Hi, I love your story. The prologue and CH1 brought tears to my eyes. And all the time I was hoping the JA CVs don't take up your idea because then I will stop watching JA. I have been waiting for CH2 for so long. I am a lazy member who usually is a silent reader. I know it sucks...will try to improve :-)Accept my congrats ..you are a gifted writer. I wish I had your knack of writing stories that make you feel that you are seeing things rather than reading. This is an awesome story.

i feel for jalal and jodha...well jalal kind of deserves this...i know its far off but i want to see the look on his face when he realises that jodha is alive...i can imagine th elength he will go to,to get her back.

I can't tell you guys how overwhelmed I am with all your responses... Each and every kind word has helped restore my faith in this story and I can't thank you all enough🤗❤️

Omg...m really glad that I got dis opportunity to read such a beautiful story seriously it has so much depth...I was crying literally while reading ...😭...

Hey Hey Hey !!!!❤️ Welcome Jaan..!!🤗❤️ *Hugs and Kisses*❤️🤗 Love you so much Jaan for this update! 😳 🤗And You already know, how much I love this story.😳
So you better get going, than being sad or upset upon it. Love you Jaan.😃 ❤️

First and foremost, I am speechless!!!! I am literally speechless..😳😊❤️
This story, this concept, all the three updates (prologue and the 2 chaps) are beyond Perfection, amazing and brilliant!👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
I am just so addicted and intrigued. This concept is so unique, applaudable and excellent, that I can only stand and give a standing ovation.👏👏👏👏

I LOVED this chapter 2. OMG! Jaan Take a Bow! Take a bow NOW! 👏👏👏❤️
You made me sob to hell. 😭😭😭 This was THAT emotional, heart-wrenching, heart-tugging and touching.⭐️⭐️⭐️

I simply cannot come out of this brilliant masterstroke.⭐️⭐️⭐️ I wonder Jaan..How do you do this?❤️
I mean, this is one of the bestest stories, and each chap is a golden feather added to it.❤️

Coming to chapter, I am so happy Jodha is atleast fine. I know she is physically, emotionally and mentally bruised to core.😭😭😭
But then I am happy for the fact that she is physically better atleast.😃 Getting well mentally and emotionally is what I guess will form your story.😳⭐️⭐️

OMG! Her state and her emotional condition was heart-tugging.😭😭 I could visualise everything. This was so emotional.😭😭
I am glad Hameeda is by her side.😃 I am just so sad and upset reading all the flashbacks.😭😭 She knew Salim would be snatched away from her. Jalal didn't care for her. He just wanted his baby to be fine😭😭. I was so much on emotional roll reading all this. 😭😭😭😭
My throat choked all the while reading this update.😭😭

Jalal's part is first of all written with utmost brilliance. Kudos Jaan! I really wanna bow down to you to have written it with such unimaginable brilliance.
Its so so so heart-rending and poignant. I know he has done the worst he could do to her, but dunno why, I PITY HIM. His condition and state makes me a little lineant towards him.
Your update was enough to melt my heart towards him. I sobbed and cried reading this. He's so much burdened with his own deeds, that he's refusing to see and feel everything else.

You know the best part of this update..that blowed me away..😭😭😭😭

I am at a loss of words of how to review this chapter because (I'd like to use hindi here).. Meri koi Aukad nahi hai isse review karne ki..⭐️⭐️⭐️

I understand the situation of both the parties. And my heart is crying for both. 😭😭😭
So Jodha left the Palace and is on her new way ahead. Interesting. I am so much looking forward for your next update.😛😉

In overall update, the language, the feelings, the emotions, the situations, the POVs were depicted so well.👏👏👏
I just loved this Jaan..JUST LOVED IT!❤️❤️❤️ And I cant wait for more. The song selection, as always, was brilliant.⭐️⭐️⭐️
I wanna come to SA and give a tight hug to you for this story and for Tu Jahan Mein Wahan.❤️❤️
Please update both asap. Sorry I have been bugging you all the time to update, to review, to do this, to do that..But I cant help. You my FOREMOST LOVE..❤️❤️ 🤗
So I got all rights over you lol.😛😆

I'd like to finish with a song for you Jaan..

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte, Tere bina kya wajood mera
Tujhse Juda agar ho jayenge, to khudse hi ho jayenge juda..

Kyonki Tum hi ho..Tum hi ho..
ZIndagi ab tum hi to..
Chain bhi..mera dard bhi..
Meri Aashiqui ab tum hi ho..❤️❤️

Love you So much Azra! Thanks for being my friend, my love and my jaan.❤️ 🤗

You are the Bestest Author I have ever had the honour of seeing. 😳 ❤️ 🤗

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UPDATE PLEASE!!!😆

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

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Res 🤣

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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

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soch rahi thi aaj Raat Sab unres kardu

OMG Nancy my Jaan what can I say???? You literally made me cry with this review!!😭😭😭 This humble writer... To get any praise at all from the best of the best is an honour in and off itself but you have blessed me with the most wonderful review ever!! Jaan... Words cannot do justice to my feelings of gratitude for having you in my life🤗This whole update, you were by my side... YOU TAKE A BOW JAAN... It's all because of you🤗 To quote you... Stop sar chadaofying me😆... But seriously Jaan... I'm so happy!!! This review truly means the world to me❤️ I love you so much!!!

Originally posted by: Az3003

OMG Nancy my Jaan what can I say???? You literally made me cry with this review!!😭😭😭 This humble writer... To get any praise at all from the best of the best is an honour in and off itself but you have blessed me with the most wonderful review ever!! Jaan... Words cannot do justice to my feelings of gratitude for having you in my life🤗This whole update, you were by my side... YOU TAKE A BOW JAAN... It's all because of you🤗 To quote you... Stop sar chadaofying me😆... But seriously Jaan... I'm so happy!!! This review truly means the world to me❤️ I love you so much!!!

Oh Jaan!!!!!! I love you so much 🤗 I am so damn lucky man! 😳 You deserve all appreciation my love..🤗 I am NOT AT ALL sar chadoafying you.. COme on!