OS 'HE opened his eyes and THERE SHE was, beside him!'

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preeti.r

@preeti.r

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Good one ... Wish there was one such episode

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Mallika-E-Bhais
Lashy. Now tell me when this will happen on the show 😆

Pataa nahin 😭

Waaah I want a proper Akdha scene...

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: meghanajain
Superb writing Lashy, enjoyed it thoroughly. I wish atleast some of what you written was shown. Hoping Amer shows the couple in new light. As I was totally surprised with the episode on Fri.

awww thank you meghana...hope to see better directed episodes at Amer...the suicide, ajmer and mohan tracks were spectacular...the post-mohan was a bit let-down...hope they pick up at Amer!😃

Thanks for your lovely reply..🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: preet_pal320
I usually avoid OSs and FFs but this was really wonderfully written. I could see the scene being played out in my head; if only I could've seen it on my TV screen!

Great job!

Awww thank you so much preet...😳 thank you so so so much...

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peachesandcream

@peachesandcream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Lashy this was very beautifully done.👏 You are very talented.

I so wish the CV's had included something like this. It would have allowed the story to move more smoothly. It would have not only kept the characterizations intact but allowed us to understand the characters point of views. I am sure we all were feeling the need of a scene such as this, but given scene after scene with the leads and others. What's more, both Paridhi and Rajat have the talent to carry such a scene.

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kushboo

@-Khush-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Excellent work again Lashy ! You fulfilled my wish remember?! 😛

Now I want an OS from Amer ! 😈

As much as I loved the taunts Jalal threw on jodha about his protection from her, I too was kinda going WTH ?! When Jalal didn't even have an ounce of anger for jodha or jodha have a pinch of guilt by facing him !

I pray this amer track does what this tiger track was supposed to do! Well the CVs might have changed gears since for junta janardhan it's always better to watch this KJo/Rajshri style wedding love stories than some guilt love ! 😆

Edited by -Khush- - 11 years ago

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: baubles
Beautiful OS Lashy...how I wish this whole thing had played out in the show,instead it looked as if the tiger incident didn't even happen!This scene was the perfect way through which they could have kept up the continiuty of the show...your OS made up for the disappointment!👍🏼

Soumya

Thank you so so so much Soumya...they do generally rush through tracks..but, this one really felt discontinuous if you know what I mean...

Hope the CVs don't give us anymore discontinuous episodes...😕

Thanks so much for replying dear...🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Thanks Azra (what a beautiful name!😳) for your lovely lovely words - they mean a lot...you're a brilliant writer yourself...and every compliment thing you've paid holds good for you too...

🤗 thanks girl

Originally posted by: ashpat
thank u so much lashy for giving us a much needed missing/transitional episode. As I ahve said earlier, I LOVE reading your os,ss or ff. I have become your fan by now.
This os brought a satisfaction to my thirsty heart which needed a transition in the show. I wish CVS had showed it. Oh well, at least we got a fantastic one from you.

thanks once again

Thanks Ayesha...you really flatter me...I found myself very very touched when I saw you refer to my name in another thread too...love your encouragement girl...🤗hope to be able to keep you entertained for long...

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: princessSonia
Superb one dear...👏
Loved it...👍🏼
So beautifully written...
I could imagine it happening...
Fab...
Do cont wid such more OS's
N plz if possible do pm me...
N plz do accept d buddy
request I hve sent to u...

Thank you so much dear...🤗have never seen you before..have you started following JA recently?

Thank you once again for your comments...

😃