OS 'HE opened his eyes and THERE SHE was, beside him!' - Page 2

Superb writing Lashy, enjoyed it thoroughly. I wish atleast some of what you written was shown. Hoping Amer shows the couple in new light. As I was totally surprised with the episode on Fri.

I usually avoid OSs and FFs but this was really wonderfully written. I could see the scene being played out in my head; if only I could've seen it on my TV screen!

Great job!

Originally posted by: sonia_1

This is what we were deprived of. Thank you for this beautiful and much needed interaction between them, after the incident. As I have mentioned earlier, it seemed that CV's completely missed out on an intervening episode but you have more than made up for it.

Supeb one ! 👏 Loved it.👍🏼

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Awesome OS

thank u so much lashy for giving us a much needed missing/transitional episode. As I ahve said earlier, I LOVE reading your os,ss or ff. I have become your fan by now.
This os brought a satisfaction to my thirsty heart which needed a transition in the show. I wish CVS had showed it. Oh well, at least we got a fantastic one from you.

thanks once again

You are such an Amazingly Talented and Beautiful writer yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I have been a silent reader to many of your OS,SS on Akdha but couldn't help but to comment now. 😳
Just loved the way you expressed the depth in emotions with an undefinable ease.. 😳 That's really Amazing you know!! 😛 😃 😳 Loved this Whole Angry,Teasing Naughty side of Jalal yet the agony He felt bcoz of Jodha's anguish. 😳And Jodha who just can't stop wondering What's with the multiple personality disorder of this Guy!! 😲 😆 One Moment Angel and Next Moment Devil!! 😆 Really He is a Vichitra Prani indeed!! 😛 😳 😆
I just wish CV's would have shown something of that Promo they gave which have made our expectations so high!! 😡 😭 🤢 But With Jalal's self talk on Friday and his naughty side back with a BANG to the Surface There are full chances that We get many such punishments in Amer Which will help to heal our wounds to an extent!! 😃 😳 😆 Although I still regret and will always despise the Great CV's for not having a proper interaction of Akdha after the tiger attack and nothing of that DAMN AWESOME promo!! 😡 😡 🤢

P.S.Me sending you a buddy request.Pls accept it and PM me if possible whenever you write something on Akdha!! 😊 😳 😳

Originally posted by: daisydee425

superb