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Posted: 11 years ago
hello friends...😃
so finally here is the next chapter...😉
plz forgive the writing mistakes...and if any understanding problem...😕
do clear it out...😃

(jodha quickly made her way out...looked in every direction to confirm that there is no one around...she was still lost in the beautiful moments that she just spent with her love...she was so much in her thoughts that forgot to notice that someone was standing in her way...she collided with the person and lost her balance...she was about to fall when the person held her arm to support thus preventing her to fall down...she looked up at the person...it was none other than maham...who was watching jodha from a while and purposely stood in her way to stop her...jodha quickly balanced herself and stood up straight, adjusted her dupatta and then looked at maham...maham looked at jodha from head to toe then in the direction she was coming from...she understood that she was with jalal...)

Maham:- (still holding her arm) zara samhal ker begum jodha...mazil ki khwahish me itni mashgool mat ho jayiye ke raste ka guman hi na rahe...ye to hum the jo samhal liya aapko...magar ye zaruri nahi ke har baar koi maujud hi rahe aapko sahara dene ke liye...

Jodha:- (removing her hand with hers) sahayata ke liye dhanywaad...parantu aapko humari chinta karne ki koi aavshyakata nahi hai mahamanga ji...humare pati hai hume sahara dene ke liye...

Maham:- jalal ka saath paker tevar kuch zyada hi badh gaye hai aapke...lagta hai aapne wo kahawat nahi suni...jo parinde apni had se zyada uncha udne ki koshish karte hai...wo aksar ...muh ki khaker zamin per gir jaya karte hai...

Jodha:- kaun kitni unchi udaan bhar raha hai iska gyan hume bhali bhanti hai mahamanga...behtar hoga ke aap humare vishaya me sochne ke bajay apne jivan per dhyaan de... hume vilamb ho raha hai...aagya dijiye hume...(and she started moving away from her...)

Maham:- (looking at her with disgust) zubaan kuch zyada hi chalne lagi hai aapki begum jodha...shayad aap bhul rahi hai ke aap kisse baat kar rahi hai...apni zubaan ko kabu me rakhe to behtar hoga aapke liye...

Jodha:-(turning towards her...sarcastically)abhi to humne bolna shuru bhi nahi kiya aur aapne hume salah dena bhi shuru kar diya...waise hum aapko ek baat saaf ker de...agar humari zubaan khul gayi to kadachit aapko sunker acha na lage mahamanga ji...

Maham:- esa kya jaan gayi hai aap jo is kadar tevar dikha rahi hai hume...zara hume bhi to malum chale...

Jodha:- uchit hai...yadi aapko itni hi utsukta ho rahi hai to hum aapko bata hi dete hai...aap shenshah ko apni baato se bhramit kar sakti hai...kintu hume nahi...

Maham:- kehna kya chahti hai aap...saaf saaf kahiye...

Jodha:- ab itni bhi abodh hone ka dhong mat kariye mahamanga ji...hume achi tarah gyat hai...ke aap us akraman ke bare me sab kuch janti hai...

Maham:- humla...kaun...kaun sa humla...kis humle ki baat kar rahi hai aap begum jodha??

Jodha:- wohi aakraman...jo aapke bte adham khan aur uske sainiko ne jungle me shenshah per kiya tha...parantu durbhagya vash(unfortunately) wo apne irado me safal nahi ho saka...

Maham:-(irritated) ye kya befizool ki baat ker rahi hai begum jodha aap...adham aur shenshah per humla...aapka dimag to thik hai...aur agar esa hua bhi hai to hum...hume kaise malum ho sakta hai in sab ke bare me...hum to yaha the mehel me...

Jodha:- (cutting her short in b/w) kyuki aap mehel me nahi thi mahamanga ji....(maham completely shocked)...nahi thi aap yaha...aap wohi thi...usi jungle me...

Maham:-(extremely nervous)..ye..ye aap kya keh rahi hai...esa kuch nahi hai... esa kaise keh sakti hai aap...

Jodha:- itna aashcharyachakit(surprised) hone ki koi aavshyakata nahi hai mahamanga...hum jante hai ke wo nakabposh insaan jisne adham khan ke pran bachaye...wo aap hi thi...shenshah aadham ke piche bhag rahe the...shayad wo na dekh paaye ho...kintu humne...humne aapko pehchan liya tha mahamanga...aur waise bhi aapko pehchanne ke liye to aapki ye do kajrari aankhen hi kafi hai......(smirked really hard...)

(maham looked at jodha with a shocked and scared expression at first but then suddenly started laughing really hard...clapping her hands...then stopped at once and looked at jodha...)

Maham:-(with smirk+aggression) ye hui na baat...asli maza to ab aayega khel ka...mukabala takkar ka jo ho chala hai...wah begum jodha wah...manna padega apke shatir dimag ko...ab jab aap itna kuch jaan hi chuki hai to chupane ka to koi matlab hi nahi banta hai...haan...hum hi the wo shaqs...mante hai hum...to bataiye kya kar legi aap...shenshah se shiqayat karegi humari...haan?? To jayiye na khadi kyu hai...jaker bata dijiye unko humari sachhai...jayiye...

Jodha:- aap bhi vichitra hai mahamanga...pehle swayam hi hume chatur kehti hai aur phir swayam ye murkhta ka karya karne ko bhi keh rahi hai aap humse...itne murkh nahi hai hum...hum jante hai ke shenshah kabhi humara vishwaas nahi karege...kyuki wo apni badi ammi per andhviswaas(blind trust) jo karte hai...aur hum nahi chahte ke aapke karan unke aur humare sambandh me koi bhi darar aaye...

Maham:- shatir hone ke sath sath samajhdaar bhi hai aap begum jodha...sach dil khush kar diya aaj aapne humara...(and she started laughing like mad...)

Jodha:- aashcharya hota hai hume aap per...itna niche kaise gir sakti hai aap mahamanga...shenshah aapko badi ammi kehte hai...itna aadar karte hai aapka...aur aap unke sath hi chal ker rahi hai...kya unke prati zara sa bhi lagav nahi aapke man me ...

Maham:- ye aapse kisne keh diya ke hum jalal se mohabbat nahi karte...beintehaan chahte hai hum jalal ko begum jodha...use apna dudh pilaya hai humne...lekin kya kare uske liye apne bte ki kurbaani to nahi de sakte na hum... adham khan ke liye hum kuch bhi kar sakte hai...wo beta hai humara...jaan hai humari...aur uski jaan ki hifazat apni aakhiri saans tak karege hum...samjhi aap...

Jodha:- to apne swarth ke liye aap shenshah se vishwaasghat karne se bhi nahi chookegi...(with an amazed tone)

Maham:- dekhiye begum jodha...hume aapka "bhashan" sunne me koi dilchaspi nahi hai...hume kya karna hai aur kaise karna hai ye hum achi tarah samjhte hai...aur aap humara kuch nahi bigad sakti...samjhi aap

Jodha:- to ek baat aap bhi dhyaan se sun lijiye mahamanga ji...yadi adham khan apki jaan hai...to shenshah bhi humari jaan hai...prem karte hai hum unse...aur unki taraf bhadne wale har khatre ko pehle humse hoker guzarana hoga...jab tak hum jivit hai apne prem per koi aanch nahi aane dege...

(they were so much busy in their word war that they dint notice when moti and hamida arrived there...but it was maham's luck that hamida couldn't listen the whole conversation so she considered it to be just a normal one...maham noticed her arrival while jodha still fuming...)

Maham(raising her hand):- mallika e aazam ko mahamanga ka salam...

(jodha too noticed hamida and quickly changed her expression and greeted her with a smile...)

Hamida:- aadab maham....(now looking at jodha...full on in rage) jodha...kaha thi aap beta?? Hum dono kabse aapko dhund rahe hai...aap begum hai mogul saltanat ki...ek hi galti baar baar dohrana shobha nahi deta aapko...

(maham wondered why hamida is so much mad at jodha...she smiled evilly...)

Jodha:- wo...ammi jaan...hum...hum to sangeet kaksh me the...

(maham got that jodha is lying to hamida ...how could she miss even a single chance to humiliate jodha...)

Maham:- ye aap kya keh rahi hai begum jodha...humne to aapko abhi shenshah ke hojre se bahar aate hue dekha hai...

(maham's statement caused hamida's gaze to turn suspicious...she looked at jodha...)

Hamida:- haan jodha...hum bhi abhi abhi wohi se aa rahe hai...aap to kahin nahi dikhi hume...

Jodha:-(maham thought that she has trapped her...but she dint know that it's not that easy to trap our jodhu...she responded with a smile on her face) are mahamanga ji...pehle humari baat to puri ho jaane di hoti...hum keh rahe the ke hum sangeet kaksh me the...itne me ek sainik ne hume suchna di ki shenshah humse milna chahte hai...isiliye hum yha unse bhent karne chale aaye...

(Now looking at hamida)...hume shama kar dijiye ammi jaan...shenshah ne hume bataya ke aap kitni pareshan ho gayi thi aaj humare karan...hum bahut sharminda hai...aap jo bhi dand degi hume swikar hoga... (and she bowed down her head...)

Hamida:- saza to aapko zarur milegi...aap aayiye humare sath...

(hamida and jodha left from there...leaving maham all fuming and frustrated...maham was gritting her teeth all furious...when resham came towards her running...)

Resham:- aadab wazir e aliya...wo hum...

Maham:-(cutting her shot) kitni baar kaha hai tumse resham...har waqt parchayi ki tarah humare piche lagne ki zaroorat nahi hai...ab kya ho gaya...kaun sa pahad tut pada..jo ese haanf rahi ho tum...

Resham:-(composing herself) wo wazir e aliya...ek aadmi aaya hai...apse milna chahta hai...

Maham:-(in an angry tone) to usse keh do ke hum usse nahi milna chahte...waqt nahi hai humare paas kisi se milne ka...jao...

Resham:- are wazir e aliya...aap samajh nahi rahi hai...wo kehta hai use adham khan sahib ke bare me kuch zaroori baat karni hai aapse...kafi pareshan bhi dikh raha tha...

Maham:- kya...(shocked) adham ke bare me ...kya baat ho sakti hai...kaha hai wo...

Resham:- hume lag hi gaya tha ke mamla kuch sangeen hai...isliye aapke hozre me intezaar karne ke liye bolker aaye hai hum use...

Maham:- to phir khadi khadi humara muh kya dekh rahi ho ahmak...jaldi chalo...

(And she headed towards her room with resham...she reached there and got in...the man was standing there but it was his back towards maham...)

Maham:- kahiye...kya jante hai aap humare bte adham khan ke bare me...kaun hai aap??

(he turned and maham was all shocked to see him...her eyes and mouth wide open in surprise but not a pleasant one)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wowww!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏 Omg!! What a chap! superbbb!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ Yar Jodha ne jo mast jawab diye na Maham ko..maza aa gaya..😆😆 Super Awesome chap..U r stroke of genius pallavi😳 Loved the convo..Loved how Jodha gave it back nicely to MA naagin in front of HB...Amazing😃👏⭐️ Now who is the one who knows about Adham😲😉 Lets see aage kya hota hai..

Wonderful Chpter!👏⭐️👏
Lots of hugs n love from me..😃😃
Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha

BTW, Nancy...woh wild SR wala OS kab post karogi...😉...I m dying to read it...

Kiya to tha darling...nateeja bhi dekh liya thnks for support btw ! Lo0ve u loadz!😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pallavi Darling! I love you! Thank You so0ooo much for updating both stories!!!!!!! Thanks a lot!!!!! I'll edit my comment soon !!!!!! Just love u n ur work!!!!! 😃😃 Thanku Sherni!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Kiya to tha darling...nateeja bhi dekh liya thnks for support btw ! Lo0ve u loadz!😳😃

hey nannu...i missed it...plz pm me na...plz plz plz...ye kamina net...chal hi nahi raha tha do din se😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Pallavi Darling! I love you! Thank You so0ooo much for updating both stories!!!!!!! Thanks a lot!!!!! I'll edit my comment soon !!!!!! Just love u n ur work!!!!! 😃😃 Thanku Sherni!😛

kal hi kar diya hota yaar...
but was suffering with terrible network...
abhi bhi its not working properly...
will review dead love as soon as it recovers...
waise i loved the update...awesome...
and yes...ur welcome my baaghin
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it so much...so jodha knows abt maham,i hope maham receives a shock when jalal believes jodha over her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
VOw very nice, I want to see Jodha to do something smart like this in show instead of directly talking and getting insulted :). Thanks for the PM and update Pallavi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting. MA scared!!! that will be fun
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update
loved the way jodha answered back to maham

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