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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: baubles

Great chapter Pallavi!!! The dialogues you write are superb,your hindi is really realy good!! Beautifully written...do update soon and PM me if possible na..🤗

ya sure baby...
thanku so much😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Kya update! Hamida Bohot naughty nikli! Hayye sharmila Jalal! The precap was the best.. Jodha in the bathtub and Jalal pouring water. It's a dream come true! Thank u sooo much dear!

Next year??! *fainted*

heheh...faint mat ho yar...😆
next year...2 months baad hi to aane wala hai na dear...to darna kaisa😃
thanku tanhi😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks..loved it..brilliant...loved the precap...can't wait for it

hey ur comment changed a bit ...😆
yes yes yes...yippee...love u...
thanku baby😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey those who want pm...please add me in your buddy list...😳
i have sent request to most of u...
it will reduce some of my work ...
thanku...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful in continuation...both in new mood HB in masti and Jalal a shy baby...woww yaar...Jodha's feeling discussion i like d most...
tooo awesome and wonderful update yaar

precap it very appealing...plz update next part soon dear... and thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

beautiful in continuation...both in new mood HB in masti and Jalal a shy baby...woww yaar...Jodha's feeling discussion i like d most...

tooo awesome and wonderful update yaar

precap it very appealing...plz update next part soon dear... and thanx for pm

Thanku shree...
glad you like it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello friends...😊
here is the next update...😆
hope you all will like it...😃
forgive the writing mistakes please😳😭

Chapter 17:-

In Jodha's room:-

(Khwaja shera completed her treatment and took her leave...jodha was feeling a bit tired...and she dint even do her kanha puja since last two days...so she decided to go and take a bath... she ordered Reva and her other maids...that no one would be allowed to enter her room meanwhile until she freshen up and complete her kanha puja...she dint mentioned any specific names because she knew that hamida and jalal were always exceptions and no one has the authority to stop them...she made her way to the bathroom)

(Jodha changed her attire...now she was wrapped up in a white satin cloth that was covering almost half of her body... from her breast to knees...her hairs left open covering one of her shoulders with them...she got into the bath tub...meanwhile reva left to bring her favorite rose fragrance...promising her to return in a flick of second...now she was all alone there...her hairs were wet now and she was running her fingers on them again and again...lost somewhere in thoughts...she came out of her dreamland only when few drops of cold water touched her shoulder...it trickled her a bit...she looked up to find out about the source of it...but the sight left her totally mesmerized...her eyes and mouth were wide open to see jalal pouring water on her shoulder...he blew soft but really warm air gently on her face...she was jammed in the same position until jalal raised his hand to close her mouth...he placed his hand under her chin and closed her mouth...this made jodha to come back in her senses again...and a worried expression emerged on her face immediately... )

Jodha:- shenshah...aap yahan????...aap yahan kya kar rahe hai...(he dint respond ...only staring at her lovingly...)...aap...aap jayiye yahan se...agar kisi ne dekh liya to...(still not responding...just gazing at her...)...are hum aapse baat rahe hai...reva aati hi hogi...aap kuch bolte kyu nahi...

(jalal took some saffron-turmeric paste in his hand and applied it on her bare shoulder...still looking at her passionately...it left a shiver down her spine...she closed her eyes with that touch...her heart-beats increased rapidly with it...but she quickly composed herself as she heard some footsteps... )

Jodha: - lagta hai koi aa raha hai...ab jayiye bhi yahan se...lagta hai aap ese nahi manege...

(She took a hand full of water and threw it behind ...And looked back to confirm whether it had some effect on her naughty husband or not...but...became shocked to find no one there...she searched in every direction...but all in vain...she again got lost in thoughts carrying a confused expression ...reva returned with the rose fragrance in her hand...she called up for jodha twice but she dint respond...)

Reva:- ye lijiye jodha hum aapka itr le aaye...jodha...(she touched her shoulder) jodha...

(She snapped out of her thoughts...looked at reva with a confused face)

Reva:- kya hua jodha...kahan kho gayi aap...aur kisse baate kar rahi thi aap??

Jodha:-kahin nahi...aur hum kisse baat karege...kisi se bhi to nahi...kisi se baat nahi kar rahe the hum... (Trying to hide her nervousness)

Reva:- aur ye kya...aap to kaanp rahi hai...aur swaas bhi chadi hui lagti hai aapki ...pani adhik thanda hai kya??

Jodha:- nahi nahi ...thik hai...hum thik hai...sab thik hai...

(She quickly composed herself...)

(After some time)

Jodha:- acha reva... ek baat batao...yahan koi...(hesitating a bit) aaya tha kya??...kya tumne kisi ko dekha yaha se bahar jate hue...

Reva:- nahi to...aur waise bhi ye aapka shahi humam hai rani saa...yaha aane ka sahas kaun kar sakta hai...kyu ??...aapko esa pratit hua kya??...rukiye hum abhi puchte hai... (She called up for a bandi who was standing at the entrance of the bathroom...)...are suno...tumne yaha se kisi ko aate ya jate hue dekha kya...

Bandi:- nahi to... hum sab to kabse yaha khadi hai...humne to kisi ko bhi nahi dekha ander jate hue...

Reva:- dekha jodha...koi nahi tha yaha...zarur aapko bhram hua hoga...

Jodha:- acha...(confused...to herself)...ho sakta hai...parantu...kya sach much sirf bhram tha ye...ya phir...khair jane do...itna kyu soch rahe hai hum...jab ye sab keh hi rahi hai ke inhone kisi ko nahi dekha to shayad bhram hi hua hoga hume...tu bhi na jodha...akaran hi itni buddhi ka prayog kar rahi hai...ye bus tera bhram tha uar kuch nahi...samjhi...

(jodha completed her bath session...and changed into a bright yellow color rajasthani lahnga...came out of the bath room...drying her wet hairs with a towel...totally lost in thoughts...she came near the dressing table and sat in front of the mirror...she put the towel aside and looked at herself in the mirror...she looked absolutely gorgeous today...there was a different glow on her face...she blushed a little...and again looked up...but this time instead of smile...an expression full of amazement covered her face completely...she saw jalal standing behind and smiling at her...she just stared at him with mesmerizing eyes...and tried to touch his reflection in the mirror...but he again vanished like he was never there...this made jodha really irritated... )

Jodha:- hey kanha...ho kya raha hai humare sath...har jagah shenshah hi kyu dikh rahe hai hume...ab hum bilkul nahi sochege unke bare me...bilkul bhi nahi....(shook her head)

(suddenly she heard some footsteps...and she was so much in jalal's thoughts that she mistaken it to be his...she quickly stood up and turned to see whether he is there or not...but her doubt seemed to be true...she again saw jalal standing at the entrance smiling at her...jodha again got lost in his smile and killer looks completely...he made his way to her ...Came and stand in front of her...she raised her hand and tried to touch his cheek for confirmation...all lost... ..)

Jalal:- jodha...jodha...ese kya dekh rahi ho...

(For the first time she felt a bit awkward after listening to his voice...his voice was way too different...it was sounding so womanly...)

Jodha...jodha...kar kya rahi ho tum... (Shook her by shoulders...)

(she jerked out of her trance...oh no...it was moti not jalal...and jodha was touching her cheek in a very awkward way that will never suit on two women...she quickly drew her hand back...)

Jodha:- moti...(shocked) ...tum...

Moti:- haan hum...tumhe kya laga kaun hai...ye kya kar rahi thi tum haan...??

(This made jodha laugh really hard...she started laughing covering her mouth with her hand...)

Jodha:- ha ha ha ha...wo tum thi kya moti...humne to socha...ha aha..ha...shama karna hume...ab tak kaha thi tum??

Moti:- tum thik to ho na jodha...kaise paglo ki tarah huse ja rahi ho...hum to devi maa ke mandir gaye the...tumhari kushalta ke liyeprarthna karne...wapas aaye to pata chala ke tum aur shenshah sakushal wapas aa gaye ho...isi liye sab kuch chor charker tumse milne aaye...kintu tum to...

Jodha:-(controlling her laughter...but still smiling) hum kya...??

(moti hugged jodha tightly with full affection...jodha hugged her back...she held jodha's shoulders and made her sit on the bed...and sat in front of her holding her hand)

Moti:- pehle tum ye batao...tum thik to ho na...pata hai kitna dar gaye the hum...ese bina bataye koi mehel se bahar jata hai kya...wo to bhala ho ambe maa ka jinhone humari prarthna sahi samay per swikar kar li aur aur tumhe sakushal wapas bhej diya...(her attention shifted to the wound at her hand...) are ye chot kaise lagi tumhe...kahin shenshah ne kuch??

Jodha:- (interrupting her in b/w) nahi moti...wo hume kabhi chot pahucha hi nahi sakte...ye to...khair chodo...bahut lambi kahani hai...kabhi fursat se batayege tumhe...

(moti cupped her face in her hands...)

Moti:- acha ye batao...tum thik to ho na...

(jodha moved her head sideways...in a "No"...moti was her best friend since her childhood..She never hid anything from her which was related to her life...moti got worried seeing jodha's reaction...)

Moti:- kyu??...kya hua tumhe...??

Jodha:- pata nahi moti...badi bechaini si hai...pet me titliya si ud rahi ho mano...shwas bhi chadi hui si pratit hoti hai...kisi chiz me man hi nahi lag raha...ek shan ka chain nahi...lete hote hai to man karta hai baith jaye...baithte hai to man karta hai khade ho jaye...khade hote hai to lagta hai daudne lage...daudte hai to ji karta hai in badlo ke paar nikal jaye...ye man itna chanchal kyu hai moti...aur ye dekho...

(She took her hand and placed it on her chest close to her heart...)...dekho na humara hridya kitni tivrata se dhadak raha hai...ye kya ho raha hai hume moti...kaisa anubhav hai ye...kahin hume koi rog to nahi ho gaya na....(with an innocent face...)

(Moti smiled at this...she understood her dilemma completely...)

Moti:- hmm...rog to hai...aur wo bhi bahut hi jatil...jiska upchar kisi vaidya ke paas to milne se raha...

(jodha got terrified...he looked at moti with a question mark face...)

Jodha:- ye kaun sa rog hai moti...hume bhi gyan hai jadi butiyo ka thoda bahut...ese kisi rog ke bare me ...humne to nahi suna ...

Moti:- kyuki iska upchar keval apne priytam ke didar me hai buddhu... ise prem rog kehte hai pagli...ha ha haha..(She started laughing softly...)

Jodha:- Prem (a bit confused)......prem...(a bit assured).....prem...(fully confident now...)...haan moti...tum sahi keh rahi ho...kadachit prem hi hai ye ....(She stood up and held her shoulders tight...)...hume prem ho gaya hai moti...hume shenshah se prem ho gaya hai... tabhi to... hum jahan bhi dekhte hai...jidhar bhi drishti dalte hai...har or...har disha me sirf wohi dikhayi dete hai hume...hume prem ho gaya hai moti...tumhari sakhi ko prem ho gaya hai...oh...moti...moti...moti...(she twirled around everywhere in the room... out of happiness...)....itni pransannata ka anubhav to aaj se purva kabhi nahi hua hume...kaise bataye tumhe kitna adhbut hai ye sab...hum bahut khush hai moti...bahut khus...

(moti's eyes got filled with tears of happiness...finally after so many days...she was seeing her old jodha...the same frazile...happy and lively jodha...she silently prayed to kanha and thanked him for bringing love in her life...she was feeling extremely happy to see jodha like that...she tried to catch jodha and finally got hold on her...)

Moti:- are bus ...bus ...humari rani sa...ab kya pure harem ko ekatr karogi yaha...waise bhi un sab ko to keval avsar matra hi chahiye hota hai aapke kaksh ke bahar kaan lagane ka...

Jodha:- (extremely happy...) sunte hai to sunne do moti...harem to kya...hum to sare agra ko...sari duniya ko chikh chikh kar batana chahte hai...ke hum kya anubhav kar rahe hai...ke hum kitne prasann hai...

(she looked at kanha's idol...ran to it and sat in front of him...with teary eyes and a wide smile...)

Precap:- jodha dancing and jalal showering flowers on her...teri diwani 😊

Thanku friends...😊

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Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
love u yaar pallavi "THE SHERNI"...mmmuuuaaahhh...
u r lovely yaar...

wwwooowww such a fast update...thanx a ton...
would be reading it at night dear...BT CANT CONTROL MY HAPPINESS...
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Posted: 11 years ago
UNRES...
awesome update dear...👏
fab job yaar⭐️⭐️⭐️
jodha is hving illusions of jalal😆😆😆...lovely dear
hey plz na continue soon na...want jodha and jalal romance na...jaldi laao na...😊
Edited by SShreShthA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

Thanku shree...
glad you like it😊


u r most welcome sherni...
I nt only like but i luv it yaar...
u r really a wonderful writter dear...

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