FF *Ishqzaade* Chapter 27 updated on page150*THREAD CLOSED* - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.r

Awesome 👏 loved the mother son talk ... They need some of it in the serial too.

PS:- missed Jodha in this update 😭... Agle chapter mein sirf aur sirf Jodha aur Jalal ...no kabab mein haddi ... Please 😳

yaar..jab tak mehel me hai tab tak to haddiya rahegi hi...😆😃
but aapne kaha hai to thik hai😆
thanku😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks..loved it..great job..well done...fabulous

khuda kasam ek din hum esi update zaroor likhege jo aapke comment ko badlne per majbur kar dega😆...manyata...thanku😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello friends...😊
here is a bonus update for u all...😃
but this one is a bit shorter as i wanted to sum up the previous chapter in it...
so that i can write new scenes in the next one...⭐️
forgive the writing mistakes...😭
i promise...next one will be a longer one...👍🏼

Chapter 16(Part 2) :-

(Finally jalal gathered all his strength and decided to confess his feelings to his mother...as there was no way out...he had to do that...)(With much difficulty he looked in hamida's eyes...his cheeks were already red with the color of blush...his eyes were requesting his mother not to make him speak...but she denied)

Hamida:- agar aap ye sochte hai ke esi masum shakale banane se hum aapko jaane dege...to aapki malumat ke liye hum apko bata de... Ke apka andaza bilkul galat hai...hum apko tab tak yaha se nahi jane dege...jab tak aap sab kuch saaf saaf hume nahi bata dete...boliye...jodha begum hi wo shaks hai na??

(jalal came to know today only...that his mother was way ahead than him in stubbornness...he thought to himself...."I can't win over these ladies...they are just too ziddi to handle..."...he gave up finally in front of his mother's determination...looked in her eyes and spoke up finally ...all bushing...)

Jalal:- (nodded his head in a yes...) haan ammi jaan...(he took a little pause)

jodha hi wo shaks hai...jinhone hume badlne per majbur kar diya hai...jinhone humare liye zindagi ke mayne badal kar rakh diye hai...

Haan ammi jaan...jodha hi wo shakas hai...jinhone hume jina sikhaya hai...jinhone apke pather dil bte ko insaan banaya hai...(with every passing second his smile was going more and more wider and heartbeats growing more and more faster...)...pehle humare liye jazbaat aur zindagi...lafzo se badhker aur kuch nahi the...hume inka matlab samjhane wali jodha hai...humare dil ko dhadkan se rubru karane wali jodha hai...unhone hume wo anmol nazrana diya hai jo shayad ... na kabhi kisi ne kisi ko diya hai aur... na hi kabhi de sakta hai...unhone....(his voice became a bit glitch...a lone tear roll down his eyes... )...unhone hume humara dil tohfe me diya hai ammi...humari zindagi...humari jine ki aarzu...humare jazbaat...nazar kiye hai unhone hume...(He held her shoulders tight...) haan ammi jaan haan...mohabbat ho gayi hai hume ...aur us chahat ka naam...aapki wajah ka naam...jodha hai...

Hume jodha se mohabbat ho gayi hai ammi jaan...unse ishq ho gaya hai hume...(a wide smile covered his face completely with tears in his eyes...he started laughing softly...his voice echoed again and again from every direction...)

(at first hamida was not able to believe at her ears...she was feeling extremely happy...just out of this world...she has become speechless...she dint know what to say...how to react that time...she tumbled a bit at her place...jalal quickly held her...)

Jalal:-(worried) ammi jaaan...

Hamida:-(composing herself) ya khuda...yakin hi nahi ho raha hume to...kahin khushi ke mare humari jaan na nikal jaaye...samajh nahi aa raha ke kya kare...kya kahe ...kaise apni khushi ka izhaar kare... kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha...

Jalal:- are are are...ammi jaan...araam se...

Hamida:- aaram se kaise reh sakte hai hum jalal...apko shayad andaza nahi ...kitni badi baat hai ye humare liye...humare bte ko ...humare jalal ko mohabbat ho gayi hai...humari zindagi ki sabse badi khwahish thi ye jalal...humesha se humari ye chahat thi ke aapki zindagi me bhi mohabbat dastak de...kyuki mohabbat hi wo maraham hai jo bade se bade zakham ko bhar dene ki kuwwat rakhti hai...ek dua maangi thi us parvardigar se...is tarah aur itni jaldi puri hogi kabhi socha bhi nahi tha humne to...jante hai jalal...jodha ko jab pehli baar dekha tha humne...pata nahi kyu...per hume tabhi ye ehsaas ho gaya tha...ke jodha hi wo shaks hai jo tumhe jina sikha sakti hai...wohi hai...jo humare bte ko pathar se insaan bana sakti hai...aur dekho...usne wo kar dikhaya...(jalal blushed at this)..jine ke sath sath sharmana bhi sikha diya humare bachhe ko...(and she pinched his cheeks lovingly...)

Jalal:- ammi jaan...(made a puppy like face...)

(hamida caressed his hairs...and hugged him tightly out of happiness...kissed his forehead again and again...suddenly a thought came in her mind...)

Hamida:- acha jalal...aapne jodha se izhaar e mohabbat kiya ya nahi...ya phir wo bhi hume hi karna padega aapki taraf se...kya wo janti hai in sab ke bare me...aapne bataya use...kya wo bhi apse...

Jalal:-(interrupting her in b/w) bus ammi jaan...bahut fayda utha liya aapne humari sharafat ka...ab kuch sawal apni chaheti bahu ke liye bhi to bachaker rakhiye...sare jawab hum de esa zaruri to nahi...aur unke jazbaat wo jaane...uske bare me hume kaise pata ho sakta hai...aapko humare bare me janna tha na ...so humne bata diya...aage aap jane aur aapki chaheti bahu...

Hamida:- (in a mischievous tone...) tevar dekhker to yahi lagta hai ke aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai...hmmm???(Giggles...)

Jalal:- (blushes even harder at this...) ammi jaan...????(Amazed)...

(hamida does a hand movement...*nazar utarne wala*...)

Hamida:- allah kare aapki khushiyo ko kisi ki nazar na lage...aur aap dono ki Jodi humesha salamat rahe...hum kal hi ajmer sharif ke liye niklege...taki allah tala ka shukriya pure dhang se ada kar sake...ya khuda...apni rehmet ese hi banaye rakhna in dono per...badi se badi musibat bhi inke rishte ko na hila paaye...aapse yahi dua hai...acha ab hum chalte hai jalal...safar ki taiyariya bhi to karni hogi...hum nahi chahte ke unki khidmat me koi bhi kami rahe humari taraf se...khuda hafiz...

(She again kissed his forehead and left the room...)

(jalal felt really happy...jodha was indeed really lucky for him ...just because of her...the rift b/w him and his mother could be accomplished...he thanked her and his allah silently smiling...he was feeling much relieved now as if a huge burden got removed from his soul...)

Precap:- jodha in bath tub...and jalal pouring water on her...😉

Note:- and i will update next year now😆

sorry for the bakwaas update...but plz like kar dena...heheh😆

Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol If I ever dared to throw my chappals at you I would want them back!!!🤣 But I don't wear chappals so you safe my love!! And you aren't only safe because I don't own chappals... You are safe because this is one fabulous update!! Blushing Jalal with his puppy face is too cute!!! Haye Allah My favourite part was when Hamida pinched his cheeks!!🤣 I wanna pinch his cheeks all the time he is to0o0o0o cute!! I just wanna take him home and teach him about life😆😆😆
Your dialogues and writing are beautiful beyond words🤗 I can only say that I wish I could write like that😭😳😳😳
My favourite lines:unhone hume humara dil tohfe me diya hai ammi...humari zindagi...humari jine ki aarzu...humare jazbaat...nazar kiye hai unhone hume...
I think this is the most beautiful expression of love I have ever read!! Subhanallah👏⭐️👏⭐️ Thank you for the update🤗 And thank you for the pm... Keep it up!!❤️Add you better update soon!!😆😆😆 If you really wanna update next year I will go specially and buy chappals to throw at you!!😡😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was nt bakwaas rather it was nice update...thanks 4pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya baat hai an update so soon...thanks.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just read last 2 chapters. thank u so much for updating. i am so glad that hb and jalal patched up and shared their feelings. thank u once again bec after watching today's episode of JA, i was feeling sad and ur update uplifted my mood. i love the precap and don't tadpao us.plzzz update soon and thx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a lovely chapter ... 😊
Loved the flashback , Hameeda and Jalal bonding juz great ... ❤️
It was written wonderfully and it was emotional ... ❤️
Also loved how Jalal felt sorry for hurting his mother and apologised ... ❤️
I loved every part of this chapter , esp the part where Hameeda felt Jalal's heart and Jalal blushed at the mention of Jodha's name ... ❤️
Great job 👏
Keep up the good work .. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh My God!❤️! 2 updates in a day and not only updates, Brilliant and fantastic updates👏⭐️👏⭐️👏 You are truly a rockstar writer my Sherni Pallavi! ❤️❤️This was a superb superb❤️ and mind-blowing update⭐️⭐️⭐️ All the blushing and emotions perfectly written⭐️👏👏❤️ I am in love with your dialogues!❤️❤️ You are the best dialogue writer❤️❤️ on Forum I tell you😛😳😳 You surpass your talent in each of your updates⭐️⭐️ ❤️❤️This update was so heart-touching!😭😭😊 ❤️❤️The flashback scene and present reality👏!❤️ Wow creative imagination to portray the difference that Jalal is experiencing❤️❤️!👏⭐️👏 Hameeda and Jalal convo ❤️and Jalal realising his mistakes❤️ and hence apologising to Hameeda👏❤️ ! All SUBHANALLAH scenes❤️❤️! 👏👏👏 You should replace the current writer of serial❤️ 😛😛 All in all fantastic chapter! ❤️❤️Love you darling!❤️ And precap! UFFF!!😳😳 Update soon!👏👏🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

khuda kasam ek din hum esi update zaroor likhege jo aapke comment ko badlne per majbur kar dega😆...manyata...thanku😳

🤣 I was thinking the same!! 🤣

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