Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai - 28 July 2025 EDT
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 23
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai July 29, 2025 Episode Discussion Thread
MAIRA IS SAD 😞28.7
BALH Naya Season EDT Week #7: July 28-Aug 1
CRYING FAMILY 29.7
Gen 5 Storyline
In the ruins....I found you ❤️-A Prashiv ss
Anupamaa 29 July 2025 Written Update & Daily Discussions Thread
If you had the power of vanishing one nepo kid?
Will Dhadak 2 surpass Saiyaara? 😎
Kajol screams like Anjali (in K3G) for Nysa’s graduation
Will WAR 2 Surpass Saiyaara
Tanushree Dutta Requests People To Cooperate With PM Modi
19 years of Omkara
Official Trailer - Andaaz 2
Anupama back to Shah house , at Baa's feet !
Who did it better?
Piyu you are too fast for me girl with his one . . You churned updates so fast i just could not keep up . . . . Read everything in one go from where i had left it was so well written be it jodha s confusion in the temple when jalal is injured . The reason anjuman is so attached to jalal reminded me of junoon , she was such an interesting character but what a tragic end . . How poetic finally she got what she wanted . . I did know it was maham who had something to do with jalal s mom s demise but you even killed humayun :o not fair just not fair . . . . Poor jalal his world just turned upside down in one night and he had absolutely no one and he blamed himself jodha s troubles . . So complex you always manage to spin a web with such well written characters and their psyche . . . . Your descriptions as usual transport me to a place where i can visualize everything from curtains to the jewellery . . . . So it was the brute adham all along but he was way too intelligent in this one 🤣 he can never use his brains so much on the show . . He managed to hoodwink everyone. . Another suprise was mainawati wow i was cheering for her when jodha put the garland on jalal . . . Every inch a royal . . .
Vibz First of all terribly sorry for replying this much late to you.I wanted to come here at ease aram se and reply to the wonderful long detailed review.Thanks so much for taking time to read ,appreciate and review it!!🤗BTW AGreed about the pace.I was literally on a roll to finish this😆😆😆I am glad that you enjoyed Anjuman's character.So true indeed she stuck on to Jalaal because of the traumatic incident the changed her life forever much like Junoon where Kesar too undergoes a similar situation.However Anjuman's story is not that much deep
Regarding Adham he he his muscles size is the only worthy thing in his body brain intelliegent that but all went haywire in the end😆😆😆
I missed kartikeya i wanted to read more about him he is a sweetheart i always imagined him as younger version of man singh . . .
Piyu the best part about your ff s is the hero is not the typical alpha male , macho and someone who will suffer in silence they have a child hidden inside which makes them so vulnerable they are not ashamed to cry when they are hurt making them more realistic, endearing as we all like to mother them 😆
Aww YES!! Vibz you can sense very well my aversion to ALPHA males .That's why too off late I have completely lost interest in JA😆😆😆
suryabhan leaves a bitter taste in my mouth . . What a man. . Dont know even if i should refer him as one first he never loved her he just stopped all contact with her . . Now he is married and wants jodha to go with him in the darkness of the night muh chupake what a lump of tard jodha would never have been accepted there and would have a horrible pathetic life what was he even thinking when he came with jalal does nt he even think what harm can a scorned woman cause ?
in the end they already have four kids and a fifth one is on the way in five years 😲 jalal is too virile eh 🤣 the possessive jodha is cute . . .
🤣🤣🤣 Yup JA must be spinning in their graves reading the kind of bachon ki team I created for them LOL😆😆😆
However Suryabhan did get his piece of mind with Jodha showing her the real mirror and how she confessed her true feelings for Jalaal😳
One scene which i loved was jodha playing the sitar and jalal the flute it was such a nice visual . . They were in harmony then . . . Jodha definately feel bad for her jalal had peeled the layers of her cleverly guarded heart and stripped her bare but she would always cover it up again with the harsh reality . . You literally had me shocked she was taught by amer s best courtesan to seduce a man 🤣. . Finally the age difference and her insecurities catch up with her and she is ready to consummate the marriage but thank god she opened her mouth before or she would have definately regretted later bedding the man she thinks is responsible for her father s murder . . I wanted to know what happens next but you cleverly had the flashback as the next update . . . When they finally do it for jalal its just another one his dreams poor jodha she he does not remember anything but one of the highlights of this ff is the morning after . . You wrote it beautifully and explains jodha s desires so well . . . . How she finally accepted him completely . . . One scene where i just could not stop laughing was the tiger scene the girl smartly gives him the credit but the scene where she wants him to come to bed and her pretends to be busy made me feel for anjuman once again . . That woman had had a tough life wed at fourteen used by adham then his dwindling interest, his almost wedding to jodha and the woman s outburst and how she hinted to keep jodha away till jalal is not in town . That brute kicked her mercilessly till she lost her child which she got after so many years you did say jodha was luck she ended not only her mom s , amers but even anjuman s barren streak . . .
🤣🤣🤣 I am still like this when I wrote that scene ☺️but yes before the communion they certainly had to clear and bury their past.Without clearing the debris that had accumulated within those 5 years ,it was impossible for them to start afresh ...
Their consummation was funny😆😆😆The FF did begin with his dream of a beautiful SR but finally he ended up thinking his consummation as his dream,😛
Jalal in your ff can read and write that was a welcome change . . . He even wrote letters to her awww that was so cute . . . .
he he padha likha😉
This was such a treat to read pihu. . .continue to write more . . . . . I need to review the other s as well but it will get there :)
I am sad that this story has ended.. but, don't they say that every good thing comes to an end?
I want to thank you for creating this beautiful journey that touched me to the core and wish you happiness and love and I'll be looking forward to the next story!
Originally posted by: aanchal_c
hey plz start another ff again
Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Thanks for the request will definitely try to write something😃
Originally posted by: les-miserables
Dear, Manzilmukul.
This was a wonderful, sweet and well written story, and the last few chapters were priceless.. It was so rewarding to watch and read these two characters grow and how they overcome difficulties.. The last scene in the epilogue made me laugh and cry.. it was filled with emotions, it made my heart ache.I am sad that this story has ended.. but, don't they say that every good thing comes to an end?
I want to thank you for creating this beautiful journey that touched me to the core and wish you happiness and love and I'll be looking forward to the next story!
Originally posted by: srividhya68
hi,
i read all the parts in a go...
wow really super updatesloved ur storyand u r an awesome writerthanks for this story