FF ~A Midsummer Night's Dream~epilogue pg 45 - Page 34

Hi dear

Im so sorry for commenting soo late

I caught up from part 5 till the epilogue

Im disappointed that this story has come to an end 😒. I thought we still had a long way to go 😆. Im really gonna miss it. Thanks for all those longg updates 🤗...

Every single chapter was amazing and beautifully written 👏.

It really got hot towards the end of chapter 6 😳😆... so much passion ☺️. I just loved how u described everything. It was so wonderful until jodha burst out on jalal

I loved how u described jalal's state when it was said that adham will marry jodha ⭐️. Gosh it was that sinking feeling 😭...

And I was so happy when jodha read all those letters that jalal had written. Finally she knew of his love, yeaning, loneliness and grief.

I cant believe the level which adham stooped down to 😡. Such a heinous act. He created such a horrible misunderstanding 😭. I always wondered what on earth could have happened that led these 2 states who were on good terms with each other, to war.

And not forgetting what he did to anjuman... poor woman 😭, its understandable why she became like that. I couldn't stand in her in the beginning but I felt so bad for her after knowing everything. She saved jodha's life. She did the right thing by finishing adham off.

I really didn't expect much from bairam and mahamanga, so wasn't surprised by their betrayal 🤢. All of them were so disgusting. Poor jalal had the misfortune of being surrounded by traitors.

And just when I thought everything is going to be OK between jalal-jodha after their moment 😳, there he goes and stumbles upon jodha's letters to suryabhan . I think jalal suffered the most in this story with so many heartbreaks... and the audacity of him to go and find surya and bring him back for jodha . That was the limit.. I liked how jodha fired him for that.

But awww, their reunion was sweet n hilarious 😳😆. Im so happy they got their happily ever after...

Btw, they had 4 kids right? 2 daughters, twin boys .. and not forgetting 1 on the way😳

Im really gonna miss this. Hope u write another ff😛

Thanks for entertaining us n sending me all the pmz

Take care

sorry double post

Originally posted by: daisydee425

awesome updates
loved it

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

Wwwooowww...
Ur ff is most amazing luvd it very much...
U potrait d jalal in the most amazing way which would b ideal in todays generation also...
Luvd d Epilogue...

Feeling bad dat it is ended bt I know it is a ff which hv to b finished...
U r amazing while reading it feel as if I m watching some movie... Marvalleous n gr8 job... Thanx

Originally posted by: leelu0001

a beautiful n wonderful end, loved each n every chapter of your ff

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

Wow loved it
so jalaal actually bought suryabhan
and jodha her anger on jalaal was really needed
i really loved ur story
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: barbie100

amazing...!!!

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Awesome

Originally posted by: Leki

Lovely part...

Thank you so much for writing this amazing piece of work... loved it...

Do comeup with more...

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

wow really sweet epilogue

loved ur story

and u r an awesome writer

thanks for this story and pm also

Originally posted by: shivalkar

👏a very good fan fiction but sad that ended

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

superb as usual. why ended so early? m going to miss.

Originally posted by: SilverFairy

Wow That A Story. (:
I Really Loved The Ending.

Jodha Getting Angry Was The Best Part In Finally Telling Jalal That She Loves Only Him. (:

Awsome. Thanks For Writing a JA Story Piyu. (:

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

nice ending and loved the epi.