FF ~A Midsummer Night's Dream~epilogue pg 45 - Page 28

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

again so much emotional story. continue soon. waiting now for their lovestory

Originally posted by: Leki

Amazing update... Jalal was betrayed whole his life by the ppl whom he thought they loved him... the whole confrontation was well potrayed...

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

love this ff..very well written...do continue soon.

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Very emotional update yaar.

Originally posted by: -Khush-

Khoon Bhari Taang ! 😲 🤣
Haila piu ! Itne murders ek sath ! 🤣
OMG OMG OMG!! ROFLAMAO Khush you are too much 🤣🤣🤣 BTW Kekta k show pe based FF hai kuch dramatic toh hona hi chaiye tha na😉
MA, BK, Adham , Humayun and anjuman ! Thanks for finally clearing the MU 😆
Poor Anjuman ! She was a bitter woman too but at least for her she loved Jalal out of mistaken sympathy ... rather than that leechad Adham ! 🤢
Poor anju ! But kudos to her for showing Adham his place ! 😎
Yes Anjuman is indeed not exactly a vmap here.She had suffered a lot and mistook the sympathy for her as a bonding which filled the void in her life..BUt yes Adham did indeed get the right justice😆😆😆Mar gaya that leech...

Update next part FAST ! With some hot romance !

Originally posted by: --Janvie--

OMG I readed all these 4 updates together!!😲 😆

And I'm just Speechless yaar!!😳(I always go speechless after reading the magic of your words!!😉 😳 😆)It was Just Mindblowing and Terrific !!👏 👏 ⭐️Superb,Amazing,Awesome all the words are less to describe the beauty and magic of your words!!Just Brilliantly Perfect dude!!👏 👏 ⭐️

First of all Thank you so much for such long and back to back updates,No matter even if your updates may come a little late,They statisfy all the readers😃 🤗 🤗(But The last part left me wanting eagerly and greedily for more!!😳 😆)

First of all thank you so much Janvie for taking out time to appreciate the story and write such a detailed and wonderful review.Those words make me overwhelmed.Thanks a ton for those kind words of appreciation🤗
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You described the whole past thing with such flawless beauty!!

Anjuman's pain was the thing that made me feel really bad for her!!!😭😭 🤢

You described her misery,longing,agony and that pain so very well!!It touched My heart!!❤️ ❤️You are an Amazing Writer👏 👏 ⭐️

The charachter of Anjuman was not bad from the beginning,infact She was a very kind girl(married at just a small age of 14)And then suffered a cruel fate at the hands of her brutual husband!!She is a soul longing for love,care from a true compainion.

She was nice to Jodha there when She gone to her room and wiped Jodha's tears being grateful for what her She did and remarking her as a sister,Even happy with Akdha's marriage!!She never had any THOSE type of feelings for Jalal before.

But then one fateful event that She lost her much wanted child at the hands of her husband so mercilessly and was broken-Then She found that solace and companion in Jalal as She is someone who craves(and deserves love)But Jalal care for her as a soul-sister!!

Thanks once again🤗The character of Anjuman was always etched out to be tragic a HUMAN devoid of love and betrayed by life finds solace in her false hopes from a man who cares for her.However her goodness of her heart is not at all lost which makes her REAL and one can never ever hate her

Well I really want to slap Adham Khan of ur FF tight on his face!!😡Bcoz of him all the MU's and miseries took placed in this story!!

A man who cannot respect Women deserve a punishment worse than death!!😡He saw them as the objects to fullfill his lust and throw thew away when get bored just as with Anjuman!!(Here I understood why in your update some 2-3 weeks before where Anjuman was saying really bitter words to Jodha that when her beauty will fades,Jalal's interest will vanish as well and She will become some furniture in the harem-All that makes sense to me now,I don't hate her for all that now!!She have gone through such a bitter and heart-wrenching fate which made her what She is now)

I so wish You can make her charachter positive coz I don't want her to act as a Villian of Akdha's story!!MA,Bairam Khan and AK are there for that purpose!!Pls Don't make her Grey also!!I wish She can stay as a sister like figure to Jodha!!😊 😳
Of course though justice is delayed but in this story it will never be denied.I have never intended to portray Anjuman as negative In fact she is my fav character here.She is vulnerable with the shades of grey with a human heart longing for love and care.

Jalal and Jodha both are victims of MU's created by Adham Khan.Bcoz of him the war took place and all that happened.And Now I'm pretty sure He have killed Raja Bharmal too!!😡

I really loved how Bharmal thought Jalal is perfect match for Jodha and her "Saubhagya" and later how his words made Jodha chose Jalal over that creep AK😆And That whole Garland/Varmala and Marriage sequence was so Amazingly and Beautifully Written!!⭐️

Felt bad about Bharmal's death also!!😔
Yes both the poor souls have been wronged by a culprit and Misunderstanding of fate and circumstances .So slowly and steadily as mysteries will unfold ,they would understand each other's pain and concerns.Right now there are too many issues to be dealt with.

And Ye Suryabhan ka kya drama hai yaar?!😕Mujhe pura doubt hai tum par that You are surely bringing him back in future to create problems between Akdha?!?!😡😭
He he😛😛😛Me chup Mystery will unfold soon😆😆😆

And Loved the last part where Jodha and Jalal poured out their hearts in front of each other.❤️ 😳 ❤️

That was again very Wonderfully and Effectively Written!!👏 👏 ⭐️Loved it totally!!❤️ ❤️

How Jodha let out all that bitternes and hatred She held for Jalal after her father's demise holding him responsible and Then How Jalal let out all that longing and love He felt for Jodha but never shared with her.Both opened up and now The fact of Jodha's insult by Aadham and all those lies of AK are out to Jalal and that lie of Adham regarding insult of Shenshah Humayun by Bharmal opened to Jodha now and I'm sure all the remaining MU's between Akdha will be cleared as well.(Atleast I hope and want so.😳 😆Fingers Crossed!!😃 😉 😳
As you can see in the next chapter already the MU's are indeed cleared between them and her bitterness indeed has come to an end ab agey Romance ho romance hai😆😆😆Thanks again for all those words of appreciation..Blushing all the while☺️

Well I want to say Jalal touched My heart more than anything here!!❤️ 😳How He loved Jodha so much that all the things of her that payal,Meera's feather and The letters describing his feelings for Jodha everything is secured by him like some precious Diamonds!!And He's right,If He the things related to Jodha is so precious to him then How can Jalal kill her FATHER??!😳
Yes of course if inanimate objects associated with Jodah were so precious to him,how can he kill her father😳

Hope Jodha also understands all this soon and see his pure love!!And then accept that She loves him too!! 😉 😳I just hope and pray that all the MU's cleared out in the next update!!!😊 😳
She definitely will.A tender loving heart's yearning can never go unheard of Right😳

And Ya In one of your updates 2-3 weeks ago,That MA and BK scene have cracked me up so much!!😲 🤣Uff!!🤣
Kahani thodi Philmy hai😉🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I have been a silent reader of this FF from a very long time now!!😳But The thing is I comment on almost all the stories(FF's,SS's,OS's) on this forum,But never did here Even after This being among My most fav FF is Bcoz I always find myself at loss of words to appreciate you!!Just ALWAYS!!😳No matter how much I wanted to comment everytime but just couldn't bcoz You left me too Amazed and Spellbound to type anything in appreciation you know!!😛 😉 😳

Thankyou so much for sending me PM's!!😊(You have seen My like I guess!!😉 😆)I couldn't help myself but comment this time!!😳

Pls Continue Soon.😊 😳

And Accept My Buddy request and PM me from next time too!!😃 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: --Janvie--

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OMG!!Such an Heart-wreching and Heart-touching update at the same time!!😲But Loved it yaar!!❤️Just Awesome and Mind-blowing!!👏 👏 ⭐️
Thanks once again hun for all that praise and flattering words of appreciation...I am delighted to read this long and wonderful review Thanks so much🤗

So Finally Jodha readed the letters and understood the depth of Jalal's selfless love!!😳JWOW!!⭐️
Yes she indeed read those and found out the outpourings of an embittered heart ,the love and warmtha nd the kind of yearning he had for her😳

And Jalal saw the another side of Anjuman which left him shocked and feeling disgusted at himself.
Yes it was indeed a matter of shock to him

And That bloody Adham Khan killed Shenshah Humayun!!😲 😡 😡And tried to force Jodha and tried to blame on her when Jalal came there😲That Creep AK...Hate him!!😡 😡
He met his fate..All his wrong doings were avenged😡

Loved how Jalal trusted Jodha over everything and that dialogue"Hum sab kuch maan sakte hai...Par yeh nahi ki Jodha begum ke daaman me daag hai!!"⭐️

Jalal ne hum sab ka dil bahut pehle hi jeet liya tha but Jodha ka bhi puri tarah se jeet liya!!❤️ 😉 😳
Yes If you remember in that last update Jodha had questioned him about TRUST and LOVE ..so finally he does indeed prove that he LOVES her the most and TRUSTS HER ...

Finally truth came out in front of Akdha that It was Adham Khan who killed Bharmal and weaved all those lies to Humayun.Every mess was created by him.😡
Yes he was the culprit who framed Jalaal and killed Raja Bharmal😡

But Here what I loved most when Jodha said that "Her husband will never do that with her,with his Jodha."Finally She accepted him and his pure love and the faith and trust She shows with that one line speaks volumes of her emotions😉 😳And I really loved this scene alot!!❤️It's Great that both Jodha and Jalal now trust each other so much!!😃This Same TRUST will play an important part in their relationship in future too,strengthening it with each step.😉 😊 😳
Yes though slowly and steadily yet they did indeed reach a stage where they now mutually trust each other and understand each other's pain.Though its not yet Love realisation for Jodha but she indeed does TRUST HIM!!

And OMG Anjuman won My heart too!!❤️ ❤️ 😳Loved that scene how She saved Jodha and then stabbed Aadham!!⭐️She was so right,He cannnot be called as an "Shauhar/Husband".He is a Bloody Ba****d,And That's all He is!!😡 😡

So Anjuman came to her senses and felt disgusted of herself after Jalal pushed her!!Hmm,Makes sense; She must have realized her mistakes and felt guilty of her deeds or I should say wrong feelings for Jalal!!And Then was going to attempt suicide too!!!😲

I wish She wouldn't have died but then I guess her charachter was at a stage where She needed peace which She could never have got being alive.😳 😳So I guess whatever happened was for good of everybody here!!😳 😳 😳
As I have already maintained..Anjuman was supposed to be TRAGIC yet HUMAN ...she did indeed ave Vulnerabilities but finally she did serve the purpose of Saviing Jodha and killing Adham ..Justice in the TRUE SENSE OF THE WORD

And Coming to the last scene,BK and MA showed their true colours!!It's Good They are Dead now!!But what I loved the most was Jodha fighting for Jalal!!That Scene was Just AMAZING!!👏 👏 ⭐️Loved it to the core!!❤️
Yes they did stand for each other and with each other ...Thanks again for your kind words of appreciation😳

Jalal is broken now!!Every person close to him from childhood,whom He loved and trusted blindly more than anything betrayed him!!Be it BK,MA or Even Anjuman!!

And Moreover,He lost his father!!Really felt bad about Humayun's death!!

Now Jalal must be in an emotional dillema!!And Only Jodha's patience,love and care will bring him out of it I guess!!😊 😳 😳
It will now be a very tricky situation for Jodha becoz Jalaal is almost shattered and the sudden responsibility of the whole kingdom is on him RIGHT now..It will the test for both of them that how will they both manage to come out of this GREAT LOSS!!

Waiting to see how their love-story will unfold now and how the story will take turn from here!!😊 😳 😳

Pls Continue Soon!!😊I just love this FF so much!!❤️Just Can't wait!!😳

And Thanks for the PM dear!!😃 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: virgo24

Dear Piu, I enjoy reading your work and thank-you for updating me! I do not mind at all if you take time to reply and/or compile these chapters to share with us because the wait is always worth it! You are doing fabulous. I agree with you completely, Urmilla was the unsung heroine of Ramayana. She was the epitome of silence. I wish more was said and written about her. Have you ever read the Ravanayan comics by Vivek Goel and Vijayendra Mohanty. . . they went into depth of Ravan the protagonist . . .their perspective was surprising how he became Ravan. He still is dusht for me and will always be! If they can picture and research the life of Ravan how could they not for someone as saintly as Urmilla?
Dear Virgo,
Ahh Thanks and I am glad that you like reading this fiction🤗
@ BOLD No I haven't read that but I am sure now I would want to read that too .Regarding Urmila yes !! She was definitely the unsung heroine of Ramayan.However Saket written by Maithili Sharan Gupta is quite vocal about Urmila but still the major versions which depict her plight are the RAM KATHAS of South India...I have a very interesting collection of Lakshman Urmila stories compiled..If you are interested I can give you the links..However I cannot resist posting this piece of fiction based on Urmila's suffering ..A bit controversial but indeed worth a read..Hope you enjoy it.

.http://cms.boloji.com/index.cfm?md=Content&sd=Articles&ArticleID=2045
BTW another favourate character from the past is Draupadi.History has its share of bias towards women and Draupadi's tale is indeed tragic as well as inspiring...Nowadays reading THE PALACE OF ILLUSIONS BY Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni.It has a very interesting perspective from Draupadi's view point😳

Now onto the chapters. . .I must says, the page brakes and heads help when interchanging between 5 years ago and present. So many questions running in my mind. Will Jalal and Humayun decipher Adham's conspiracy against Jodha and Amer? Humayun seemed to have his doubts, however I am disappointed that he pushed them out of his mind. Jodha was right when exclaiming to Jalal: if you love your Jodha then you should have faith in your Jodha. Will Jalal correct his mistake now? It cannot bring back time, but it can heal Jodha and the hurt and pain she is suffering from.

Ahh yes the headers are much needed as the scene does shift from past to present and so many different things are going on simultaneously.Virgo I think pretty much most of your questions have been indeed answered in the next update but yes..One thing is for sure Jodha does indeed talks about LOVE AND TRUST going hand in hand and i the subsequent update we do see Jalaal fulfilling her words to the T.he does TRUSTS HER when she needs him the most

You softened Anjuman for us. I felt her pain when she shared her honey coated neem words with Jodha while dressing her for her pheras. Why was Maham so oblivious of her daughter-in-laws plight? "Anjuman burst into tears on the verge of an emotional breakdown" due to Jodha's bold decision. . . and Anjuman again softened and expressed her gratitude with: " Aap aap each mien kisi janam mien humari chhoti behein hi rani hongi." It was a sweet departure on her end . . .

should she not have been forever indebted that Jodha unknowingly or not saved her from having a sister-wive and thus "saving" her "marriage"? But then everything turns for the worse. Adam butchered everything, the way he savagely abuses his wife and life before it entered this world. Now I understand how Anjuman grew attached to Jalal. Jalal filled the void in which she yearned all these years from her husband. Unfortunately she took his company for "love".
The character of Anjuman was always etched out to be tragic a HUMAN devoid of love and betrayed by life finds solace in her false hopes from a man who cares for her.However her goodness of her heart is not at all lost which makes her REAL and one can never ever hate her.Yes she was the one who could ahve been the sister of Jodha forever but after the devastating trauma and years of being battered by an animal husband ,she clings on to false beliefs and gathers the pieces of her life in an illusion of being loved when she was only being cared for.In jalaal she mirrors her yearnings for true love all these years .Don't we cling on to even a tiny twig in a flood ,similarly Anjuman here behaved like Dubte ko tinke ka sahara..She tried to capture sand in her fists ALAS IT SLIPPED breaking all her beliefs and illusions

I absolutely hate Adam. He is such a cheap man! They also show him to be the same in the serial. I do not know whether or not Moti will get her justice, however I cannot wait for you to punish Adam for his deeds in your story. He is simply a horrible person. Anjuman deserves a much better person. Why could she simply not divorce him? Did they not allow the saying "thalak" said thrice and marriage annulled. You showed that she was pregnant for a brief time pregnant, had the thought of a child not once brought a change of heart in Adam? He had no respect, not even for the mother of his future child. He is a rakshas!
Virgo yes Talaq was indeed prevalent those days too but even in this 21st century divorces are looked down upon in conservative homes.Do you think a woman in the 16th century had that much liberty of choosing?In those times women in the society served two BASIC purposes according to the suffocating patriarchal system of the society-PLEASURE AND PREGENY...The status of women in medieval India was an all time low and Anjuman here was no different.

I like how in your version Maham does not care about Jodha's religion and was eager to accept Jodha as her daughter-in-law and for political alliance. . . 2 birds with one stone. I do not like the fact that it was simply for an heir and that she assumed Anjuman to be useless. What if it was her son's problem who could not have a child? Why always blame the women? "Anjuam was just a begum by name to be tossed in the corner and lost in some corner of the palace and replaced." Like mother, like son. Did she not ever teach her son how to respect women? These were carefully picked words that pierce Anjuman's heart and the readers to understand what sorrows she must have faced.
Yes this version of MA is more interested in power and grandchildren and hardly acres about religion.As I have already told Anjumanthose were the days when women actually had almost no say in anything.Their only purpose was to bear children ..Forget 16th century even the educated lot in today's world blame women for not bearing a child..Sad but true The plight of women in the society was pathetic and the crimes still prevalent against them gives me shivers.

I was surprised when Adam proposed for the marriage. I wondered how will Jodha and Jalal get married? I smiled with relief when she put the garland on Jalal. Jodha's smiling at her victory and Rani Mainawatis triumphant evil smile! Amer is now safe! Woah!

I liked the following lines: "She was under some strange obsession to set things right take charge not even realizing what this meant. All that she had in her mind that she was not the one to be defeated anymore." These words reflect her strong character and being a fiery rajput princess.

It was also an interesting twist how she asked for a condition and it was her every wish to be respected and fulfilled . I applaud her quick thinking at a time of grief. I am pondering over her fathers words exclaiming how Jalal is her bhagya, was she trying to fulfill his last wish? Did she still have hope in Jalal? . . . The way she held onto Jalal for safety from evil Adam was surprising. Also, I was also happy that Humayun was not opposed to Jodha's sudden action, instead relieved since he did not want to see indignity being done to a woman. Oh gosh, my smile disappeared wen Jalal refused to be married and walked away.

Virgo ,the answer to your question lies in that line itself.If you remember Mainawati's words to Jodha where she says that you can either chose to be brutally assaulted or have your own say.Here I made Manawati likea a true Kshtrani queen who taught her daughter to be brave and sacrifice for the country .Thus Jodha saks for that vachan and does utilise it to her benefit.By marrying Jalaal she does not show her trust but its her aim to strike back .She clearly wanted the brothers to suffer.She had promised she would never let them be happy So yes she married Jalaal safeguarding her people and she knew she would never love him back giving him no happiness...

The mystery is. . . how did Raja Bharmal die? Who did this? Was it Adam? It was not clear whether it was actually Jalal who did it because Jodha ran away into hiding as her father ordered her to do so while fighting Jalal. Then some women screams how Raja Bharmal committed suicide to save face from embarrassment. Jodha knows her father is not a coward. I too like Jodha believed that Jalal took Raja Bharmal's life . . . also secretly hoped for this to be false because it so difficult to imagine how Jalal would redeem himself. How can a daughter forgive her beloved father's murderer?
I think this mystery is now pretty much clear in the next update that Jalaal was not the murderer of her father.But still you are right he was however indirectly the cause of her father's murder so still he has a long way to go and redeem himself.

You ended with a bang. I was carefully reading each word and was on the edge and still am! Finally there is a confrontation between Jodha and Jalal about Raja Bharmal's demise and attack on Amer. Jalal's confession of beintehaan love was unexpected. His letters, Jodha's keepsakes, the way he imagined there lives together and such innocent and pure devotion makes one "start" to fall in love with him. I say "start" because all these appears to good to be true. I am looking to see how he wins Jodha's love, trust and respect. Of course, love is only one way for now because truth and justice needs to be done. Jodha and Jalal need to clear these grave misunderstandings.

~Virgo