Sensations- part 10 PG 10 updtd 31 december - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome writing . plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mahin123

awesome writing . plz update soon


Glad to know that u liked it😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 7

" Do you like me?" She asked out of the blue.
" Chori tu..."
" Dont divert the topic! Yes or no!"
He stood mum unsure of what to say.
Her anger flared up. She went and bared her heart by her actions and he couldn't even spout a proper response.
" I am not the sort of girl who'll do anything anyone asks, even if that is my husband", she shouted and started leaving.
She was stopped as he held her wrist.
" Maybe"
She turned around in disbelief.
" And what is this supposed to mean!"
" I dunno", he replied confused.
She took a deep breath. His thick headedness was exceptional when it came to anything other than business.
" How did you feel while hugging me?"
' What sort of question is that' he thought.
" This is the question that will help you sort out your feelings", she replied.
He looked at her shocked. She read her mind.
" No, it was written on your face ", she replied frustrated.
'Again!!'
" I am waiting", she tapped her feet visibly annoyed.
" I don't remember clearly", he replied confused.
" Aghhh"
She made a face. And then Adhi looked on as she kept on coming closer before embracing him.
" So how do you feel?" She asked trying to calm her racing heartbeat.
" Good", he replied with a blank mind that went blank the minute she came close.
She tried to withdraw but he didn't let go.
" Stay", he ordered engulfing her in his arms one more.
" You like me. A lot ", she told him.
" I know", he spoke sighing.
He had already lost the battle.
" What bout you?" He asked as she started leaving.
" what?" She asked turning around.
" you told me that I like you but you didn't tell me if you like me or not", he asked.
" I wouldn't have hugged you, twice at that if I didn't like you!" She stated annoyed.
" You could've said that you like me too rather than taunting me", he retorted shaking his head.
" What are you? A teenager! That you need to be told everything ", she turned around.
" It can't be helped. It's my first time ", he spoke in his defence.
" My too!" She replied offended.
" That makes me happy", he whispered and smiled to himself ruffling his hairs.
A boyish smile.
He looked charming.
And she felt like a teenager gawking at her crush.
She turned around embarrassed and started leaving when he interrupted again.
" What happens now that we...you know...like each other?!"
" We should explore our relationship like people do while dating. Though we are married and that makes it all the more difficult because maasa won't approve of this", she spoke with a hint of dejection in her voice.
" Let's not worry about the future and live in the present. And since we are already married, dating will be a lot easier".
" Wow...I never thought a day will come that Mr. Adhiraj will give me a pep talk!" She exclaimed impressed.
" Iska ke matbal hai!" He asked, visibly offended.
She chuckled.
A book on ' shades of Adhiraj Rajawat' ought to be written!
" Compliment tha!" She smiled and left.
He felt his face heat up and realised he was blushing.
Did she...?
"Aghhh", he grumbled, annoyed at being played by her.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
keep writing, You are writing really well, Looking forward to how you write progression of their love.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am hooked . wonderful update, beautifully written. plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaiyer

keep writing, You are writing really well, Looking forward to how you write progression of their love.

Thank You😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahin123

I am hooked . wonderful update, beautifully written. plz update soon


Thank you😆
Will updt asap
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting Nish! I like the new age take on their relationship instead of the usual regressive stuff.
They are two consenting adults and about to explore their relationship... with no ego hassles.

Its literally as if there is no bitterness, just a deluge of new feelings which makes both of them curious to explore it.. go on! 😊
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Originally posted by: Santiago24

Very interesting Nish! I like the new age take on their relationship instead of the usual regressive stuff.

They are two consenting adults and about to explore their relationship... with no ego hassles.

Its literally as if there is no bitterness, just a deluge of new feelings which makes both of them curious to explore it.. go on! 😊


Your heavy words are motivating😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 8
Devi felt like punching Adhiraj in the guts.
She was in love with him and He was too!
But he had no clue.
And thus she had to use ' like' word to get through his thick head.
How awfully childish their entire exchange was!
She felt like a relationship expert teaching Adhi the alphabets of relations.
She had thought that since his personality was intense, he would be the same but No!!!!!!!.
He was 0 in the subject.
But for the first time, she saw his sincere side that was not masked in rudeness.
That made her content.
Both couldn't sleep the night as the excitement of the coming day kept them awake.
How will they behave with each other?
How will they hide this changed relationship status from masa and her two underlings!
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'Is it right to hide it from Masa!'
' Someday, she will come to know about this. Will I be able to look into her eyes!?'
All these questions shrouded Adhiraj's mind as he paced around the room impatiently.
He has confessed to Devi! There was no going back.
But maasa!!
However he remembered the happiness he felt when Devi was in his arms...
Damn!!
" I am a mess", he sulked at himself.
However as Devi entered Adhi's room, his eyes got glued to her, and all apprehensions were laid to rest.
She looked beautiful.
Even though she was dressed as usual!
'Side effects of love! ' Adhi thought.
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' Like...not love...just like' , he assured himself.
However he continued to stare at her as she did her prayers.
" Is there something on my back?" She asked turning around.
"No...", he denied embarrassed at being caught.
She chuckled. He looked adorable.
As she applied tika on his forehead, he continued looking on .
She started leaving when he turned her around.
" Close you eyes", he ordered.
" Why?" She asked perplexed.
" Just do it!" He repeated.
And she refused.
Exasperated he covered her eyes with his one hand and with the other, held her hands behind her back.
" aap kya kar rahe hai!" She asked, struggling in his grip.
" Will you stop moving like that!" He spoke annoyed.
And she continued with her struggling.
He sighed.
It was no use talking to her. He'd rather crash his head into the wall.
He took a deep breath and leaned closer, sideways towards her face.
Her breathing hitched as his breath fell on her face.
" wh...what ...are...y.you...doing?" She stammered.
" Nothing much", he replied placing a soft kiss against her cheek.
As he withdrew, he looked at her face.
Poker face.
No expression! What the hell!
His lips felt dry and he chapped them.
Wrong move!
He remembered the softness of her skin against them and realization dawned in full force.
Blush crept up his cheeks and his cheeks felt hot!
He covered his face with his arms as if his cheeks were literally scarlet!!
He looked at her and
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She was doing the same!
Arms covering her face and palm covering the cheek he kissed!

It took Devi full 10 seconds to realise what had happened.
Her palms involuntarily caressed the slight moistness on her cheek and goosebumps rose all over.
He kissed me!!!!!!!!!!!!! She squealed internally and blushed.
And she covered her face immediately.
She won't let him laugh at her face!
She looked up at him and He was doing the same!
" Is the...re som...something on you face?" She asked.
He furrowed his brows confused.
" No. Why?" He asked lowering his arms.
" Then why were you hiding your face?" She asked.
" Th...that..was... Fo...foul smell...yes, foul smell" he stammered.
She squinted her eyes at him.
' There was no foul smell'
" Is there something on your face?" He asked.
Perplexed, she patted her face for something but found none.
" Nhi", she replied confused.
" Then why were you hiding Your face?" He quipped back.
" That...Foul smell. You said na..foul smell. Very terrible!" She pouted pinching her nose.
" Is that so?" He asked stepping closer.
" y..yes..ss" she stammered and stepped back.
He took another step towards her and she took another step back.
She looked at his face.
Unreadable.
She could not decipher what he was thinking!?
" I have work in Kitchen", she excused and turned around to leave.
She had just reached the door when the door was shut in her face.
She froze right there.
She could feel his presence right behind her.
And his intense gaze!!!
She turned around to face him.
His eyes were pools of
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' heck...how will she know!'
"Kuch chahiye?", she asked smiling trying to ease the weird tension in the atmosphere.
He nodded slamming his hands on both sides, caging her.
" k...kya!" She asked terrified.
" You..." he whispered huskily.
His voice, so raspy that pleasurable shivers ran down her spine.
' Inhe kya ho gya suddenly' she shrieked internally.
'Tujhe hi chahiye tha na Intense Adhiraj!' She mocked herself internally.
' Intensity handle nhi ho rhi Devi Ma!!! I will never make such an unreasonable request ever again. Help me!!' She pleaded internally as her legs almost gave away.
She was standing thanks to Adhi's support but it was his courtesy only that her legs have turned wobbly!
And the next moment, she shrieked, literally.
He had plastered her close by holding onto her waist.
It was burning there!
Damn!
She remembered this feeling from not too long ago.
As his face inched closer to hers, her heart rate picked up.
Beads of perspiration trickled down her forehead.
She looked at his lips and her heart thudded real hard.
She closed her eyes, bracing herself for the volcanic impact.

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