Sensations- part 10 PG 10 updtd 31 december - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
you're a talented writer. know very well to hold the readers interest. loved every bit of it. plz update soon and also a big chapter😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Santiago24

No Nish, not done..

I demand longer update

This is a teaser!


Being greedy huh...😆
That's the fun of teasing😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: mahin123

you're a talented writer. know very well to hold the readers interest. loved every bit of it. plz update soon and also a big chapter😊


Praises...praises...🤪
Be a bit more generous...😆
And I'll comply😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
We need more
Lots more
Thanks
Great update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

We need more
Lots more
Thanks
Great update


Glad to be of help😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Part 10

He tried to feel guilty but the only regret he was carrying was that he should have kissed her!
Now his urge was even more stronger and his mind was getting fuzzy with not-so-good thoughts about Devi.
Adhi could reach the home by 11 only as a sudden meeting had popped up with foreign investors, that ended with a dinner.
But he was craving for the dessert!
Very carefully, he made his way to the underground cellar and found her fast asleep.
Her bare back was visible. What was the idiot doing sleeping so defencelessly! He whispered to himself.
He was having impure thoughts just coz of a failed attempt to taste her lips!
'Alright, I am sounding like a perv now!' He mentally rebuked himself.
She turned suddenly scaring the wits out of him.
' This woman!'
He gazed mesmerized at her peaceful features.
" Uthte hi teekhi mirchi ban javegi!" He chuckled and inched closer.
He needed to leave. That peaceful face was making things even harder.
He leaned on her and pressed a kiss against her forehead.
As he started withdrawing, her eyes snapped open.
He froze.
Devi's mind processed just one thing, His Proximity and she shrieked.
However he was quick in his actions and silenced her.
" Ke kare hai!" He shushed her.
She tried speaking but his large hand muffled her voice.
" You will get both of us caught", he scolded her.
"I'll move my hand if you promise to keep quiet", he asked.
She nodded and he removed his hand.
" What are you doing here?" She asked getting up.
She wasn't looking at him at all!
She was startled as his fingers caressed her chin. Adhi mentally flinched and removed his fingers.
"I am sorry"
Devi turned to him, surprised.
" For what?!" She asked raising her brows.
" For what I tried to do yesterday..." Adhi replied feeling guilty.
Devi's eyes widened.
" Nhi...aap..." She tried to speak but he interrupted her.
" I should have kept myself in check, I was getting swayed away..."
" But..."
"Nhi, you should scold me for taking such liberty with you..."
"Pr mujhe..."
"But please I can't tolerate this silent behaviour from you..."
" PR vo toh..."
" You can raise your hand on me if you want but your kud- kud should never..."
Adhiraj was interrupted when a pair of soft feathers touched against his rough ones.
His eyes widened and he stared at Her in shock.
Devi blushed.
" close your mouth! " she chided him as he shut his mouth.
" yo...ke...tha.. " he asked caressing his lips with his fingers.
She giggled. That baffled expression on his face made him look charming.
And such innocent expression was making her want to do something naughty.
She leaned her face closer to his...
" Yo..." She spoke caressing his lips
" ye tha" and with that her lips dawned on his once again, this time for few extra seconds.
As she withdrew, Adhiraj was in an even greater shock.
He looked at Devi, who smiled cheekily.
' Am I hallucinating?' He thought.
" No...my innocent patidev...shall I do it again to tell you how real it was?" She winked naughtily at him.
" Nhi..." He almost shouted, as he came back info the world of living.
She pouted, offended.
" You didn't like it..!" She asked
" Nhi.. "
" Nhi..." She repeated after him, her face getting smaller.
" Nhi mtbl ha..." He shot trying to balance the situation.
" Mtlb you liked it..." She asked, stifling her laughter.
She saw his face- full of confusion and could not hold her laughter any more.
She burst into giggles.
" Oh god...your expressions are priceless!"
Adhiraj couldn't decipher what had happened! One minute he was trying to pacify Her and the next moment she did That..!! And he went in shock when she did That again...!! He was trying to make sure that be wasn't hallucinating when she asked such a weird question in her ever so innocent voice!
That was pure torturous!!
He touched his lips again and closed his eyes. He could feel that wetness...her intoxicating scent...her warm breath...
" Why?" He asked almost breathless.
" Because you weren't listening to me at all, you were so immersed in your guilt..."
" but I thought that I scared you... "
She made a confused expression at his statement as be continued, " you've been avoiding me since That incident and...and even now you were startled when I touched your...ch..chin..."
She smiled at his thoughtfulness.
She leaned closer and traced a finger against his bare chest peeking from his unbuttoned shirt.
His heart rate sped up and he almost instantly swatted her hands away.
" Dekha...toh main ye samjhu ki I scared you" she whispered.
" Na...vo toh...tu acha..achanak SE ...mhare ko...yu..." He stammered.
" theek aise hi...mujhe bhi kuch kuch hota hai jab aap choote hain...it's all so new to both of us", she replied.
" I wasn't scared...just shy...embarrassed.. " she whispered flustered.
He let go of the breath he was holding and combed his fingers through his hair.
" Tu naaraz na hai..." He smiled.
He stared at her, smiling at him and leaned closer.
She closed her eyes, giving him permission.
" Ouch..." Devi shouted and rubbed her nose.
Adhiraj did the same.
" ye kya tha! You don't know how to kiss..!" She asked annoyed.
" Is this general knowledge too..!" He retorted, mockingly.
Frustrated, Devi leaned a bit over him and he leaned back in defence.
" it's OK...I'll teach you", she pouted and pulled him closer by his collar.
And soon her lips met his yet again. It was fireworks this time.
As she shifted on him, he pulled her closer.
Their lips moved in unison and hearts started thumping like crazy.
Adhiraj felt weird...hot...he couldn't explain.
As her slender fingers gently massaged his neck and made a wreak of his mane, he felt delirious.
Devi knew her heart was racing but something else within her was throbbing...in need.
They withdrew, short of breath and looked at each other.
" I might as well be getting addicted to this!" He whispered huskily and this time pulled her closer as their lips met in yet another fiery battle.

So how was it??😳

Edited by nish_vir - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Khatarnak!!
My face is burning... 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Santiago24

Khatarnak!!

My face is burning... 😉


😳My blood was boiling while writing it and my senses were on overdrive☺️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Ok couldn't help but re-read it before commenting
That was definately ou la la
Love seeing both of them like this
You're awesome at describing the scenario
Can't wait to read how they discover more of each other
Thanks tons
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Ok couldn't help but re-read it before commenting
That was definately ou la la
Love seeing both of them like this
You're awesome at describing the scenario
Can't wait to read how they discover more of each other
Thanks tons


Thank you😳
DeviRaj are

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