~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 12

Originally posted by: blyton

Writing inn rhyme is not my cup of tea, so here is something in free verse. Pardon my inaccuracies.



One last embrace
Before we part
Heartbeat to heartbeat
Might confess
What words dare not utter

Tangle your hand in mine
Palm against palm—
As if that would change
The lines drawn on them
By relentless Destiny

Shuddering against me
You shed tears
Your eyes have long hidden.
They flood my heart;
Why should they
When you don't belong to me?
Why take this pain from you
Whose bond with me
Has no name?
Why entwine
Your heartstrings with mine
When next moment
May wrench them apart?

Don't cry for me
I'm nothing to you;
You're nothing to me
But a beautiful dream
Dropped in my sleep,
Something magical
Brushed against me
And swept shyly away

We aren't meant to be
I dare not kindle
Rash hopes;
I give you nothing
Except a memory

Yet, strangely, I feel—
When you walk away
You shan't go alone
But steal my being
From myself

And I shall remain
As a fragment
Of longing
For the day
When this waiting shall end.

awsum poem👏..n thanx for ur comments ppl😊

S@R@H

this is just a small rhyme i wrote for all u ppl who had appreciated my poems:

Something within me is not stable,
And I can sense a turning inside my liver.
Something within me is screaming out loud,
And I can sense the groaning of my very own heart.
Something within me is not right,
And I can sense my skin gradually growing tight.
Something within me is turning so ferocious,
And I can sense a hunger for something delicious.
Something within me is longing for you,
And I guess it's time for me to say that, "I love you".
😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: blyton

Writing inn rhyme is not my cup of tea, so here is something in free verse. Pardon my inaccuracies.



One last embrace
Before we part
Heartbeat to heartbeat
Might confess
What words dare not utter

Tangle your hand in mine
Palm against palm—
As if that would change
The lines drawn on them
By relentless Destiny

Shuddering against me
You shed tears
Your eyes have long hidden.
They flood my heart;
Why should they
When you don't belong to me?
Why take this pain from you
Whose bond with me
Has no name?
Why entwine
Your heartstrings with mine
When next moment
May wrench them apart?

Don't cry for me
I'm nothing to you;
You're nothing to me
But a beautiful dream
Dropped in my sleep,
Something magical
Brushed against me
And swept shyly away

We aren't meant to be
I dare not kindle
Rash hopes;
I give you nothing
Except a memory

Yet, strangely, I feel—
When you walk away
You shan't go alone
But steal my being
From myself

And I shall remain
As a fragment
Of longing
For the day
When this waiting shall end.

Oh meri Anjali

tum ho manchali

tumhari yeh kavita

mere dil jita😃

👏👏👏Such

Originally posted by: laddoo598

Awesome Blyti!👏 You are just too good!😳 And you have not corrupted my young and not at all innocent mind!😉 You have cherished it with the Poem! 😃

I have a manda version of the same rhyme, but i wonder if i should post it....it is rather raunchy.... 😈

Originally posted by: tridentgumlove

Armaan and jassi 😃
sitting in a tree 😕
k-i-s-s-i-n-g 👏
first comes love 😳
then comes marraige 😉
then a baby in a carraige 😆

i remeber that!! well done!!

Originally posted by: blyton

I have a manda version of the same rhyme, but i wonder if i should post it....it is rather raunchy.... 😈

Post it! Blyti! I like raunchy things!😈

Originally posted by: doomed4eva

this is just a small rhyme i wrote for all u ppl who had appreciated my poems:

Something within me is not stable,
And I can sense a turning inside my liver.
Something within me is screaming out loud,
And I can sense the groaning of my very own heart.
Something within me is not right,
And I can sense my skin gradually growing tight.
Something within me is turning so ferocious,
And I can sense a hunger for something delicious.
Something within me is longing for you,
And I guess it's time for me to say that, "I love you".
😃 😃 😃

Awwwwwww! We love you too Sarah!😳 And the poem is awesome as usual!😃

Originally posted by: laddoo598

Post it! Blyti! I like raunchy things!😈

I can't believe I'm being so besharam😳....but this can't be raunchier than the mouth-to-mouth resuscitation thing...😈....here goes.....

(Not-so) Little Miss Mona

Ran blushing to the sauna

Devastated by Apu's dimpled smile;

Sweeping her in his arms

Apu floored her with his charms

And that kept them busy for a while!😉😳

Originally posted by: blyton

I can't believe I'm being so besharam😳....but this can't be raunchier than the mouth-to-mouth resuscitation thing...😈....here goes.....

(Not-so) Little Miss Mona

Ran blushing to the sauna

Devastated by Apu's dimpled smile;

Sweeping her in his arms

Apu floored her with his charms

And that kept them busy for a while!😉😳

Haila Blyti!😳 You sure got talents!😉 Awesome year!👏