SidNi Song TS : Teri Meri Prem Kahani *COMPLETED* - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

awesome job again..

I know that u had to turn it into a TS bit frankly speaking it was good as a sad ending..
some things are supposed to be sad u know!!

i know i didn't plan on this TS until aroo said to make it.. so just for the others ( majority people ) i turned it into a happy story 😉
No offence to this update it was another superb work of urs.

Thanks yaar.. acha nahi bhi hai toh u can say i won't mind 😆
p.s. i guess my exam results have made me negative!
Shit now how will I update my ff with a positive chapter?😲

lol..sleep on it.. i am sure u will turn positive again tomorrow.. and dare you give a negative chapter on ur FF 😡😡😡 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
^^ I'll sleep on the threat!!😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

^^ I'll sleep on the threat!!😆😆


Good girl.. now update when u feel better.. and don't worry 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
😭 This depressed Sid remembers me on the Bangkok days where Sid wanted Roshni back in his life. Hope both reunite soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: rachana10

I'm happy that u turned OS into a TS...😉 Ya we all wanted a happy ending that doesn't mean to give that in last shot 😡 u wasted this update w/o sidni😆 haha just for fun.. I loved it but sidni in pain na i can't see..😭 Arey why everyone against their love? Leave that nutcase she always be like that😡 but why DD? Reunite them soon pallavi...😳


@bold - Haha🤣 Rachu.. how can i change such a sad story to happy one suddenly..transition required na? 😆 Yep they will be together..don't worry! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Thank you everyone for your comments.. 😳
Sorry that couldn't reply to all..
short of time today 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: skinnypal


@bold - Haha🤣 Rachu.. how can i change such a sad story to happy one suddenly..transition required na? 😆 Yep they will be together..don't worry! 😊


U can change dear..😉 U r a mystery master na, can't u knw how to reunite them w/o any transition..😡 And none ll qus u" what happened??" when it cums for sidni reunion..😆 Ya ya waiting update soon...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70


So, here is my last shot.. and this one i will dedicate to my friend, Rachu aka Rachana10 who found my second shot a waste 😉 I hope this one isn't 😆😆

[Tu jo hai toh main hu - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wUVwlEWeXgo]

Roshni turns to leave but he holds her hand firmly, she tells him that they cannot be together and to forget her as she has moved on in her life.

Teri saanson ki saans mein

Jo hoon toh main hoon

Tere khwabon ki aanch mein

Jo hoon toh main hoon

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai

Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona

He refuses to believe that and asks her to look into his eyes and see the love in it for her and then deny that she didn't feel the same. He presses her hands on his chest and asks her to feel his heart beats, his undying love for her. Tears flowed down her cheeks and she closes her eyes. He wipes her tears tenderly and caresses her cheeks. Finally she regains her inner strength and pushes him back, she runs towards her apartment which was two blocks away. He follows her, but she gets inside and locks the door.

Tu jo hai toh main hoon

Yun jo hai toh main hoon

Tu jo hai toh main hoon

Yun jo hai toh main hoon

He keeps banging on her door for hours but she does not open them. Tired and cold because of being drenched in the rain he sits on the ground crying indefinitely. On the other side of the door, Roshni was too sitting with her back on the door and kept mumbling to leave her alone. She couldn't take it anymore.

Bin tere mera kya hai

Jisko sunu jisko kahun

Bin tere mujh mein kya hai

Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun


Next morning when she is ready to go to school after taking a bath, she opens the door to find him standing there all freshened up. He was looking happy and his eyes were twinkling with eagerness to meet her. He had flowers in his hand and he offered it to her. She ignores him and keeps walking. But he follows her and starts teasing her. He had changed, he had returned back to his old self just in one night because he knew that he would win her back soon.


Tujh mein hi duniya meri hai

Tere ik pal mein sadiyan meri

Bin tere main sehra saa hoon

Bin tere main qatra bhi nahi


As she walks, a kid comes up to her and gives her a red rose. She takes it immediately; Siddharth makes a face as she did not accept his flowers. After a few minutes another kid walks up to her and gives her another rose which she takes it again but with suspicion. When another kid walks up to her, he hands her a teddy bear with a "I love you" written on it. She understands it that all this was Siddharth's plan. She throws the flowers and the teddy bear on his face and keeps walking, he pouts.


Tere hone se hi mera hona hai

Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona

Tu jo hain toh main hoon

Yun jo hai toh main hoon

Tu jo hain toh main hoon

Yun jo hai toh main hoon


Roshni turns to look whether Siddharth was still following her or not, but doesn't find her anywhere. She gets sad that he left her alone. At night while walking back home she hears him shout "Roshni!! If you are not mine, then I don't want to live in this world" She looks up and sees he is standing on the roof, ready to jump off. She gets scared, and runs upstairs to save him. Siddharth grins as soon as she gets inside the building. When Roshni enters the roof, she sees him almost jumping. She strides towards him and pulls him, they both fall on the ground of the roof.


Tu mere chehre pe hai

raahat saa jo thehra huaa

Main bhi tere haathon mein

kismat sa hoon, bikhra hua


She starts yelling at him and scolds him for this immature behavior. He just keeps on smiling seeing her concern for him. She screams finally that she loves him and she cannot live without him. He tells her that he loves her too, and tucks her hair behind her ears. She sees that a rope was tied around Siddharth's waist and he was just pretending to suicide. She smacks him on his chest for making her go through hell.

Tu meri rooh saa hai

Tujhko chhu ke main zinda lagun

Jab bhi main mujhko dekhun

Mujh mein bhi main tujh sa lagun


Just then the entire roof lightens up, and Roshni looks at her surroundings, it was decorated with flowers and drapes. There was a table in the middle and music started playing. Siddharth makes her get up and brings her to sit on the chair. He bends down on one knee and takes out the ring from his pocket. He proposes to her and she accepts it happily, he slips the ring on her finger and takes her in his arms.


Tere hone se hi mera hona hai

Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona

Tu jo hai toh main hoon

Yun jo hai toh main hoon

Tu jo hai toh main hoon

Yun jo hai toh main hoon


They embrace each other tightly, not wanting the moment to end ever. Siddharth loosens the hug, only to cup her face, she encircles her hand around his neck and pulls him closer. The space between them reduces as their lips meet. They kissed with all the cravings that were built up inside them for the past few years. In this passionate moment, Roshni bites his lip by mistake. He jerks back in astonishment to look at her and grins broadly. "I like this new you" he said and rubs the tip of his nose against hers. He leans down to kiss her neck, she runs her fingers through his hairs and they were lost in each other.


So at the end they followed their heart and did not part because they had already left their families. I hope it makes sense 😆

Edited by skinnypal - 10 years ago

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