||SidNi TS ~ Pyaar Ke Side Effects|| Shot 3, Pg-7 *29/5 [FINISHED] - Page 2

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skinnypal thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am excited to read this story of yours !!
Have a good trip and post soon !! 😉
Will be waiting ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SHOT 1

"Roshni. At what time shall I come to pick ya up?" said Sid on phone.

"Not now. Maybe, in half an hour. I am still getting dressed."

Sid sighs and thinks,"These girls na."

"Okay fine. I'll come at 8. Pls get ready by then. This is our first date only and you are taking so much so get dressed then what will happen after marriage."

"MARRIAGE!? From where does this marriage comes in between. I guess this is only a date."

"Oh yeah, I know. I was just...leave it. You go and get ready, I'll come at 8. Bye."

"Bye."

Sid hung up the phone and smiled to himself.

He was finally going on a date with his Bhagyashree, his dream girl. He remembered how Roshni had agreed to go on a date with him after accepting Sid's fact of being a rich, wealthy businessman.

He was really on seventh heaven today.

There li'l thoughts were brewing in Roshni's heart. She was almost dressed. She got dressed up in a hurry and the result...

She looked like an angel, b'ful angel who has just stepped on earth.

She was staring at a selfie of her and Sid on her phone.

Her MV mind voice- Hey, Sid is looking sooo hawtt, isn't it??

R - He is. BUT stop drooling over him, he is mine.

MV- U said that he is mine.

R - I said he is mine not yours.

MV- But I am u and u are me.

R - What? I didn't understand. You are me and I am you. What the heck is this!!

MV - This means we are the same..

R - Fine but this doesn't make any sense. And yes, you, I'm talking to you, don't u try interfering between me and Sid otherwise...

Before Roshni could complete her sentence, she heard the sound of a car honking...

She looked down from the window and saw Sid honking from his car, waiting for Roshni to come down.

MV - Go, go, my prince charming is waiting, oops; I mean your prince charming.

Roshni hurried down the stairs as her MV vanished.

When Sid saw her, his mouth was left wide open.

Roshni - Apna muh band kar lo isse pehle makkhi ghus jaaye.

This awaked Sid from his dreams.

Sid - You are looking just elegant and stunning.

She looked really gorgeous in her red knee-length dress with a black strip and polka dots on the white surface on her dress above her abdomen. She had worn black pencil heels looking just perfect with her dress.

She had applied black kajal, compact and eye liner which were enhancing her beauty.

Sid - So shall we leave, babes?

Roshni - Don't call me that.

Sid - Okay, then let us go Roshni.

Roshni nodded in agreement.

They sat in his black Mercedes and drove towards the Koh-i-noor Hotel owned by Aahil Raza Ibrahim.

At Koh-i-noor hotel, at reception...

Sid - Excuse me, ma'am. I booked a table by the name of Siddarth Khurana.

Receptionist (checking her records) - Yes sir. Just go on first floor, there the waiter will lead you to your table ie. Table 10.

Sid - Okay, thanks.

They headed off to the first floor.

Sid - Rosh, was it Table 9 or 10?

Rosh - It was 9 I think.

Sid - Could you please lead us to Table 9?

Waiter - Yeah sure, sir. Follow me.

The waiter led them to Table 9.

Waiter - Have a good day sir.

The table was decorated very beautifully.

Two wine glasses were kept on clean small mats accompanied by plates, fork, spoon and knife. But the red and white roses in a b'ful flower vase which was kept in the centre of the table was the most elegant.

Sid - So shall we begin?

Roshni (blushing) - Yeah...

Sid uplifted himself a little and planted a small kiss on Roshni's cheek as her cheeks turned deep beetroot red.

Sid and Roshni were sharing an eye-lock, looking at each other like there was nothing else in this world to see.

There, Aahil Raza Ibrahim, the owner of the hotel had come there with his wife, Sanam Raza Ibrahim for a date too!

He had booked Table 9 for themselves!

When he came at Table 9, he saw a couple already seated there.

Aahil asked Sanam to stand there as he goes to talk to the couple who had occupied their seats.

Aahil - Excuse me, it is our table you are sitting on.

Sid & Roshni got startled and looked up.

Aahil -surprised, looking at Roshni- - CP!! (Cutyee Pie)

Roshni -equally surprised- - MCP!! (Male Chauvinist Pig)

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Hope u liked it. Tomorrow is my b'day so I'll try to give an update tomorrow if I won't be offline.
Feedbacks are welcome. And yes, a big thanks to Prathe for the amazing title.

Love,
Sanny

Edited by Sanny.Castellan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

the first date is looking fun, I love how Sid and Roshni got the wrong table and surprised to see Ahil and Sanam there cannot wait for you to continue

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
This was so cute 😛 I like their convos and how they both forgot the table no. 🤣 ( too much mesmerized with each other i think )
Best was the last line, just cracked me up MCP 😆 Coontinue soon dear!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Amazng update dear superb start
Loved it alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Loved it.. Beautifully written👏 Do continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
that was amazing Sanny!!😊
Great potrayal of everything.
Aahil and Sanam arrived waiting for next one..
And ya it is next day (if u live in India) so Happy birthday😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
nice start. Continue soon, I want to see a jealous Sid and Sanam.
Edited by afghangirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Outstanding start dear..
Its really amazing the way u describe Roshni 's dressing n style..
Ohhh Rosh n Ahil frst meet..
Its really going to intrsting to read jealous Sid..
Waiting for next one ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Hello Sanny. I am Pallavi.
I just read your first shot and it is amazing. The banner is quite adorable too.
Continue soon.

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