SidNi FF : For All Eternity Part 20b,Part21 completed Pg49,Pg51

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Swalla

@Swalla

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Really good!
Omg dd in hospital from 6 months...waiting for next!!

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tigress.meenu

@tigress.meenu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

superb starting and superb update yaar..👏

how can i miss this...

its k going to follow this regularly

cant wait to read next update...

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

very well written dear

awesome update

dont wry v all love to read longer updates only😊

will b waiting for d next part

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

I believe that women should be strong and independent. Roshni goes through a harrowing experience and she grows up over night. The Roshni that we see now is hardened by the circumstances.

All she thinks about now is her family. They are her priority. The old Roshni is not lost and will definitely resurface when the couple gets back together. 😊

Please let me know if there is anything that you do not like or want it to be changed. Since the story is just beginning i will definitely try to make the changes😊

I basically like stories where things unravel slowly so this is what i am following here too. Please let me know if the suspense gets too much or if i go overboard.

I will try to update regularly. Weekends will be full of updates but i cannot say the same for weekdays.

Lastly, please do comment. It will help me understand if i am on the right track.😊

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Rachana

@rachana10

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Really loved the independent char of roshni in ur ff... There is no need to change anything bcoz from intro to part 2 everything went very well...👏 I'm always like twist in a story so u can take ur own time to reveal the suspence it's not matter for us but make sure we want ly +ve note of sidni story...😉😆

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

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rosesidni

@rosesidni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Wow!!! Again an update, that too this soon😃 Loved it. There were lot of suspense and I know it will only be cleared in the coming updates. So will wait patiently😊

And I have a suggestion. Could u give different colors for flash backs and present scenes?. It would be easy to read.😊Waiting for the next part 😊

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: zoopassion
Wow!!! Again an update, that too this soon😃 Loved it. There were lot of suspense and I know it will only be cleared in the coming updates. So will wait patiently😊

And I have a suggestion. Could u give different colors for flash backs and present scenes?. It would be easy to read.😊Waiting for the next part 😊

I know..I just kept typing and it turned into another long one 😛

Thanks for the suggestion..i'll change it right away😊