SidNi FF : For All Eternity Part 20b,Part21 completed Pg49,Pg51

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Thank you for the wonderful comments. I'll give another update today😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

What a great story; really well written.

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Rachana

@rachana10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Amazing start with sid imagination...👏👏 I loved the part1 and sidni dialogues are so cute dr... Waiting for the next update...😃

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skinnypal

@skinnypal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Amazing first part! you have great writing skills.. update soon! Eagerly waiting to read more from you..😃

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Sorry for the long update but it was necessary to fit it in one. Please let me know if the length was bothersome. Thats all for today. I'll try to give another update tomorrow. Hope you guys liked the intro,1st and 2nd parts. I'll definitely try to improve more from the next update. Thanks a lot for the sweet comments again.😊

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NIALOVE

@NIALOVE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Super update dear
Loved it
Keep it up 👏

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Rachana

@rachana10

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Wow ur concept was totally different dr... 😉I just loved it soo much... Beautiful written of sidni pains... 😳 U knw what i could never felt bad for dd but 1st time really felt bad for her lifeless condition...😭 Its so sad... I'm so proud of our roshni how she working hard for her family without even thinking abt herself... I'm eagerly waiting to knw what happnd in past 6months and how sidni got separated...😲And i accept it's a long update but we dnt bother if u gve even more longer update...😉

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skinnypal

@skinnypal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Wow. it was one amazing update.. i like how you are showing what is going on in both their minds. Roshni has grown up, living alone. Siddharth's cold behavior towards his mother is good. I like how he is remembering Roshni all the time and talking to her. Felt bad for DD.. hope she recovers soon.. Now i am anxious to know how you are going to make them meet each other

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rosesidni

@rosesidni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Again a superb update👏 Loving the progress in the story. And not at all bothered about length. Didn't know when i finished reading and was disappointed that it ended😆 So, I would have no problem even its longer😉

Thank u for making Yash just a friend. I can't imagine him like in the show, useless😆 And waiting for SidNi to meet, I know it may take time, but still impatient. Waiting for the next part..😊

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