SidNi SS: Phas Gaya Jamai : D ~Last Part+Epilogue Page 10~ - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Jezmine

Loved the update! I love the way you've shaped Sid's Character - He's sweet and perfect! And i must say i'm super excited for the next part now! 😊


Well..thanks for your kind words!!😃 Although I have LOTS to improve on as a writer!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Wowww its aws update. ..
Specially love did 's parents. ..
They are real gems. .
Frst part of sid n dd also intrsting. .
The way sid take care of every one ...its really very sweet gesture of sid..
So finally dd know abt sid. .
Its really going to read intrsting ..
Wts next ???
How will dd reacted ??
Thanks alot dear for such a lovely update. .
Keep rocking


Thank you so much!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Thank you for always reading my work!!!😛
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#44

Aww, thanks.😊
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Thank you. 😳
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Yes? Glad you do.😆
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#47

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

Nice one.
Finally somebody has arrived who would take care of everything and everybody..
Liked it.


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Originally posted by: chandana...

its really nice SS..i loved it...😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Part 4B:

DD's eyes widened and Sid nodded. "Now, may you guys join my wife and I?" he asked the clients who nodded their heads eagerly.

He looked over to DD for her answer. She shrugged. What choice did she have?

As Sid and the others sat down, DD introduced Roshni to the clients through clenched teeth.

"Meet my daughter Roshni Patel" DD told the clients with a smile on her face.

"Sasu Mom, you mean to say Roshni Siddharth Khurana?" Sid told her calmly, his smile never leaving his face.

"Yes, good that you caught that" a client said while chuckling.

"Yes my mouth slipped, no problem" DD said in her strangely sweet voice. "Meet my daughter Roshni Sidhu Khurana" DD told everyone.

"Have some food" Sid gestured to everyone as the waiter arrived.

"Anything else?" the waiter asked.

"No I believe not.." DD said looking around.

"Actually.." Sid told the waiter brightly. "My Sasu Mom is confused!" "I think we will have a sweet dish once we are finished..but I don't blame Sasu Ma for not knowing that!! Her khadoos manner shows that she hasn't had anything sweet in ages!!"

Everyone at the table gasped in shock. "Well okay..maybe I did see her eating a sugar cookie once" Sid said innocently. "But that's certainly not the point!"

"Tell your so called husband to shut up!" DD hissed into Roshni's ear.

Roshni only giggled and kept admiring her husband; much to DD's annoyance.

The clients shot each other looks, obviously trying to hide their smiles.

"So tell me about yourself" a client said to Sid.
"Well I.."

"Let me" DD said interrupting Sid. "My Jamai is very irresponsible, middle class, and an emotional fool!" But what to do..a mother has to succumb to her daughter's wishes.." DD said with the click of her tongue.

Roshni went bright red and the clients looked awkward.

DD went on. "Owning a mere hotel will not make someone wealthy, truth will always remain that the daughter-in-law is more rich."

Roshni had had enough and stood up. "DD, don't you dare insult my husband."

"Husband?" DD said standing up and laughing at her daughter. "He practically dashed in and put some color on your forehead without any preparations, my dear."

"You wouldn't realize the importance of vermilion anyways" Roshni told her mother.

"Woah chill guys" Sid said glancing at the clients.

"And Sasu Mom" Sid told her. "Just check online who won businessman of the year, you'll find out who it was."

"Here" Roshni said taking out her phone and searching on Google. She shoved it under her mom's nose.

DD was quite shocked on knowing Sid's status.

This middle class guy could not be richer than her. It hurt her ego and her eyes watered up a bit. Clutching on to a chair, she managed to look at the clients and give them a faint smile. "That's my Jamai hehe" she told them.

DD flashed Sid a you are dead look and Sid grinned right back!😳 He was relieved now. DD could not insult his parents or him now about their status.

~*~

That day Durga Devi ended up getting a REAL heart attack. After lunch, she had gotten up when suddenly her chest had started paining and she put her hand to her heart. "Roshni.." she murmured before blackness took over her.

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#50

Short Epilogue


"Mama Papa, nani is trying to pull my cheeks again!" Mona said to Sid and Roshni.

"Really, mom did that again?" Roshni said with a smile. "How sweet..!!"😳

Siddharth picked Mona up and planted a kiss on her cheek. "Now let's go eat a chweet ice cream."

"Mama nahi ayegi?" the five year old girl asked her father with an innocent face.

Mona had the charming style of her father but the innocence of her mother.😳

Sid looked over to his sweet wife who shook her head. "No, I have to finish some work."

Both Sid and Mona frowned together. "You guys go.." Roshni told them with a smile.

"Go na..!!" she told them once again.

"Okay sweety let's go then" Sid said glaring at Roshni and striding off with Mona in his hold.

At the door he came across DD and they both paused to look at each other.

Sid nodded at his Sasu Mom and DD caressed Mona's hair. "God bless Mona" DD told Mona kindly while glaring at Sid.

Roshni chuckled at them from afar and went back into flashback mode.

* * * * * * * *

"What has happened to mom!" Roshni screamed at the doctor as Sid tried to console her.

"I am sorry..she has had a heart attack..but we have saved her." The doctor informed them.

"But.." the doctor went on.

"But kya?" Roshni yelled.

"Roshni, let me talk" Sid told Roshni caringly. "But what sir?" he asked.

"She has lost all her memory" the doctor said. "Memory loss?" Sid mumbled and the doctor nodded.

"Oh and yes as I know that she is the famous DD, just know that she is getting old plus she needs no stress, so I recommend someone else take care of her work" the doctor added.

Roshni bit her lip as tears rolled down her face, but all the while Sid and Roshni were looking at each other. Could this be good for them??

* * * * * * * *

Apparently, along with her memory had gone DD's bitter attitude towards all. Well, except Sid. Even after her memory loss, she was never able to connect too much with Sid. She did however accept him as her Jamai. She had no hard feelings for him but not any close feelings either. She started loving her daughter very much as Sid tried his best to bring the duo even closer.

Soon, after Mona was born, Sid was afraid Durga may not like her because of him, but he turned out to be wrong. DD had loved her granddaughter a lot. Roshni was glad that at least DD gave Mona the love she had ached for in her childhood.

* * * * * * * *

Roshni returned to her senses when DD said, "Roshni, why won't you join Sid and Mona for ice cream?"

Sid had complained to DD about Roshni and DD took Sid very seriously. She had respect for him as a Jamai and wanted to keep him happy.

"Mom work.."

"I will do that..you just go..it is important for you to give your family importance" DD told her.

Roshni nodded. After giving her mother a quick hug, she went over to Sid and Mona.

* * * * * * * *

"Mama, I want more ice cream!" Mona said once she was finished smearing her previous ice cream over her face.

"No Mona..you will get cavities.."

"Take a chill Pill Rosh" Sid told her as he paid the vendor for another chocolate ice cream cone.

"Here dear" Sid said as he settled Mona on the bench. He pulled Roshni aside by the arm next to a tree.

"What are you doing!" Roshni snapped. "Having a talk with my wife" Sid told her.

"Aaj kal, you barely give me any time..so now please...give me a kiss na.." Sid said hopefully.

"Siddharth, Mona is looking over towards us!" Roshni replied sharply.

Sid did not let go of Roshni.

"Mama Papa, what are you guys doing?" Mona called out.

"Beta bachaao, your Papa won't let go of me" Roshni said as she winked at Sid.

Making sure to smear some ice cream over her jeans, Mona got up and ran towards them.

She placed her hands on her hips just like Roshni did. "Pa-Pa! Let--go--of --my mummy!"

Sid was taken aback by Mona's Roshni form and he quickly released Roshni's arm.

"Sweety, Papa was only asking Mama for one kissy" Sid told her with a childish pout.

"Is that so?" Mona asked him. Sid nodded in response.

"Then Mama will kiss Papa cuz I will not see Papa sad sad!" Mona said turning towards Roshni.

This time it was Sids's turn to wink at Roshni.

Roshni brought her hand up to her forehead. This father daughter duo was too much!😆

She lifted her toes up and gave Siddharth a kiss on the cheek. Siddharth smiled and in return kissed Mona on her cheek. Mona clapped excitedly and told Roshni to get down. Roshni bent down and Mona gave her a kiss on the cheek.

"Wow, taking turns is cool!" Mona said clapping her hands innocently.

Roshni blushed and Sid smiled. They both got on their knees next to Mona and gave her a big hug. 😳

"I love you Mummy Papa" Mona told them in a sweet voice.

"We love you too" Roshni told Mona.

"And don't forget- Papa loves Mama" Sid added, to which Roshni went bright red.

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Although, Jamai and Saas aren't on the best of terms, they get along enough to keep a happy family. There are some relations that never change. At least, Sid's relation with his Saas had changed enough for DD to accept him as her Jamai and Roshni as her daughter. That was enough for our Jamai Raja..😳

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Okay, I am done with this SS "Phas Gaya Jamai". I hope you all enjoyed reading it despite my errors.😳 Please do give your honest feedback below to help me improve my writing skills.😛

A special thanks to: People who liked my SS or Commented on it.
Thank you silent readers for reading.😃

Love you all❤️
Pookhi🤗











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