SS in Progress : Mrs and Mr Khanna ... Update on pg 275 - Page 149

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.8k

Views

349.8k

Users

34

Likes

5k

Frequent Posters

poetic thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
'But how can your talking to me be a deterrent?' Ragini asked, her voice choking with emotions.
'I seriously don't know Ragini' he sounded frustrated and angry. 'The only thing I know is that this guy is a political biggie, on the hit list of some terrorist groups and they don't want me communicating much. it doesn't make sense I know, but the reason they are giving is that these anti groups are tech savvy and totally advanced, and they might use whatever information that I may glean out, unknowingly.'

He sighed, still more depressed than before. He knew how she felt and all he wanted was to hug her and hold her close.

poetic thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
The days passed on drearily. Nachiket could call or message once in a while, he was hopeful that the ordeal would be over soon. He kept on enquiring about the children and Ragini was only too happy to share.
Aarav was super ecstatic post this US trip and Ragini was happy to see him planning about his future once more, about what he wanted to pursue now. Nachiket was correct - the visit indeed did do him a world of good.

On their return, the children shared their experiences with their Mother, showed her the photos they had clicked and the gifts they had brought home. The twins gifted her with a beautiful cashmere coat, proudly informing that they had not used their Father's money. Ragini was overwhelmed. She was also very happy to notice that things were also improving between Nishi and Jignesh. She felt full, she felt satisfied.

And then, the best news came their way. A short message from Nachiket - A week more sweetheart. I will be back in your arms by next Wednesday. Got my tickets already.

The children were happy but also concerned when they noticed how emotional Ragini had gotten, post the message.

And Ragini? She was on top of the world, she found herself floating around, urging the hours to pass quickly. She nearly went berserk trying to plan on how to welcome him back. And then decided that nothing would be enough.

Two days before his return, she went to the market to buy and stock up with all his favourites.

Two days before he returned, she was in the OT of their hospital, fighting for her life. A wrong judgement, a drunken driver breaking laws was all it took.
Edited by poetic - 9 years ago
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Woah did not see that coming Rachana a big twist
poetic thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Yes Shabz, now thinking of the next sequences.
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Can't wait love your writing Rachana now for nachiket to come back
ronitfan thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!
Love the twist, Rachana...
Are you writing more? Please do! :D
imagine43 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
As the kids listened to the stranger on the phone talk about their mom's wretched condition, they were shocked beyond extent. Next minute, they were rushing into the hospital.. Rabir first, hastily questioning about her, followed by Agham and Suhani and Aarav. All their faces shocked and worried... They raced to the room, the minute they found out.. to find Ragini, lying unconscious on the bed, eyes closed. She was bandaged on the calf of the right leg, on the left arm and on the head, just at the hair line. She looked weary and weak. Tears rolled down from every pair of eyes that had entered the room and witnessed the pale face.
As they stood, looking at their mom.. Suhani gently rubbing on her arm, Aagham, by her head, gently caressing her forehead, Aarav at the door, and Ranbir pacing around the room, Ranbir's phone buzzed... He picked up.. and answered, "Paapa".. "Paapa woh...".
Nachiket from the other side, sounded concerned.. "Ranbir, mein kab se teri maa se baat karne ki koshish kar raha hoon.. woh phone nahi utha rahi hai, Any idea beta, woh kahan hongi?".

Ranbir stuttered, unsure if he should tell his dad.. If his dad will be able to bear the news... He continued to stammer "P-Paapa", "paapa woh..", and Nachiket waited impatiently on the other side.
Ranbir managed to say, "Paapa woh maa..", when Ragini seemed to be waking up. She shifted and indicated something.. She struggled to turn to Ranbir and managing to lift her arm, signaled "no".. multiple times, before giving up on the little strength left and going back to slumber.. Ranbit looked at her faintly open eyes and obliging his mother's request answered his dad, "Paapa, woh maa.. gir gayi hai, aur usko thodi si chot aayi hai, pair pe.. toh isilye phone nahi liya.. But dont worry paapa, we are taking care of her.. she will be able to talk to you in some time.". Nachiket agreed and disconnected the phone with a strong feeling of something wasnt right.

poetic thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
'Where's Ragini?' Nachiket asked when he spied Pam and RK waiting for him at the Arrival Lounge. He looked around but there was no Ragini.
Pam smiled forcibly. She knew she had to manage her Brother somehow till they reached home.

'She is not here Neil' she said quietly, as they made way towards the waiting car. Nachiket noticed that RK was also unusually quiet. Seated at the front, by the driver, he was looking out. And Pam was clutching at his fingers. Why? he thought irritated.

After a while, Pam said
'She is at the Hospital.'

He flicked at his wristwatch to check the time. This time, his voice was laced with concern
'Now? So late? What's the emergency? Is Ranbir with her?'

Pam kept quiet as she started down at her palm, and then her fingers.

'Pam?' he nearly growled.

Pam looked up at him, tears in her eyes
'She has been admitted. She had had an accident two days back. She is unconscious most of the time.'

His expressions confirmed her fears, he was going in for a shock, which they all couldn't afford at this time
'It was a car on the wrong lane. The children are at the Hospital. The Doctor said that she was haemorrhaging when they brought her in. Luckily, they have stopped it, but still ...'

None of these words reached his ears. He just leant forward and tapped the driver on his shoulder - Hospital please.

He then leant his head back on the headrest and rubbed his eyes. The world suddenly seemed darker, and he found himself floating towards a chasm.

Even before the car could stop at its indicated parking slot, Nachiket alighted and ran inside. He met Nishi in the reception area, her eyes rimmed in red, and he pulled her in his arms.

'Room No. 205' she whispered, as they ran up the stairs. He didn't have enough patience or willpower to wait for the elevator. His steps slowed down as they neared the room. He hoped that it was a nightmare and that he would wake up anytime. But his nightmare was far from over and soon his fingers were on the doorknob of Room 205. And then he was inside the room.



ronitfan thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Oh gosh..
So moving and rousing, Rachana!
<3

Poor babies..

Loveleen, your turn!
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Awww poor nachiket what a shock and ragini maybe hurt but still does not want to worry him awww loved it.
Please continue soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".