TS: Everlong: Part 2/2 Updated Pg 3 (Complete) - Page 2

Originally posted by: metoyou

Okay me back with hopefully words that can do justice to this magical piece.

Yes Nidhi, this is absolutely brilliant 👏 Small, little gestures and moments. No heavy stuff yet touches the heart and soul. Every single movement makes them look imperfectly perfect.

The car ride, the theater and the ice cream... all they need is to spend time together and everything will fall back into its place.

It is only and purely because of writers like you that make us fall in love with, not only NeiRa, but also with love itself again and again.

Can't thank you enough for this gorgeous piece of excellence. A beauty it is...

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Originally posted by: goldstar678

Nidhi,

From the moment they r inside the car till the end of it,every single word while reading I felt it about neira.The typical romance of our neira.They do really deserve this time where they are alone,they missed so much already in their life past 18 years.

Really exited and looking forward to the next part

Originally posted by: ronitfan

In my wildest dreams, I could not have written something as beautiful as this about that prompt..Nidhi, you're a magician with those deliciously warm words of yours..

A big big hug for this!

Give me some time to calm my thudding heart now, I'll be back with more <3

You are lovely! <3

Originally posted by: shabz50

Loved it Nidhi just so romantic and beautifully written full of memories for our neira.

Loved it

Originally posted by: Santosh99

Nidhi di 😃

This is wonderfull-superb-mindblowing-outstanding it was pure magic from start to end! The way you portray the moments was just beautiful it's seem that it's happening infront of me totally loved it to the core! 😃 😃 😃

Please update soon for this dukhi atma! 😛

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank you Shabz, I am so happy you liked it, especially since you are the expert at writing those small everyday moments between them.

Thanks so much for your comment Shabz 😳

Originally posted by: shabz50

I am not expert nidhi and your writing is so much more beautiful then mine.

Please update soon

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

We are all experts in our own way Shabz, I love reading about your family-oriented and domestic Nachiket and Ragini that find romance everyday.

Will update when I can, not sure when.

Originally posted by: neiralove

NIDHI! ❤️

The beginning to this story, oh my GAWD! It was like watching the beginning of a movie, where the theme is introduced first through snippets of people's daily lives, the time lapse of cars on a busy street as time moves from day to night. I always wondered how one starts a story and today you have answered that question. This! This is how one begins! It was MARVELOUS! 😊

And coming to the meat of the story, Nachiket's hearty and genuine laughter, the way he took the popcorn from her hands 😳, and the ice cream dripping down her fingers. They are like a teenage couple--that young love blossoming between them again; the sweet memories from their past being rekindled along with a renewed infatuation with each other. Perfectly divine! ☺️

I so wish I had stayed awake for a few extra minutes to read this last night. Thank you so much for this lovely stress-buster; I really needed this. I'll be revisiting this one all week! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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