TS: Everlong: Part 2/2 Updated Pg 3 (Complete) - Page 4

Originally posted by: metoyou

This is exactly what I need one a windy rainy day like today;

Words that can create magic and feelings that warms the heart.

It is really in the smallest gestures that these two find their happiness. The pendant was not only sweet, cute and romantic but just knowing that he had it with him for so long is a sign of eternal love

This is indeed Nachiket and Ragini in true sense.

Thanks a ton for this insanely beautiful piece. I ended up in some dreamworld where I want to stay unless my Nachiket sweeps me off my feet in this world 😳

Nidhi 🤗 There can only be love for you ❤️

BTW...where was the mature part 😛

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank you so much my dear Narges 🤗

You are a delight always 😳 ❤️

Don't dream too long or else how will we find our Nachikets? 😛

Regarding the mature part...shut up it was implied ok 😆

Maybe you can show me how one should properly write it? 😉 😃

Originally posted by: metoyou

You make me a delight warna mein toh ainvayi types hoon 😆

Our Nachikets are maha buddhus!

Next time pen those thoughts down okay 😉

I show you how to write? Ha, what a joke Nidhi... Please don't make life difficult for me😛

Loved it nidhi just beautiful awww how long nachiket must have kept that pednant for her and loved ragini taking the first step and just wanting to go home with her nachiket loved it.

The sun blazed in the distance, painting the sky a fiery orange before beginning its dip into the horizon.

Originally posted by: shabz50

Loved it nidhi just beautiful awww how long nachiket must have kept that pednant for her and loved ragini taking the first step and just wanting to go home with her nachiket loved it.

Him wanting to unwrap his gift awww

Thank you for writing this just loved it

Originally posted by: neiralove

NIDHI! 🤗 🤗 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The sun blazed in the distance, painting the sky a fiery orange before beginning its dip into the horizon.

Imagery, dear God!

Maybe it was the breathy quality to her words, but his eyes darkened and she felt as if he was looking straight through her.

I'm a pile of mush now... ☺️

She could feel him hovering behind her, his eyes liquid like chocolate, sliding over the exposed skin of her neck, her back.

*faints* ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

"Wait...I want to unwrap my gift." 😲 ☺️

But wait, there's more... 😳😳😳

He stopped her hands at his buckle, though she was sure she would find him ready, the unsteady pulse she had tasted under his jaw telling her all she needed to know.

OH MY GOD! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I'm such a sucker for romance and you delivered so perfectly. I love that Nachiket wasn't able to stop himself from buying that pendant, even when he had no tangible hope of ever reconnecting with the true owner. 😳 The role that the necklace played in bringing them together was just lovely!

Can't thank you enough darling! MWAH! 😳

But if you're going to put a mature rating on your story, you've got to give us a bit more... 😉 😳

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Oy Shikha! ❤️❤️❤️

You are way too kind darling 🤗

I am so so happy 😳 that you liked this so much, thank you for your wonderful words ❤️

Haan you too huh? 😳 I happen to know you have a very active imagination, please feel free to use it and justify the rating 😉

Lots of hugs to you dearest, thank you for making my day 🤗🤗🤗

This is amazing... the kind of thing that lingers on your mind for days together. I read the 2nd part in the morning (its night now) and since then I have been smiling at myself, the grin has never left my face and I dont think it will for a couple more days, when I will come back and read it again for not to let go of this wonderful feeling. Cant thank you enough.