TS: Everlong: Part 2/2 Updated Pg 3 (Complete) - Page 5

Originally posted by: imagine43

This is amazing... the kind of thing that lingers on your mind for days together. I read the 2nd part in the morning (its night now) and since then I have been smiling at myself, the grin has never left my face and I dont think it will for a couple more days, when I will come back and read it again for not to let go of this wonderful feeling. Cant thank you enough.

The most insignificant things of daily life are utilized so wonderfully here - The car, the movie, the popcorn, the icecream, the sea, they just walking side by side, the sunset, the ribbon on the box, the KEY (my favorite).

My favs are:

The beginning about "time".. - its just wonderful I have no words.. 👏

"Lets go home..." - it means so many things

"Let me unwarp my present first.." - Nachiket is saying this only to make her feel better for "I dont have a present for you,,,"

Lastly the warm feeling that it leaves you with.

Thanks a bunch for writing this.

Originally posted by: metoyou

Nidhi bilkul theek keh rahi hai!

Shikha you are charged guilty... bas

Originally posted by: neiralove

Guilty of what? Writing? 😆

If that's the case, I'm not the only one in that boat... 😳 😉

Originally posted by: metoyou

Guilty of knowing more than your elders 😆 This age thing kuch nahin hota... 😛

Haan right, Nidhi is in that boat too...

Originally posted by: neiralove

What I know is only but a small drop in the ocean of knowledge that you and Nidhi possess on this topic... 😳

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Please, everything I know I learned from Narges 😉

Originally posted by: poetic

So Narges is to be blamed ?

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

I would say she is to be praised 😛