TS: Rings (Pg. 1 and Pg. 10) - Page 12

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Shikha... You thought this ending was terrible?😲

It was just WOW...

I read both the parts just now... I was not able to visit the forum before... Courtesy my work😔..

This was lovely... I loved how she slipped back to the Ragini of old... And I loved how he still loved the Ragini Khanna mode...

And the RING in your story played a cupid👏 I love it when inanimate things play cupid for true lovers😳

And this was beautiful... How she always wanted it to be in her finger was😳

And I loved how he has started taking leaps of faith😳 She has that effect on him😳

Loved it... So much😳

Thanks for this beautiful piece Shikha🤗

Originally posted by: neiralove

Rachna Di, I seriously don't know what to say to this...where should I even begin? One of the best companion fics? 😲 You have no idea how much that means to me, especially coming from such a talented writer like yourself. Thank you SO SO SO much for your wonderfully kind words. 😳

I think they both are falling back in love, it's just that they are too scared to accept it. And Ragini falling asleep on Nachiket's shoulder...well, that's just where she belongs. The poor girl has spent so much time waiting for him but now that he's finally back in her life, she has to keep holding herself back.

Nachiket's resolution was what I was having trouble with in writing this piece. Somehow it didn't feel right to me that he would reconcile with himself so easily. So I tried to write it in a way that brings him into a moment of clarity, but still leaves the cloud of confusion in his head. You're absolutely right, along with enjoying himself in the short term, he needs to decide what he wants in the long term. Does he have the heart to separate himself from Ragini yet again? And he has yet to understand and answer that question that will really define this relationship for him. 😊

Originally posted by: poetic

Shikha, I have only one word for this piece - BEAUTIFUL.

And you have grown into such a fine writer, I must say! 😳⭐️👏

Please write more

Originally posted by: neiralove

Good lord Sukhi Di! 😲

Hot chocolate and marshmallows?! That's just too sweet of you (literally)! 😳 I hadn't thought about the scene from Nachiket's POV at all, so I wasn't sure if what I had come up with made sense or not. It was hard for sure, but it's all worth it if it made you happy. 😊

Thank you so much for reading it; the real treat is in reading your lovely comments after every piece! Thanks for all your love and support, for this and for all my other stories! 😳

A giant hug for you in return for that high five! 🤗

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Awww..

Right back at you 🤗

The real treat is how we have so many different type of beautiful writers with their own signature style!

Originally posted by: neiralove

Rachna Di, I can try romantic, but sexy... 😕

Narges, absolutely NOT writing that again! 😆

Originally posted by: metoyou

SHUT UP and write! Just give it a try... trust me, you will love it yourself 😉😆