FF Destiny Last Part on Pg 18 - Page 4

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

This is wonderful Shabz👏

I so loved it😳

I loved how Nachiket said 'I never stopped loving her' in the first part😳 So true it is😳

And how Ragini waited for him😳

Her fear was so true... Poor Ragini...😔

Dr, Aman😡

And when he came back... her feelings😳

I am waiting for the next part😊 This is very beautiful...

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi

Great going Shabz... Now when ll Ragini confess her feeling ??? Waiting Waiting Waiting...

They had finished dinner nachiket was sat with the kids giving them their presents and ragini and sunny tai were cleaning up when she saw him rubbing his head she called suhanni and gave her a glass of water and two asprin give this to your dad. Suhanni gave them to her dad and he looked upto and smiled she could never see him in pain.

Bedroom
He came in ragini was in the bathroom he got his pillow and blanket and put them on the sofa. She came out and saw him sitting on the sofa she went and sat on the bed he got up and went into the bathroom. She didn't want him to sleep on the sofa she went and picked up the pillow and blanket and put them on the bed. He came out she was in bed her back to him he saw the sofa empty and then noticed his pillow and blanket on the bed. He smiled and went and got into bed she heard him get into bed she smiled to herself. "Can i switch the light off ragini" "yes u can" "you not sacred today" "well u said you are here nothing to be sacred of" he smiled and switched the light off.

Morning
Ragini was getting ready for work when nachiket came and asked her "where are u going" "i am going to work nachiket" "i thought you said we needed to talk about us" she stopped "we do but not now i have to go" ragini listen she was gone.

Hospital
Ragini was sat in her cabin thinking i wanted him to come back he has so what is stopping me now he has proved he wants to stay with me then why am i not telling him that i love him. She could not put it off she had to have the conversation with him.

Home 3pm
Nachiket was at home discussing the deal with ranbir when ragini walked in. She looked at nachiket "we need to talk" "ranbir we will finish this later ok" "sit down lets talk ragini" "not here nachiket i do not want the kids to hear us" "ok lets go out"

Car
Where do you want to go ragini anywhere we can talk nachiket. He saw her rubbing her palms she only did that when she was nervous. He stopped the car near a house this place will do she looked at him then the house.

House
Who lives here nachiket "that does not matter ragini u wanted to talk lets talk" "i wanted to talk nachiket" "yes i told you i love you and want our marriage to work and u said nothing then u said u wanted to talk so talk" she looked at him he was angry "well ragini talk" "nachiket i don't know" "you don't know what if u want to be with me is that it" she looked at him he moved towards her and was just about hold her hand she moved away "ragini" he whispered she had tears in her eyes. "nachiket i love you i have always loved you but i am sacred of getting my heart broken again being left alone like last time i am sacred of letting u get close to me because this time i will not cope nachiket last time i had the kids with me i had to get on with it for their sake but i lost count of the nights i cried myself to sleep when all i wanted was for u to hold me and how many times i wished for the phone to ring and to hear your voice or for the door to open and for you and my boys to walk back in that pain is still there nachiket my heart can't take anymore pain you went away for one week and i was a mess. Nachiket was stood listening to her with tears in his eyes his ragini looked frail and broken he had never seen her like this he walked upto her held her hand "ragini i promise i am not going anwhere i am staying here with you and our kids" "you said that last time and you let rupail come between us" "i will do whatever i have to do to convince you that i am not going anywhere anything ragini" she looked at him she saw the truth in his eyes. "Please ragini give us another chance please we have both been alone for 18 years this is our chance to get rid of that lonliness and be together" her heart was saying yes but her mind was not sure but this was her nachiket she had to give him another chance she had to give herself another chance at being happy. "Yes i want to give us another chance nachiket" he looked at her and hugged her.

Car
They were driving back home when ragini asked him "what are we going to tell the kids".

Wow shabzz 👏

Thank god she expressed her feelings.

No doubt that it would be hard for her to express and to believe him because she is very hurt and scared of loosing him again
you portrayed her confusion perfectly.

Loved the bedroom part it was very sweet. Typical ragini gesture it was, she would do what she wants to without saying anything hahaha. :)

Beautiful it was.

Not going to request you to update soon because I know you will :))

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Thank god she expressed her feelings.

No doubt that it would be hard for her to express and to believe him because she is very hurt and scared of loosing him again
you portrayed her confusion perfectly.

Loved the bedroom part it was very sweet. Typical ragini gesture it was, she would do what she wants to without saying anything hahaha. :)

Beautiful it was.

Not going to request you to update soon because I know you will :))

Thanks for the update Shabz. Such a cute and emotional confession.

Shabz!

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Shabz!

Why do I get a feeling that the house is something Nachiket has bought to show Ragini he's ready for everything? <3 This is lovely! She finally confessed to him.. wonderful :)

Please continue soon!

Car
"We will tell them the truth that we giving our marriage another chance no contracts nothing just us.

Home
The kids were at home ranbir had told aagham and suhanni that they had gone to talk and suhanni had rung nishi the kids knew today they would find out whether their mum and dad were staying together or not. Maa was in the temple praying that ragini had said yes to nachiket. Ragini and nachiket came in the kids all stood up so did maa no one spoke they just looked at them finally ranbir spoke "well dad when we going back to usa then" "we are not going back we are staying here as a family" suhanni and nishi ran to hug their mum and maa came and hugged her aswell they were soo happy ragini had said yes. Ranbir went away he did not look happy.

Bedroom
Ragini was putting her sari in the cupboard when nachiket came in and stood behind her and put his right arm around her waist and moved her hair with his left hand and kissed her neck but ragini moved away he stopped "ragini" "i need time nachiket" he pulled his arm away "ok take as much time as you need" he went into the bathroom. They both went to sleep.

Morning
Kids were up early they still so happy from yesterday. Ranbir was not happy ragini offered him breakfast he refused and said he was going out. She watched him go. She thought she was getting closer to him but she was wrong or was she? Everyone had gone out to work and college only sunny tai was in the house. Ranbir came back he was going to his room when sunny tai stopped him "stop ranbir i want to ask you something why do you hurt your mum always" "sunny tai please mind your own business" "i know i am only the servant but i have seen ragini cry for you and aagham and seen her in pain of being away from you" "she does not care for us she left us when we needed her she forgot about us" "no she did not forget about you and she does care for you and i have the proof" sunny tai went into raginis room and brought out a box "look at this" ranbir walked towards it the box had his name on it "ragini has one box for you and one for aagham open it and see" ranbir opened the box it had pictures of him as a baby it had drawings he done at school and his awards from school he then came across a pack of letters he looked at sunny tai "she wrote you both letters on your birthday but they always came back" he looked at the unopened letters and opened one and read it he was trying hard not to cry he then saw a bank book and opened it the book had depoists every month in it again he looked at sunny tai "ragini always put money away for all her kids each month she would go without but the money always went in the bank". For the rest of the morning he sat and read the letters his mum had written him he was crying how could he think so badly of her she loved him as much as she did when he was with her all these years her love was there and all he gave her was pain.

Evening
Ragini was back so was everyone else they all had made a plan to go out to eat and plan ranbirs birthday when ranbir came out "ranbir come here sit down so tell us what you want for your birthday" nachiket asked "nothing dad" its your birthday bro you can't have nothing come on tell us suhanni said he looked at his dad "i will get anything i ask for dad" "yes ranbir anything" "well i want two pressents from mrs ragini khanna" "ranbir she is your mum how dare you speak to her like this" nachiket said ragini was sat at the kitchen table she got up and walked towards them ranbir stood up aswell "well mrs khanna do u agree will you give me what i want" nachiket was getting angrier and angrier "its ok nachiket first time my son has asked me for something how can i say no" everyone was looking at ranbir "i want two presents "you can have as many as you want" "i will ask you on my birthday then" and he walked away. Nachiket went to go after him but ragini stopped him.

Ranbirs Birthday
Ragini had made him his favourite chocolate cake they were all waiting for him to come. Ranbir came everyone wished him happy birthday and nachiket told him to cut the cake.