FF Destiny Last Part on Pg 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A story just to see how the track could go.



It had been a year since they had got into this contract marriage and on their one year anniversary nivi had told everyone the truth about the marriage and nachiket had found out the truth out about pams reasons for this marriage and his USA job. Pam had moved out of raginis aarav had gone with her but suprising for everyone ranbir had stayed.

One week later
The kids were still a bit angry at their mum and dad but they were happy that their dad wanted to work on the relationship. Nachiket had broken his commitment to nivi but ragini still had not expressed her feelings the wall was still up. Nachiket was desperate to know what she felt he saw the love in her eyes but there was a doubt there. Ragini wanted to tell nachiket that she wanted this relationship to work and that she still loved him as much as he loved her but she was sacred of losing him again this time she would not be able to bear it.

Morning
They were all having breakfast when nachikets phone rang it was his PA from USA sonu he took the call and cane back after 15 mins and said "ranbir i need you to book 2 tickets to USA asap one for me and one for you" "ok dad" aagham "why you going to USA dad" "we need to go and sign and sort the soulcare contract it will not be for long" he looked at ragini there was no expression on her face he wanted her to ask why he was going or at least ask him when he would be back or even ask him not to go had he left it too late? Had he really lost his ragini?

Bedroom
He was packing when maa came in "nachiket" "maa come in" "nachiket u going to usa" "maa some business to sort out thats all" "you are coming back?" "yes of course i am coming back maa my kids are here and most importantly my life ragini is here" "i am happy to hear u say that nachiket you still love her" i never stopped loving her" "have a safe trip beta" nachiket touched maas feet she blessed him as maa walked out she saw ragini standing there she had heard their talk maa was going to say something when ragini stopped her.

Roof
Ragini was sitting there thinking about what nachiket had said to maa. "Ragini" she looked her mother was standing there "why do you not tell nachiket" "tell him what" "that you still love him" "i can't maa" "why not" "because if i lose him again i will be be able cope" "you will not lose him ragini both of u have no secrets now this is your second chance tell him before he leaves for usa" maa went left ragini to think. Maa was right they had no secrets and they had been given a second chance but her fear was stopping her.

Bedroom
Ranbir was talking to his dad telling him that they were flying tonight when ragini walked in. "You go pack ranbir" ranbir walked out nachiket stood and looked at ragini "how long are u going for nachiket" "a week maybe 10 days i will know when i get there" "are you coming back" "do you really have to ask" she looked at him and got her answer "when you come back we need to talk about us" ok ragini.

Living room
Nachiket was sat with maa having tea and sunny tai and ragini were in the kitchen when the kids came and handed him three lists whats these nachiket asked "they are thing we want you to bring back" suhanni said "yes dad they are only small lists" nishi said who was visiting for a few days. "I am going for business not for shopping" please dad he took the lists and gave them to ranbir. Aagham went up to his mum "mum have you gave your list to papa" "no beta i don't need anything" "but maa papa has to bring you back something tell him what you want" "your papa already knows what i want" saying this she went back into the kitchen nachiket watched her go and smiled. It was time for nachiket and ranbir to leave nachiket hugged the kids and took maas blessings and ranbir took her blessings aswell. Nachiket looked at maa "she is inside" ranbir go down i will not be long.

Bedroom
Ragini was sat on the bed she had tears in her eyes she could not watch him leave she heard the door open and close she felt his pressece. "Ragini you not going to see us off" she had her back to him "have a safe trip and look after ranbir and yourself. Dad hurry up we going to late. "Ragini" "just go nachiket please" he left ragini started crying would he come back?

All feedback postive or neagtive is welcome and any ideas to improve or things to add to the story are welcome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice take on the current scenario.btw your siggy is too beautiful.
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Wow👏
Its butiful shabzz and now waiting for next part plzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vicky7

Nice take on the current scenario.btw your siggy is too beautiful.


Thank you and the siggy is shikhas work
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Shabz. This is so good. True to the situation.
I hope there's a second part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is going great, Shabz. You always set your stories in different yet normal situations. I am looking forward to the next part. Update soon! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. this s soo good... we can expect something like this in serial... plz write next part asap...
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Originally posted by: poetic

Wow Shabz. This is so good. True to the situation.

I hope there's a second part.


Thanks rachana and yes there is a second part
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Originally posted by: loveleen3

This is going great, Shabz. You always set your stories in different yet normal situations. I am looking forward to the next part. Update soon! :D


Thank u yes will try and update soon
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Oh Wow Shabz this is great,
It's perfect according to the situation...
Please update soon can't wait to read what happens next.

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