FF - Togetherness Again - Epilogue & A letter from NK Updated Page

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Hello!

So here is another (AU) FF and this one shall be updated regularly without much delay. This story is very close to me for its partially based on a true story.

Hope you all like it.


Love.
Curious

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TOGETHERNESS AGAIN...

Author's thoughts..

In life there are many things we wish for earnestly, but we don't end up gaining everything unless we are destined to. At that moment it may seem that if not this then nothing will please us and we tend to shut doors to something which maybe much better than what we desired for.

Kehte hai na..."waqt se pehle aur naseeb se zyada kisiko kuch nahi mila..." And so TRUST and believe that whatever happens, it happens for good...

And when it comes to love I truly believe..."pyaar ek panchi ki tarah hota hai, use khula chod do , agar wo laut ke aaye to wo tumhara hai aur agar nahi to wo wo tumhara kabhi tha hi nahi, use bhul jaao..."


Index

Prologue: Page 1
Part 1 : Page 3
Part 2 : Page 4
Part 3 : Page 7
Part 4 : Page 8
Part 5 : Page 11
Part 6 : Page 13
Part 7 : Page 17
Part 8 : Page 18
Part 9 : Page 22
Part 10 : Page 24
Part 11A : Page 26
Part 11B : Page 27
Part 12 : Page 29
Part 13 : Page 31
Part 14A : Page 32
Part 14B : Page 34
Part 15 : Page 37
Part 16 : Page 39
Part 17 : Page 42
Part 18 : Page 46
Epilogue: Page 48
A Letter from Nachiket Khanna: Page 48
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue

'I love you Nachiket and I can't think of my life without you', Ragini declared in a serious tone.

And what followed this was a complete silence. Nachiket froze in his place. His heart fluttered and he kept looking at her. Neither of them winked even once. In the quieter part of the evening both stood still and speechless only their racing heartbeats audible. The soft wind blowing her dupatta was the only movement in that frozen moment.

After a long pause Nachiket broke the silence, 'I am sorry Ragini, I have always loved you as a friend and...' he stopped. He turned and looked away from her and tightly clutched the bars of the large swing that stood there. She could see him escaping her eyes. She flinched and feared as she saw his hold on the bars of the swing getting strong. His curled fists seemed like he was holding back his intense feelings than let it out as heart breaking words.

'...and?' Ragini urged him to complete his sentence.

Nachiket hesitated, but composed himself and turned to see her again and said, 'I have always loved you as a friend and nothing more than that Ragini...I am sorry to break your heart, but it's better to clear your doubts than give you any false hopes' he finished.

'...and nothing more than that Ragini...I am sorry!!' Nachiket's words kept echoing in her ears. Every time his words repeated in her mind it broke her into thousands of pieces...Such that they can never be gathered into one where love could reside ever again.

Nachiket could see her pent up emotions slowly break free and flow along with her tears.
It's unfortunate Ragini, that God chose me to break your heart!' Nachiket tried to comfort her. 'I respect your feelings, but am sorry I...I cannot reciprocate them...' he paused. The way you feel for me or the way I feel for you does not change our friendship at all... I was and I shall always be there as a friend for you, forever...'

'How ironical!', she thought. The one who broke my heart is the one who offers his shoulder too to cry on. She laughed softly and wiped her tears before she spoke, 'I know and I trust that too Nachiket. All I want is to see you happy...and if that means your happiness is with someone else but me... I am fine with it.


She took in a sharp breath and continued, 'All the best and remember there is one heart that shall always pray for your happiness'.

He could see it was not just her eyes, but even her heart wept!

That was the last he saw of Ragini who'd actually come to bid him goodbye. She chose that day to finally voice her feelings before he was gone. She expected him to stay, but eventually it was she who walked away not just from there, but from his life with a smile despite a broken heart. He knew she would never hate him for what he did to her, for she loved him more than that...

That moonlit night and the one sided voiced confessions of love became a life altering incident in his life. That changed the perspective of his life...

That night had been the most difficult one for both. While Ragini wept all alone, Nachiket shared his grief to the lonely moon who silently witnessed this unfortunate last exchange of words...some spoken and some unspoken...

Edited by iamcurious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is going to be a wonderful story! The way you arrange the words, make your piece beautiful. I'm glad you posted an another AU story. Awesome start! A very good teaser, it definitely teased. Waiting for more and more to come😳
Edited by RaginiJoshi - 10 years ago
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My heart just stopped fpr a moment ... and then came backl to LIFE again!
This is so beautiful Curious and I am so mighty glad that you posted it. I just have this supremely weird feeling that this is going to be superbly beautiful. 😊 Maybe tragic, maybe comic, but definitely beautiful.

Simple words, simple moments ... yet the weight of the entire world in those words and feelings. Life altering indeed !

And I am mighty glad that I am reading it. ❤️

Hope you update this one jaldi jaldi ... pretty please.


Edited by poetic - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

My heart just stopped fpr a moment ... and then came backl to LIFE again!

This is so beautiful Curious and I am so mighty glad that you posted it. I just have this supremely weird feeling that this is going to be superbly beautiful. 😊 Maybe tragic, maybe comic, but definitely beautiful.

Simple words, simple moments ... yet the weight of the entire world in those words and feelings. Life altering indeed !

And I am mighty glad that I am reading it. ❤️

Hope you update this one jaldi jaldi ... pretty please.




And here comes a lovely comment from you already. Thanks a bunch!

You all have been so kind and showed interest in reading, had to post this one :)

And well it is indeed a mix of all you said 😆 so hope the end result is beautiful.

I'll be posting the 1st Chapter towards evening and the remaining almost regularly 😃

A Big thank you for ALWAYS reading what I write!!



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will come back soon with my comments !

Reserved 😃
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Originally posted by: iamcurious



And here comes a lovely comment from you already. Thanks a bunch!

You all have been so kind and showed interest in reading, had to post this one :)

And well it is indeed a mix of all you said 😆 so hope the end result is beautiful.

I'll be posting the 1st Chapter towards evening and the remaining almost regularly 😃

A Big thank you for ALWAYS reading what I write!!




You write so beautifully, main kya karoon?

I feel like reading these stories for eternity, hoping that they never end.

😃

Ab jaldi jaldi post karo pl
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Beautiful FF! You write so well..even the emotions are so correctly expressed. One can read and feel every line simultaneously. A good start. The story is interesting. Do continue soon-ish😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written love the start
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Nice update soon next part

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