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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: poetic
Yes, they are magical. Have to give it to RR and Pk for doing such an excellent job.
I hope they go away for long drives and all, and spend some more time together

BTW, when are you updating?

I want to see the stolen kisses and hugs 😳😳😳

will update super soon!

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR
I am dead.

Now, what did I do? last time, it was a short update

Aren't you going to acknowledge the story? 😃

Edited by poetic - 10 years ago

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ronitfan

I want to see the stolen kisses and hugs 😳😳😳
will update super soon!

Same here. But will they show anything? Simple scenes i mean.

Bhutta - I can see for a day only. 😆

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

MASTERPIECE! 👏

One of the best, perhaps even THE BEST, I have ever read.

I can't express in words how romantic, passionate and beautiful this is. What a talent you have of bringing out their emotions and feeling in the perfect way.

This is beyond great, beyond wonderful and beyond amazing.

Thanks a ton for sharing this with us.

My favorite part:

'You know it right? That I am going to make sweet love to you ...'

Her breath caught in her throat, as he leant towards her and whispered

... very soon.'

😳😳

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Arre baap re Narges ... 😆

Thank you so much.

If you praise so much at this time of the night, I will not sleep tonight. LOL

But thank you so much. I am GLAD you liked it.

I wish I had the patience to really write much better, and not scrimp out towards the end.

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: poetic
Arre baap re Narges ... 😆
Thank you so much.
If you praise so much at this time of the night, I will not sleep tonight. LOL

But thank you so much. I am GLAD you liked it.

I wish I had the patience to really write much better, and not scrimp out towards the end.

Oye, you deserve all the praise. One has to be really pagal for not liking this. Tumhe koi idea nahin hai how WONDERFUL this is, saachi.

If it makes you feel any better, even I won't be able to sleep after their sea romance 😳

Can we get this in the show?!

My hands are itching to write romance but I will have to wait for some time...

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

And now I will wait for the romance that you are going to write.

of course, we could have a nice beach scene in the show - not the beaches in Mumbai, some other beach at night time. Simple sa, nothing gaudy.

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

There are so called writers like me and there are maha talented writers like you, so please don't get your hopes up too high warna maha disappointedho jaoongi 😛

Exactly some other beach, as long as they are together alone far away from others... 😳

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: mothiaai
wow its really awesome!

Thanks a lot. 😊

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: metoyou
There are so called writers like me and there are maha talented writers like you, so please don't get your hopes up too high warna maha disappointedho jaoongi 😛

Exactly some other beach, as long as they are together alone far away from others... 😳

You have gone crazy. We are all in the same boat and we love NR, that's were we are all equal.

I love the work that Ragini and you do. SO no comparisons. 😆😳