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Vidya

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: poetic

🤪Thank you.

Nachiket Khanna indeed ! 😲😳

Rachna ... is he the Nachiket Khanna " Twitter ka"????

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Vidya

@Vidya.CV

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

I am coming back with my comments... I am still reading😆

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: iamcurious
Another brilliant piece from you Rachna. God bless you for writing so beautifully!!

Its wonderful to see the two making attempts and primarily Nachiket NOW taking all the required initial steps to mend the broken relations knowing she will follow.

Be it planning the mini vacation, to promising to never let her cry, to opening up to her as a husband and talk so comfortably about making love and still make her blush😳..

..and see she responded to all...Its so simple, one takes the first step and remaining follows.

There is this song Tum jo mil gaye ho from Haste Zakhm that suits this situation so well. I love the song, and this line on behalf of Nachiket to Ragini 😳 "Baitho naa dur hamse, dekho khafa naa ho
Kismat se mil gaye ho, milke juda naa ho..."

Your words, location and scenario were just perfect. Everything blended well to give rise to this beautiful piece. 👏
It seems you do it so effortlessly everytime but I do realise you take time off to write this, so thank you for the time.

Just a friendly reminder, its good to read OS but you have stories pending that needs completion my dear. 😆

Oh My Goodness. That's one of my favourite songs from the movie Hanste Oakham, the other being Betaab Dil Ki Tamanna ... 😊

I mean, how can lyrics be both evocative and innocent at the same time. WOW, WOW, super WOW ! And to think of it as a child I cringed at these songs when they were played on Chitrahaar. 😕

Thank you so much for reading and also for reminding the Work in Progress stories 😆. Actually, I start thinking of what I should write to continue them, but end up inevitably with One Shots. 😳

You are right when you say that sometimes one has to take the first step to correct the mistakes. The others will eventually cooperate.

Thanks once again. 😳

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

Rachna ... is he the Nachiket Khanna " Twitter ka"????

I have NO IDEA 😆 But I guess NOT.

The NK over there wouldn't have used so many colours in his post, methinks. 😉

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poetic

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

Oh please continue 😆

I hope their love scenes are elongated ones. Not like that two roses clashing and lights off! And tadaa! Its morning. N-O NO! NEVER! 😆

@ Bold - 🤣 You are so funny. But actually I don't have anything like that in mind. As of now. 😃