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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: metoyou

I kinda understand. Writing should not be forced, it has to come out naturally otherwise it won't make any sense. Same here, although writing is something which I have recently discovered all because of NeiRa 😳

P.S. One hell of a good job for something which started just a few hours ago 😊

Thanks Narges that you guys started writing because of NR.Another contribution of NR o the Forum.

I hope you get better soon and start writing at the earliest. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR

U killed me, I m in heaven

😛 Hope you resurface like the Phoenix again .. 😆

Thank you Sam 😃

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak
Excellent Job Rachna! 👍🏼
Is there anything more beautiful dan the piece U just wrote !!!!
Its awesome + the concept of sending them away on beach WOW!😳 M in Heaven...
Wish to see PK n RR in some beautiful enchanting moments on screen too
Plz do continue dis... Its beautiful
Going to read it again 😃

Thank you so much for your kind words 😃

Frankly I would also love to see some quality NR romance, some nice scenes before we move onto the next major disaster.

We need to create memories. 😳

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Saabi45
WOW... That was just brilliant.

They are so meant to be with each other.
It's amazing coming to think of it how very different they are and yet united.

Superb superb writing Rachna!. 😳

Thanks Saabi. 😊 Yes these two are as different as chalk and cheese, but they complement each other beautifully. Like they are the other parts of the concept of Ardhanarieshwar

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: goldstar678
Masterpiece,Classic.

This is the way to handle a matured love story and Romance.The way you always describe the inner feelings of Neira is the USP of your writings.They are so different from each other,the only similarity i actually see between them is the mad love they both have for each other.

Thanks for the beautiful OS.

😊 Thank you so much Pavan.

This is what I want o see in the coming episodes though I know that's not gonna happen. Hence, our own khayali pulav. 😳

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -Spriha-
WOW...lovvveedd it!
So amazing and so pure the way you write it.
Neil and Ragini really are meant to be👏
Fabbb!!

Yep Spriha. They are meant to be ... always.

Thanks for reading. 😃

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Ragini Joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

This is beautiful! Them at the beach, this idea itself is beautiful! I wish this happens in the show some day.
That 'love making' part was lovely. I am waiting for them to make love in the show as well. But it's way too far I guess😆
Creatives need to learn from you. I hope they read this. This is THAT beautiful and that lovely.
I am not going to take this as a one shot. You'll have to continue this Rachna di..its a request:)

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR
This is beautiful! Them at the beach, this idea itself is beautiful! I wish this happens in the show some day.
That 'love making' part was lovely. I am waiting for them to make love in the show as well. But it's way too far I guess😆
Creatives need to learn from you. I hope they read this. This is THAT beautiful and that lovely.
I am not going to take this as a one shot. You'll have to continue this Rachna di..its a request:)

Thanks Ragini. 😃 Have bit really thought of a second part to this story, but there's no harm in thinking about one. 😉

As for NR uniting in the Show, I will be superb;y surprised if something happens sooner. They will keep us baited till eternity.

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iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Another brilliant piece from you Rachna. God bless you for writing so beautifully!!

Its wonderful to see the two making attempts and primarily Nachiket NOW taking all the required initial steps to mend the broken relations knowing she will follow.

Be it planning the mini vacation, to promising to never let her cry, to opening up to her as a husband and talk so comfortably about making love and still make her blush😳..

..and see she responded to all...Its so simple, one takes the first step and remaining follows.

There is this song Tum jo mil gaye ho from Haste Zakhm that suits this situation so well. I love the song, and this line on behalf of Nachiket to Ragini 😳 "Baitho naa dur hamse, dekho khafa naa ho
Kismat se mil gaye ho, milke juda naa ho..."

Your words, location and scenario were just perfect. Everything blended well to give rise to this beautiful piece. 👏
It seems you do it so effortlessly everytime but I do realise you take time off to write this, so thank you for the time.

Just a friendly reminder, its good to read OS but you have stories pending that needs completion my dear. 😆

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Ragini Joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Ragini.😃Have bit really thought of a second part to this story, but there's no harm in thinking about one.😉

As for NR uniting in the Show, I will be superb;y surprised if something happens sooner. They will keep us baited till eternity.

Oh please continue 😆

I hope their love scenes are elongated ones. Not like that two roses clashing and lights off! And tadaa! Its morning. N-O NO! NEVER! 😆

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