But you know, whatever (Shot #2, Pg. 10); 27/11 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: coolie001

That was hilarious and aww-mazing, very well written. A tale of a burgeoning new relation and that was friggging awesome, but you know, whatever.


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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Aruni.

Loved it Sabi! You always have that refreshing sense of humour and very subtle edge of romance going in your work. So nice to read!

Thank you Aruni. It was great seeing you here :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anjali9988

Di what an Incredibly Talented Writer you are ✍🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

How the hell I haven't known, came across your Writings/ Stories earlier ?

My Badluck back then , but i consider this as Goodluck of mine , that I finally I got you di ❤️ & the chance to read your Beautiful Writings.

You might not believe me , but I have have read this Amazing OS four Times , & then finally I'm putting down my comment.

This OS ,

' BUT YOU KNOW, WHATEVER ' ,

is freaking amazing di 👏🏻👏🏻. I just loved reading Every single bit of it .

This OS has everything in it . & How Beautifully you have penned down it, Keeping it Realistic & Relatable. , taking care of Every nuance of thing's, of choti choti baatein ❤️

It's visible in each line , that you have put down your all dedication while writing it .

There's humour , there's fluttering butterflies dancing in my stomach , while reading it .

I was the whole time grinning happily while reading it 😊

Khushi's awareness of all things specially about her handsome husband , her hilarious inner talks to herself & her weirdness laced with super cuteness is an delightful Treat to read On & on ❤️

How so beautifully you have Shown a blooming realtionship of a newly wed couple & The domesticity of their Home ❤️

There's a sense of Friendly comfort , a belonging & Care for each other in ARNAV KHUSHI'S realtionship. This is how Every arrange marriage should work .

Slowly but steadily , with Love , Trust & care holding for each other , their Rishta is blooming 🌸

KHUSHI & her ajeebness ( her ajeeb thoughts are so amusing 😄) & her being a Sankadevi , got a husband who is there to hold her , no matter what the situation is .

Afterall , I can sense ARNAV saying to KHUSHI - Hameshaa sambhaltaa Rahunga , no matter what happens my Ajeeb but cutee wife , I'm always there for you 💕

Both ARNAV & khushi are taking baby steps Towards each other & i seriously love the way you have progressed there Realtionship.

With KHUSHI Smiling involuntarily sleeping on her pillow , we can see Love has started to bloom 🌸 between them . A love laced with Trust & concern for each other 💕.

This OS 'BUT YOU KNOW, WHATEVER' & You Sauchehips di ..... Has my heart for Forever now 💕. Your way of Writing is Miridical & your way of Narrating the Story is Captivating di ✍🏻👏🏻

& Now , when I have experienced myself how Amazing , Brilliant Writer you are , I'm not going to miss anything coming from you di .

I'm going to keep an eye on you , if you post anything in future , Please do tell me , drop a pm , message or anything 🙏🏻. Please di 🙏🏻.

Now I'm off to read your Awesome Story

UNEXPECTEDLY EXPECTED , which I'm sure gonna be a Enjoyful read 😀

Sauchehips di , there's a humble request to you - Can we get another part of this Os or something else ?

No pressure at all . I understand Asli Duniya is very busy. You take your time . We all are always here waiting for you . But please 🙏🏻 when you have some free time then please do Write ✍🏻 more . A Story , a SS , OS , anything & set up your own blog . You are an BRILLIANT Writer di 👏🏻. & I'm so EXCITED 😀 & LOOKING FORWARD TO READ MORE OF YOUR WRITINGS/ STORIES 🤗.

THANKS SO SO MUCH DI 🙏🏻

LOVE YOU A LOT 😘💕

Like I have told you before, you are too cute. 😆

Thank you so much sweetie. Hope you continue to enjoy!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

Firstly , I am so glad that you are back, Sabi🤗thank you for the PM🤗

What an endearing OS ⭐️.. peppered with copious amount of Sankiness and mirth..😆.. loving their slow changing dynamics .

Hope to read more from your blog !

Thank you Aanchal! It was so good to see you here.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: dumas

Welcome back darling you were missed loved the os awesome banter so cute .

Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SirenMitra

Please tell me there's more to come...

OMG.. can't control my laugh.. she's hilarious... can't blame Arnav for laughing on her getting faint and decompose fear...

That was very sweet of him to come in her room... Let's see what will happen next...

Thank you! Maybe there will be, but only after I'm done with my ongoing stories :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: cheers2all

I can so damn well relate to Khushi! Her opinion about the early risers, the swearing at the alarm clock (I was ROFLing at "get a life!"), binge watching Netflix, laptop covered in dust ☺️, chips crumbs on the keyboard, embarrassing passwords - all of it resonated with me.

Arnav on the other hand is better composed, inspite of the hallucinations 😉

He is so chilled out. Makes coffee for his late rising wife, fixes her laptop and volunteers to make sure she is discovered before the commencement of decomposition. And all that in a by the way kind of way. That dude is a rockstar! I hope you write another OS someday from his POV.


Loose tracks and white full sleeved v-neck tshirt reminded me of this. But you know, whatever!


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Cr.: uploader

Ever since I saw this comment, I've been wondering where you fished these pics out from 😆(I thought ASR never wore white?). They do fit quite well to the Arnav of this OS though.

If you relate with Khushi here, then I relate with you, and so I obviously like you. Bas, keh diya.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Kamala05

OMG saucechips is back with another fab work . Is this a one shot ? I wish it has a second part as well. Greedy I know , but what to do , your works makes me greedy .

❤️ Thank you hon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Arshi67

What an utterly sweet and poignant story, stamped with your signature humour. Love how you show Khushi's awareness of all things Arnav and the way he understands his new wife. She may be ajeeb, but woh sambhal lega... hamesha :)

Looking forward to reading more from your blog!

You are too sweet :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Savera84

What a hilarious 20 hours!

Short, simple, hilarious and Arshilicious.

This is the most craziest "what if" I have ever come across. Arnav went a step ahead and made it even more crazier and he had a solution for the "What if" too! Wonderful!

Lovely OS!

Cheers........

❤️smiley27

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