But you know, whatever (Shot #2, Pg. 10); 27/11 - Page 3

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Welcome back darling you were missed loved the os awesome banter so cute .

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Wooww..it was super cool...

So wishur threads open soon ...would love to read more of ur work

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Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Loved it Sabi! You always have that refreshing sense of humour and very subtle edge of romance going in your work. So nice to read!

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Nice one!

Also when the log is up, pls do send the link!

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#25

Nice OS with a touch of humour which is the singature of your writing. Please keep us updated when the blog is open

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Nice one really loved it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely OS!! A step forward is all dey needed.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

Di what an Incredibly Talented Writer you are ✍🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

How the hell I haven't known, came across your Writings/ Stories earlier ?

My Badluck back then , but i consider this as Goodluck of mine , that I finally I got you di ❤️ & the chance to read your Beautiful Writings.

You might not believe me , but I have have read this Amazing OS four Times , & then finally I'm putting down my comment.

This OS ,

' BUT YOU KNOW, WHATEVER ' ,

is freaking amazing di 👏🏻👏🏻. I just loved reading Every single bit of it .

This OS has everything in it . & How Beautifully you have penned down it, Keeping it Realistic & Relatable. , taking care of Every nuance of thing's, of choti choti baatein ❤️

It's visible in each line , that you have put down your all dedication while writing it .

There's humour , there's fluttering butterflies dancing in my stomach , while reading it .

I was the whole time grinning happily while reading it 😊

Khushi's awareness of all things specially about her handsome husband , her hilarious inner talks to herself & her weirdness laced with super cuteness is an delightful Treat to read On & on ❤️

How so beautifully you have Shown a blooming realtionship of a newly wed couple & The domesticity of their Home ❤️

There's a sense of Friendly comfort , a belonging & Care for each other in ARNAV KHUSHI'S realtionship. This is how Every arrange marriage should work .

Slowly but steadily , with Love , Trust & care holding for each other , their Rishta is blooming 🌸

KHUSHI & her ajeebness ( her ajeeb thoughts are so amusing 😄) & her being a Sankadevi , got a husband who is there to hold her , no matter what the situation is .

Afterall , I can sense ARNAV saying to KHUSHI - Hameshaa sambhaltaa Rahunga , no matter what happens my Ajeeb but cutee wife , I'm always there for you 💕

Both ARNAV & khushi are taking baby steps Towards each other & i seriously love the way you have progressed there Realtionship.

With KHUSHI Smiling involuntarily sleeping on her pillow , we can see Love has started to bloom 🌸 between them . A love laced with Trust & concern for each other 💕.

This OS 'BUT YOU KNOW, WHATEVER' & You Sauchehips di ..... Has my heart for Forever now 💕. Your way of Writing is Miridical & your way of Narrating the Story is Captivating di ✍🏻👏🏻

& Now , when I have experienced myself how Amazing , Brilliant Writer you are , I'm not going to miss anything coming from you di .

I'm going to keep an eye on you , if you post anything in future , Please do tell me , drop a pm , message or anything 🙏🏻. Please di 🙏🏻.

Now I'm off to read your Awesome Story

UNEXPECTEDLY EXPECTED , which I'm sure gonna be a Enjoyful read 😀

Sauchehips di , there's a humble request to you - Can we get another part of this Os or something else ?

No pressure at all . I understand Asli Duniya is very busy. You take your time . We all are always here waiting for you . But please 🙏🏻 when you have some free time then please do Write ✍🏻 more . A Story , a SS , OS , anything & set up your own blog . You are an BRILLIANT Writer di 👏🏻. & I'm so EXCITED 😀 & LOOKING FORWARD TO READ MORE OF YOUR WRITINGS/ STORIES 🤗.

THANKS SO SO MUCH DI 🙏🏻

LOVE YOU A LOT 😘💕

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very interesting story.Khushi hilarious as though .

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Hey! It's been a long time since you posted a new story...

As usual, enjoyed this story! Awakard interaction between newly weds has been written well!

Funny, crazy Khushi is always fun to read!

Please come back with more stories! Thanks for the PM

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