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coolie001

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: jyothirockz
So, Khushi's mom is Gargi, but who is the dad ? I hope it's Shashi. Does Khushi know that she was conceived by AI ? How it would affect the dynamics between the characters later ?

Well, the questions infinite, the answers will reveal with time!😆

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coolie001

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: chinnulu
Interesting Prologue
Nice start
Loved the introduction of the characters and mystery behind Khushi's birth.
Looking forward for the updates to start.
Thanks for the PM

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment😳

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SirenMitra

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

So Khushi's mom knew about the donor or she was just coming to share the mishap of the hospital?? Seems like Khushi doesn't know about her real mother or does she??...

Does Payal work for ASR??

Prologue is very interesting... Would love to continue...

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yizhihenanjing

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

wow, unique concept, it is interesting and I would love to read more to find out

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Labitha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#25

From the diary, it is obvious that Khushi's mother Gargi knows the father of her child and I think he is someone whom she knows well. Is that Shashi or is it someone else?

Looks like Garima comes to know about the truth after reading the diary only.

The sisters' banter was so cute. So Payal works at AR and Khushi is still studying.

I think you are very much in love with Frangipani, remember the same thoughts in Fragrance too.😉

So Akash, NK and Lavanya are Khushi's friends. Their group message was so cute, full of teasing and fun.😆

Arnav, as usual workaholic and Anjali, the caring sister.

Amazing start dear, a story with some secrets.👏 All the best for you for the contest too!👍🏼

Loved the title...quite catchy and intriguing!👏

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coolie001

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Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: labi
From the diary, it is obvious that Khushi's mother Gargi knows the father of her child and I think he is someone whom she knows well. Is that Shashi or is it someone else?
Looks like Garima comes to know about the truth after reading the diary only.
The sisters' banter was so cute. So Payal works at AR and Khushi is still studying.
I think you are very much in love with Frangipani, remember the same thoughts in Fragrance too.😉
So Akash, NK and Lavanya are Khushi's friends. Their group message was so cute, full of teasing and fun.😆
Arnav, as usual workaholic and Anjali, the caring sister.

Amazing start dear, a story with some secrets.👏 All the best for you for the contest too!👍🏼
Loved the title...quite catchy and intriguing!👏

Thank you so much🤗

Indeed, Frangipani, I fell in love! 😆 Yes, hidden secrets to be revealed. Thanks for the lovely comment and enjoy reading!😃

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
So Khushi's mom knew about the donor or she was just coming to share the mishap of the hospital?? Seems like Khushi doesn't know about her real mother or does she??...
Does Payal work for ASR??
Prologue is very interesting... Would love to continue...

Questions to be directed to the next chapters😆 Thanks a ton!

Edited by coolie001 - 6 years ago

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Siri007

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Amazing prologue! Very intriguing plot. Why do I get a feeling that it was shashi's sample and gargee wanted to tell her sister about it!? Can't wait for you to proceed with next chapters to reveal the figments!

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coolie001

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Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Siri007
Amazing prologue! Very intriguing plot. Why do I get a feeling that it was shashi's sample and gargee wanted to tell her sister about it!? Can't wait for you to proceed with next chapters to reveal the figments!

Well, yes! Next chapters fill in the details, I suppose. But thanks for the lovely comment! 😊