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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: varanasi
All d emotions r perfectly potrayed have to wait n see how every1 reacts to the reveleation

Thank you!! I hope you will enjoy my take on the revelation.

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Hi all,

I know I've been gone for a while now. And I'm really very sorry for the delay! It certainly wasn't my intention to space the updates to far apart in time. But life happens.

I will try my very best to update a little more regularly. At least once a week until I finish this story.

Again, I am extremely thankful to all the love and support I received for this ShortStory so far. I hope you guys continue to enjoy the direction of this one!

Thank you all once again!

Lots of love,

Pearl

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

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Savera84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Wonderful update. Anjali not believing Khushi over her husband makes sense, but not believing her own brother who is literally taking care of her as a father and who is looking out for her happiness as a younger brother, does not make sense.

Anjali is demanding Arnav to justify himself.

Looking forward to the part where they prove beyond doubt that Shyam is a cheater. If Shyam has something up his sleeve, Arnav and Khushi should have some too!

I am glad you updated. I was just thinking about it yesterday.

Cheers...

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tanu_15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Loved it yaaara

Waiting for next part

Continue soon n plzzz a long update

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anjs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Awesome chapter... Anjali showed her true self by asking proof from khushi and arnav. Would she had the same thing if shyam had accused khushi of the same deed.

Felt happy at how arnav supported and prioritized khushi and her health above everything.

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tinken

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Beautiful! I wanted to see this Arnav in the show.

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Doc-ere

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Lovely update bt try to update regularly bez sometimes we loose interest ... Looking forward for next chapter.

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ranogill

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

awesome update ...and i loved the way Arnav supported Khushi ...i loved that some body called doctor..in ippknd nobody bothered that Arnav was kidnapped

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asrcraze

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Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

This was around the time in the show when Anjali started to get a little annoying. No one actually expected her to believe everything without questions but she could have at least tried to hear them out? This was her chote after all!

You have raised and closed some very valid loops in these three chapters. I mean there are two people here who have clearly gone through a lot, obviously physically and more mentally and no one addressed that. Not even Anjali. But again by letting this rest, is Arnav giving the snake more time for more manipulation? Looking forward to reading more on how you take this forward.

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