ArHi FF: Retrouvaille (Based on Shyam's Revelation) | Ch5 Pg16 | 09-30 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Mrieshka

Yes original show had many loopholes and I am glad you are planning to write from this part onward. This was very well written depicting all the emotions and reactions expected from all members of the family. Yes the show was Ott. Arnav and Khushi and IPKKND are going to stay with us forever and I am so happy that you decided to write on them again after so many years. Will continue to follow this story.

On a separate note I literally cried when I read thousands miles first time and again every time I feel like reading. That is really heartbreaking story. Sometimes I don't even want to read and think about that story as it hurts me so much but you have written it so well that I also can not stop myself from reading that one

Originally posted by: TheGirlofRavens

Oh Pearl, welcome back to writing and to this forum. I think your return may have already made my day a little better.

I remember following Thousand Miles and loving it so much. I am so glad to see you starting a new story and on the track I haven't seen explored. I am excited to see how you will spin this particular tale.

Best wishes,

Raven

Originally posted by: dv19

first time reading your fiction. im book marking this and thousand miles based on another readers comments.

thanks

DV

Originally posted by: asrcraze

I opened this title because it was different and it read based on Shyam's revelation' and got me curious. Only when I was halfway through your note and read Achilles Heels', I actually scrolled back up to see the writer's name. It's always such a pleasure to see old writers come back to the forum :)

I will now go read the two chapters and get back.

Originally posted by: tanu_15

Update dear??????

Originally posted by: Savera84

@Bold: Good point.

If you think of it, everybody is obsessed with Dawai, but 'calling for a doctor' is the duty of Arnav. So, if Arnav himself needs one, who is going to bother?

Cheers...

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Amazing Start😊

You're an awesome writer😳

Please continue soon and pm me.