ArHi FF: Retrouvaille (Based on Shyam's Revelation) | Ch5 Pg16 | 09-30 - Page 4

i just hope you will do the justice to this track ...in Iapkknd it was too much concentration on Anjali, nobody care about Arnav or Khushi

first time reading your fiction. im book marking this and thousand miles based on another readers comments.

wow that was awesome. I can't wait to read your perspective of that scene.

Amazing Start😊

nice chapter n yes a dr is needed when tnere are injuries if only the tv raizadas knew but its ok now they know 👍🏼

Glad they didn't waste time in revealing Shyam. No point in skirting around the issue.

Love the first two chapters, brilliant.

Awesome story so far. I agree with you. I also wondered why they didn't go back and look for her bag at that house for the proof. Arnav also would have smelled like kerosene oil even though there was water in the container. What I also didn't understand was why Mami went to Anjali instead of asking Khushi first about why she was asking Shyam to divorce Anjali. They were working together until she got injured so why would they just cut off from each other without Khushi giving her updates on what is happening. Also the evidence hidden in the house was just put down too easily for anyone to take. It was as if a five year old or younger hid them. Waiting to read the rest.

I opened this title because it was different and it read based on Shyam's revelation' and got me curious. Only when I was halfway through your note and read Achilles Heels', I actually scrolled back up to see the writer's name. It's always such a pleasure to see old writers come back to the forum :)

I will now go read the two chapters and get back.