ArHi FF: Retrouvaille (Based on Shyam's Revelation) | Ch5 Pg16

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cocoamob

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Glad to see you are writing again!

I always felt that Khushi's efforts in saving Arnav were never fully appreciated by her family - it was all about Anjali after Shyam was kicked out.

Looking forward to see your impressions on this

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gurukhush

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Posted: 7 years ago

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What a wonderful update.. Great start to a chop-licking short story.. Please stay on the course with this one...Thanx👏👏

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Savera84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

I read your stories. I will be more than happy if you finish your unfinished stories.

But, I will be with you on this story all the way. Nice to read another version of truth revelation. In this case truth revelation to the family.

The beginning was good. You may not have written in a long time. But, your skills cannot be rusted.

Looking forward to the next chapter already.

Cheers...

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tanu_15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Lovely update

Waiting for more

Continue soon dear

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coderlady

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Glad Khushi did not wait around to tell him all.

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anjs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

wow, you have always been an awesome writer, so naturally its good to see you write on Arshi again

Chapter 1 is fabulous, can't wait to read more... Arnav trusting Khushi without proof is something we always wanted, interesting to see how they handle the situation from here onwards

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Nilima2016

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Interesting FF...even I was not happy with the track 😔

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luvumjht

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Very interesting. Plz pm me

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Arshi67
How lovely to read a story written by you again!

Arnav's kidnapping, in fact all events leading up to it, would fundamentally change something in a person. It makes you reevaluate who and what you are. Your hidden strengths surprise, but sometimes your weaknesses surprise you even more.

I'm looking forward to reading you explore their relationship.

I don't know why - it all sounds very obvious now that I think about it - but when you said that hidden strengths and the weaknesses surprise you, it struck a chord in me. I think this line is going to stay with me for a long long time...

I hope you will enjoy Arnav and Khushi's journey in this story...

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: anjs
wow, you have always been an awesome writer, so naturally its good to see you write on Arshi again

Chapter 1 is fabulous, can't wait to read more... Arnav trusting Khushi without proof is something we always wanted, interesting to see how they handle the situation from here onwards

Thank you!!

I'm sure it bothered a lot of people that Arnav did not believe her until she died. I don't necessarily think that's true. I think he struggled with a mind-versus-heart battle for the longest time... But trust didn't come naturally to Arnav, anyway... In a way, I think he trusted her without proof. Albeit a little later than we wanted to... Can we blame him though?

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