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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Wooow hang on there now this is a big big twist I didn't expect this to come out this good
Indeed the next update like ahahhahahah

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#232

If her words about his actions are hurting him this much then he should realise the extend of her broken heart..I think by now he realizes his own faults..everything has a limit..her suppressed emotions reached its limit to hide..I hope he won't do anything further which will create more distance btw them in this bad situation

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Awesome update

WOW! When their relatrionship started to come on track, the DNA report blew a bomb.

I hope Arnav will act like true ASR to safeguard Khushi and their marriage.

looking forward to read more

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rekhavats

@rekhavats

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#234

beautifully written
eager to read the next part

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Hats off to you...for writing this part so perfectly.

Loved every word...the way you have portrait khushi's character in this story is awesome. Every women should be this strong. And it is only a women who can also be humble at the same time.

Waiting for the next part...to see what arnav will do next.

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Dawn

@dawnkkay

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Arshi Fiction Fans

Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Wonderful, absolutely love the little poems that flow int the story 👏👏

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roopathomas

@roopathomas

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#237

loved the update. N such a heartfelt conversation... Wish they had such a part in the serial. Thank u for the quick updates...

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: roopathomas
loved the update. N such a heartfelt conversation... Wish they had such a part in the serial. Thank u for the quick updates...

You are most welcome dear 😊

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1029751

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Okay!!! This is not done! Positive!!! Seriously!!! POSITIVE!!! hell!!! I hate you Sheetal Kapoor... I hate you 😡

My poor Khushi! I loved that she opened herself in front of Arnav and made him see the harsh reality. Glad that Arnav finally knows how Khushi would have felt when he had so easily and cruelly broken Khushi's dreams and smashed her happiness.

I just want my old Khushi sanki wali back. I can't see her so sad and broken. I just hope tomorrow morning doesn't bring any drama from Sheetal in Khushi's life.. Didu pls pls pls update soon

Plsss. I can't wait

Love,

Yours,

Munchkin

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Chapter 2

She paused deliberately to make sure Arnav was all attentive, and when she was confirmed of it, she added...

This little but important nuances about Khushi (as she is channeling ASR) is astonishing. She is calculative and apt in how she wants to let others know what she is going through. Heck, she is turning out be a better ASR!

"When I had shouted and begged you to believe me that I had nothing to do with Shyam Ji, did you believe me?"

This right here is the crux of Khushi/Arnav. She was always deprived of giving it back in tenfolds and Arnav is oblivious to all this. Hei s too busy trying to figure out what is the root cause of Khushi acting this way! Well Mr. Arnav, if you look carefully, you paved the path for this with your shatir dimag. And, this is what a woman looks/feels like when she is on a path to annihilate all the ill-feelings associated with her love for you.

You, my dear, end the chapter with a very apt quatrain.

Chapter 3

Yes, she had no idea about the fashion world but then she had nothing to fear when her husband was rightly known as the ace of this industry and he was always going to help her with anything and everything in this process.

He does it again! Assuming that she will be appeased by him pushing her into a venture that is unknown to her since he is guiding it, its all good! No, its not good because you are not asking her what she wants to do. Do you want heighten her insecurities (i.e. since she has no idea about the fashion world) by putting her through this process? NO

The lady lamented, genuinely guilty for unknowingly hurting the sentiments of her beloved Khushi bitiya. And now she held all the more resentment for Sheetal.

They dont get it, do they? Just by deflecting the blame on Sheetal does not absolve them of their mistakes. Sheetal was just a pitch for them to display their innate nature to SPEAK WITHOUT THINKING. So careless with words. Sigh.

Perhaps the change wasn't in just Khushi alone, it was in him too.

Ahh, I see you what you did there. Trying to ensure Arnav realizes that change is both ways. Its just he never acknowledged it before.

Chapter 4

"... and they would get their happy go lucky Khushi back."

Why is that Khushi can't be this mature Khushi and 'happy go lucky' Khushi together? What part of it did you not like? Was it because she handed you a mirror as said, 'Look at yourself!" A woman can have various roles; its the environment around her that determines what avatar is on display!

I love love your poems! It definitely adds the 'umph', the sass into a story that is guided by the beautiful words you pen down for each chapter.

Edited by AllSmiles86 - 9 years ago