COMPLETE|ArShi SS:If I Were You Just For A Day (Sheetal Track)| - Page 25

Originally posted by: asha_mehta

Hats off to you...for writing this part so perfectly.

Loved every word...the way you have portrait khushi's character in this story is awesome. Every women should be this strong. And it is only a women who can also be humble at the same time.

Waiting for the next part...to see what arnav will do next.

Originally posted by: AllSmiles86

Chapter 2

She paused deliberately to make sure Arnav was all attentive, and when she was confirmed of it, she added...

This little but important nuances about Khushi (as she is channeling ASR) is astonishing. She is calculative and apt in how she wants to let others know what she is going through. Heck, she is turning out be a better ASR!

"When I had shouted and begged you to believe me that I had nothing to do with Shyam Ji, did you believe me?"

This right here is the crux of Khushi/Arnav. She was always deprived of giving it back in tenfolds and Arnav is oblivious to all this. Hei s too busy trying to figure out what is the root cause of Khushi acting this way! Well Mr. Arnav, if you look carefully, you paved the path for this with your shatir dimag. And, this is what a woman looks/feels like when she is on a path to annihilate all the ill-feelings associated with her love for you. You, my dear, end the chapter with a very apt quatrain.

Chapter 3

Yes, she had no idea about the fashion world but then she had nothing to fear when her husband was rightly known as the ace of this industry and he was always going to help her with anything and everything in this process.

He does it again! Assuming that she will be appeased by him pushing her into a venture that is unknown to her since he is guiding it, its all good! No, its not good because you are not asking her what she wants to do. Do you want heighten her insecurities (i.e. since she has no idea about the fashion world) by putting her through this process? NO

The lady lamented, genuinely guilty for unknowingly hurting the sentiments of her beloved Khushi bitiya. And now she held all the more resentment for Sheetal.

They dont get it, do they? Just by deflecting the blame on Sheetal does not absolve them of their mistakes. Sheetal was just a pitch for them to display their innate nature to SPEAK WITHOUT THINKING. So careless with words. Sigh.

Perhaps the change wasn't in just Khushi alone, it was in him too.

Ahh, I see you what you did there. Trying to ensure Arnav realizes that change is both ways. Its just he has never acknowledged it before.

Chapter 4

"... and they would get their happy go lucky Khushi back."

Why is that Khushi can't be this mature Khushi and 'happy go lucky' Khushi together? What part of did you not like? Was it because she handed you a mirror as said, 'Look at yourself!" A woman can have various roles; its the environment around her that determines what avatar is on display!

I love love your poems! It definitely adds the 'umph', the sass into a story that is guideds by the beautiful words you pen down for each chapter.

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Okay!!! This is not done! Positive!!! Seriously!!! POSITIVE!!! hell!!! I hate you Sheetal Kapoor... I hate you 😡

My poor Khushi! I loved that she opened herself in front of Arnav and made him see the harsh reality. Glad that Arnav finally knows how Khushi would have felt when he had so easily and cruelly broken Khushi's dreams and smashed her happiness.

I just want my old Khushi sanki wali back. I can't see her so sad and broken. I just hope tomorrow morning doesn't bring any drama from Sheetal in Khushi's life.. Didu pls pls pls update soon

Plsss. I can't wait

Love,

Yours,

Munchkin

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR

waiting for next chapter simii

wen r u updating 😃 ??

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Today!😉😆

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR

tick tick 2 😆

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

ye le suchi