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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

truly deserved wonderful story...the emotions u carried very nice...

congratulations...

cheers.

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Kalhara

@Kalhara

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Congratulations..

Touching one shot..

And very well written..

This story reminds me of our very own Lalettan's movie Kalipaattam..

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

beautiful story! no words to describe just how wonderfully and poignantly you showed their emotions. the time when mili was struggling and then surrendering herself to the hands of death..it was brilliant where just in a few lines you nailed it how it might feel to die to someone so young. just feeling sad for arnav, he lost his blood, the only person related to him and his beloved. but in the end he had khushi to protect him, the person chosen by his daughter.

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Congrats for the award

Emotional OS

Loved it.

Thanks

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deblina

@maitydeblina

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Thanks for the lovely update:)

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-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Wonderfull nd emotional shot

congratulations dear..

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Congratulations lovie!!! You deserve it, this was a lovely story.

I was so close to crying!!! You had me fooled for a few seconds, thinking her mom was Khushi.

Milli brought Arnav and Khushi together, because of her Arnav has someone again in this lonely world. His Khushi... the only way to live, love and be loved again.

This is so heartbreaking, yet it gives you hope.

Edited by sarita_barun - 9 years ago

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

J! Many many many congratulations! ❤️

Mili Singh Raizada had such a beautiful heart. To be able to think of another's future happiness while grappling with your own pain, is not in the realm of many.

But, what was the most poignant of all, was your writing of her last minutes. Incredibly moving J. I could visualise her life ebbing away as she grappled with the fear of the unknown and the desire to remain safe in the arms of the known.

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

that was awesome

so touchy

u got me crying girl

crying like a baby

grt one👍🏼

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Why so sad re?!!!😭😭😭😭😭
We have so many things and yet we crib and then there are people who are fighting battles daily and yet keep smiling and are so giving. It made me realise how selfish I am. I wish Mili was alive to live life some more, to create some more memories with her family, to listen to some new songs, to witness some more sunrise and sunsets; in short to experience her life more. But not all wishes are fulfilled but I'm happy her one wish to find someone for her father got fulfilled.
Congratulations.. It's truly well deserved. So happy for you girl!!! J🤗