OS: Ocean's Child! *Winner*

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Congratulations!!!! Yet another feather in your cap! This is so well deserved and how did you make me cry?! Me of all people! This was so damn good.. as much as I know your crazy side and got acquainted with it, I know how emotional and senti you are, as minty told. So I can see you in your words and the way you have written this OS, was brilliant and downright extraordinary. Ocean's child, what a delightful name! Mili, Mayuri, Khushi,and Arnav. I could feel your characters and their pain. I am so in awe of your chechi! Take a now and here is my kiss :*

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Congrats dear..
Amazing OS..
Thanks for PM

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Congratulation J :) i am so happy for you dear..!! That shot is way too beautiful ❤️

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Congrats 🥳

Thanks for this fabulous & emotional OS😭

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Very heart touching story. ..it's sad that MilI dies but I guess this is life, we can't always hold our love ones close to us... gosh it's so lovely I almost had tears.

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

So devastatingly beautiful. A true tear fest. I am really at a loss ki kya boloon ab...so so sad. The lovely Mili, why did she have to succumb in the end...while this might be harsh reality, she was too much of an angel to have her disappear like that...although every story we read here has an Arnav and Khushi as the main protagonists, this one has the lovely child. Her spirit of caring and her unique focus on her dad - her anxiety on leaving him behind - these emotions echo through our mind long after she has gone and the final lines have been read. Congratulations on winning. What an awesome story. Poignant but perfect in its own way! 👏❤️

Hugs,

Anu