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Posted: 9 years ago
This story according to me is not a redemption track. Through this tale you are trying to fill in the differences between Khushi and Arnav which had always been there between them. She is 12th standard pass undergraduate. Where as Arnav been a business school in Harvard. It's not possible for him to understand the insecurities of a 19 year old girl who loves him inspite of all that he has done to her. And same for KhushI, she can't understand the requirements of workplace. Maybe, Arnav was wrong to stay back till 4 pm. But he had to attend the celebration for AR, he is the CEO.
All that Arnav and KhushI had ever shared was a bit of affection, a bit of humor and more of physical love. There is no understanding, no trust, no respect and no kindness to forgive and let go petty issues especially in Arnav. KhushI has had enough, she didn't leave him because of the above things. She left him, because he said he didn't want the marriage in first place. Is it fair that KhushI makes Arnav a centre of her universe and for him KhushI is just another trophy that he has conquered. Arnav has himself felt KhushI is losing herself in the process of keeping them tied, but he hasn't done anything to make it easier or better for her. Hope, he understands not just what he has lost, but also what she has lost in her efforts to keep them together.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enlightenme

This story according to me is not a redemption track. Through this tale you are trying to fill in the differences between Khushi and Arnav which had always been there between them. She is 12th standard pass undergraduate. Where as Arnav been a business school in Harvard. It's not possible for him to understand the insecurities of a 19 year old girl who loves him inspite of all that he has done to her. And same for KhushI, she can't understand the requirements of workplace. Maybe, Arnav was wrong to stay back till 4 pm. But he had to attend the celebration for AR, he is the CEO.

All that Arnav and KhushI had ever shared was a bit of affection, a bit of humor and more of physical love. There is no understanding, no trust, no respect and no kindness to forgive and let go petty issues especially in Arnav. KhushI has had enough, she didn't leave him because of the above things. She left him, because he said he didn't want the marriage in first place. Is it fair that KhushI makes Arnav a centre of her universe and for him KhushI is just another trophy that he has conquered. Arnav has himself felt KhushI is losing herself in the process of keeping them tied, but he hasn't done anything to make it easier or better for her. Hope, he understands not just what he has lost, but also what she has lost in her efforts to keep them together.


*4 am
thanks a ton for wonderful comment, will reply in detail later
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just read all the chapters... loved them..!!! 👏 👏
Such an amazing concept..!!! cant wait to read more...
pls PM me when you update...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gosh..
Such an amazing story..
It left me spell bound...
Very very very intense...
U r god gifted writer...
I can't explain my feelings now..
I can feel every word u wrote..
I can feel myself shudder..n cry...n flinch..with what's happening in the story...
Arghh..
I feel words are not enough to explain what I am feeling now...
What have u done to me..
I am too overwhelmed...
Thanx for such a masterpiece...
Hope to get pm for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
No coherent words of mine can ever describe my feelings after reading these magnificent chapters. This fiction is metaphorical to the finest piece of masterpieces that are carved with utmost delicacy on a pristine marble, ones that worth a million.
How I wish to have visualized something akin in the show. But I'm glad to have come across this for the precision with which you've moulded the words to frame the story I could literally imagine everything happening infront of me.
Right now I'm awe-inspired. You've highlighted even the negligible speck of emotion that we often forsee with such beauty that I couldn't help but sympathize even with Akash, Anjali and Arnav altogether.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Do update soonish!
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Posted: 9 years ago
read 6 ch in one go pl update soon
very interesting story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just came across ur FF today and I read all the chapters in one go. I have never read any FF written from this view point. Looking forward to reading further updates. Plz Pm me for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Marvelous update
highpoints were sheetal's exposure,anjali adopting aarav,aman-anjali relationshjp,payal's pov,arnav's realisation of misjudging khushi and other people and khushi's decision to be a little more strong
Overall beautifully written.loved it
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved chap 6...will b waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all in one go!!!! Soo saddd yet so beautifully written!!

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