Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#291

Awesome and thanks for really long chapter.

I loved the conversation between Anjali and Arnav. I really appreciate the way Khushi is thinking about her and Arnav's relationship.

Very emotional conversation between Payal and Khushi.

So, Sheetal is out...

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dair10arshi

@dair10arshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

Thank you sooo much for such a long and beautiful update??? Loved how ended each of their soliloquy with the ipkknd lines! Can't wait to find out what Khushi does next! Thank god Arnav kicked Sheetal out! And how serious is the something cooking between anjali and Aman?? can't wait to read about aakash.. I wanna know his perspective and how he repents now! Although Arnav's repentance tops it all. Hope that he pacifies In Arnav style and not ASR style. Loved the update!!! Would love more such to come.

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

Awesome update glad Sheetal is out

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tashi26

@tashi26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#294

Loved the story so far...you are a wonderful writer

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Fab update. I am sure after kicking sheetal out, Arnav will move heaven and earth to bring his wife with all the respect and dignity she deserves. Agreed, Arnav was an idiot before but now since he has acknowledged his mistake, khushi should give him another chance to redeem himself. I know khushi's heart is bruised and she is feeling at the lowest point of her life but she needs to work on her marriage as well as Arnav. If Arnav apologises then she should give him another chance because making a marriage work is a very hard job.

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sonali

@Sonalikarhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#296

loved the update...arnav is getting what he deserves ...but at last make khushi forgive arnav...

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sonali mehla

@dhakad_chori

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Posted: 9 years ago

#297

This story is amazing . :) read all in one go :) excellent

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Aanchal

@aanchu19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#298

Fabulous

Loved it

You picked up every small detail of each character, worked upon their nature and presented here. I love Payal's confession to Khushi. We never got to see this on serial about Payal feel when Manorama behaved badly with her; when she expects Akash to support her, to love her, I love how Khushi despite of everything misses Arnav and wants to feel his presence through the pillow he used.

You describe each character's feeling very beautifully.

Hope to read more soon.

Take care

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#299

Very brilliantly written !!

Could feel each n every emotion Arnav , Anjali , Khushi n Payal went through...The delicate thread of relationships , hope it turns out to be strong once more..

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Syeda Buraira

@cj-the-fool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#300

i logged onto IF after a long time and was pleasantly surprised by ur PM... u r too kind sweetheart...u r doing us lesser mortal beings a huge favour by sharing this beautiful story of urs...and now u r PMing too...u r way too kind...i absolutely loved this update...u have way with words...ur writing is just terrific...i can connect with each character so thoroughly...it feels as if i, myself, am going through the tragedies and feeling those emotions...ur story is a way for me to find out what IPKKND could have been and should have been...this is the mature and realistic IPKKND...

honey i read ur reply...u were thanking me for commenting...oh i believe this is the least i can do...my comments r subpar at best...ur story deserves better comments...wish i could write those analytical lengthy smart comments...but unfortunately i am not proficient in english..there are so many nuances of ur story that i enjoyed...

so many beautiful aspects...but i must say one thing...arnav must let go of the idea that khushi is perfect..less faulty sure but definitely not infallible...khushi is also a human and prone to make mistakes...i was this discussing ur story with my elder cousin...she kept on telling me to look at things from arnavs perspective...she gave a whole new dimension to my thoughts...i being a total idealistic dummy was thinking...that if i ever get stuck into a relationship where i feel inadequate, unwanted or burden-yyy...then i would walk out..just like khushi did...but my cousin made me understand arnavs plight and his point of view...till that point i was completely on khushis side...(team khushi all the way) but after having a convo with my cuz...i started feeling for both of them...arnav and khushi both are at fault...one more than the other...but both ARE...

i loved khussi and payaliya convo...and kept on thinking grass is always greener on the other side...

loved what u did with aarav...anjali as aaravs mom is the best thing ever...CVs messed up big time on the show...but again thats y v hav such mature and brilliant fan fiction writers like u...to clean up their messes...

thanks once again for sharing this brilliant piece of writing...i wish i cud express myself better...but words r escaping me now...when i am reading the chapter i have so many things to say...but later when i start typing i forget most of the things,,,sigh!!!!! take care and loads of respect