Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#511

Read the story in one go. Superb writing. Loved it.

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jjsinghraizada

@jjsinghraizada

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#512

I don't even know how to describe how wonderfully written this story is. i felt every emotion the only thing that bumbed me out was that there weren't any translation for the hindi dialogs. So I felt as if I was missing an important part of the journey so please in future can you translate for those of your fans who don't speak hindi? Aside from that I'm just floored with how magnificent your story is I really enjoyed your take on Arnav's and Khushi's love story. Please write more stories, you have a gift for writing.

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CIDWatcher

@CIDWatcher

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#513

So glad you had touched upon this topic. Physical intimacy vs soul connection

ASR was drawn towards Khusi because of her rare beauty. And Sometimes it is shown initially that he does not respect her, though loves her deeply. And the first suhagraat is just that.

The way you have pinned down your thought from Arnav and Khusi's point of view is just so marvellous.

I seriously wish this to become a show.

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#514

Fantabulous story with unique family tree and twists👏
You touched our souls with heart touching story penned like beautiful poetry⭐️ ❤️
True to the title of the story every character here was flawed and you described every character and it's characteristics very marvellously whether it is about Arnav and Khushi or Akash and Payal or Anjali or Sashi and Garima or Mama and Mami or even Arnav's parents.
Arnav and Khushi are both flawed in their own ways but they are perfect and complete when they are together.
Loved how Arnav and Khushi finally understood that they both are wrong in their love and married life and I delighted that at the end you brought them together.
Loved how Arnav said "Arnav or ASR is nothing without his Khushi"
and how Khushi said "She is at home" placing her hand on Arnav's heart
Loved these lines which you told full journey of Arnav and Khushi in these lines👏

He was restless without her... She was anxious without him... Always... Even though they fough with each other, hated, loved, married they always thought about each other and they longed foe each other with their own flaws
We will take our baby steps...one at a time... but step forward...this how they will make their marriage work even with their individual flaws.

Thankyou for writing this magical ARSHI story🤗

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#515

My dearest friends,

I can't tell you what a great journey it has been in reading your stories and having you all read mine. In fact, today my writing has become slightly decent only because of your honest feedback and unlimited love!

But unfortunately I won't be able to write in IF anymore because I'm finding it exceedingly difficult to handle blog, IF and wattpad. Therefore I'm shutting down my blog and discontinuing my works in IF - but don't worry, if you've loved any of work - it's available on Wattpad under (JappaSatya). If you're an Arjun or Reporters fan - those works might actually come out a bit later than intended.

Don't you worry, this isn't a Wattpad ad - this is just where I'm available right now. I love all of you guys and I love IF, I'm glad I got to know you all.

Sincerely,

IArmageddonI